高三英语一轮复习应用文写作之活动报道（劳动最光荣）课件

WorkingIsMostBeautiful命题背景书面表达（满分25分）文章类型

作者身份写作对象写作背景写作目的时态和人称要点文章结构介绍性短文学生全校学生参加了社区劳动分享劳动过程，感悟过程：

过去

目的意义：现在

人称1目的（1）+引入活动+过渡（1）+过程（2）+意义（3）较略+详+较略1.自然段前缩进的格式不对或者打“×”分段;2.时态混用;3.每个自然段详略安排不当，有些第2段有10行，有些首段5行，剩下2行，头重脚轻。活动过程一句话等;4.依然忘不了李华;5.大量词、句错误，3500词上的短语会用一部分，但没有组织正确。SomeExistingProblems劳动话题词汇voluntarylabor

servethepeople

heartandsoul

physicallabormentallaborlaborviewpointLaborDay/workdaymeansoflabor

honorable/gloriousbedevotedtovalueearnmoneypersonalinterestsWorkingIsMostBeautifulpurposeprocesssignificance1.raiseourawarenessoflovinglabour2.enchancesocialresponsibility3.developpracticalskills4.promoteall-rounddevelopmentofss5.getahands-onexperienceofworking6.advocatethespiritofsocialservice1.makelifebeautifulandmeaningful2.asenseoffulfillment/achievement3.inspireustoserveourcountry/peopleheartandsoul4.feelhonorable/improveworkingskills5.developgoodpersonalquality6.respecttheworkingpeopleandworkingfruits......WordsForReference1.提倡2.志愿的/志愿（者）3.社区4.承担5.分组6.花坛除草7.刷墙8.擦窗户9.拖地10.擦桌椅11.倒垃圾12.老年人/残疾人14.高度评价16.意义重大18.为…做贡献19.受益20.全心全意为…服务21.一方面，另一方面22.增强…意识23.如果…,那就太好了15.过程13.做做维修17.没有付出就没有收获WordsForReference1.提倡2.志愿的/志愿（者）3.社区4.承担5.分组6.花坛除草7.刷墙8.擦窗户advocate/callforvoluntary(work/contribution)/volunteerundertake/takeondivide…into/groupweedtheflowerbedspaintthewallsclean/wipethewindowsWordsForReferencemopthefloorwipethedesksandchairsempty/takeoutthetrash/rubbishtheelderly/disableddosomerepairsthink/speakhighlyof9.拖地10.擦桌椅11.倒垃圾12.老年人/残疾人13.做维修14.高度评价15.过程course/processWordsForReferencebe

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serve…heartandsoulononehand,ontheotherhandenhance/raiseourawarenessof16.意义重大17.没有付出就没有收获18.为…做贡献19.受益20.全心全意为…服务21.一方面，另一方面22.增强…意识Aimingtoraiseourawarenessofworkingandbuildupourbody,allthestudentstookpartinavoluntaryactivitywhosethemewas“WorkingIsMostBeautiful”inGuangmingCommunitylastWednesday,

whichwasheldbyourschool.Withtheaimofprovidingmoreopportunitiesforstudentstobeinvolvedindailyworkandallowingthemtogetahands-onexperience,ourschoolheldavoluntaryactivitythemed

“WorkingIsMostBeautiful”inGuangmingCommunitylastWednesday.Toadvocatethespiritofsocialserviceandvoluntarycontribution,ourschoolorganizedallthestudentstodovoluntaryworkinGuangmingCommunitylastWednesday.PurposesWorkingProcessOnthatday,weexperiencedasequenceofinterestingandmeaningfulvoluntaryactivities.

Tobeginwith,weweredividedintoseveralgroupstosweeptheroads,waterthetreesandflowersandplantmoretreestoeasegreenhouseeffect.Ontopofthat,wepickedupplasticbagsandthrewthemintobins,which

wasfavorabletoenvironmentalprotection.Eventually,wecamebacktoschoolatdusk,exhaustedbutpride.WorkingProcessAfteraday’swork,weallfelttiredbuthappyandIhavelearntalotfromit.Themostimportantisthatworkingmakesourlifefullandmeaningful.Afterawholeday’swork,tiredaswewere,wefeltagreatsenseoffulfillmentthatwehadneverownedbefore.Becauseofourefforts,wecouldmakeadifferenceinsomeone’slife.Weareproudofourselves!Inthecourseofvoluntarywork,westudentsexperiencedmuc