读后续写讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习

《读后续写专题练》李雨旅

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4»与所给短文副治度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理

第五档，♦内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语（对于给出关键词的地区）

（21-25分）<,所使用语法结构和词汇丰富准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达

<►有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑

•与所给短文副洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理

第酯•内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语（对于给出关键词的地区）

（15*20分）•所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富准确，可能有些用肯误，但不影响意义表达

•比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑

•与瞄短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接

第三档•写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个舛短文中标出的关键词语（对于给出关键词的地区）

（11-15分）•所使用的语;描构和i司汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不飘向意义表达

•使用了简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯

•与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接

第二档•写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语（对播出关键词的地区）

（640分）•语法结构单调，词汇有限，有T语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响意义表达

•较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性

•与解短文,听头语的衔接较差

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弟一档•产出内容太少很少使用矩文中标出的关键词语（对于给出关键词的地区）

（1・5分）•语;曲构单调，词汇有限将逐语法结构和词汇^面的镯吴，严重影响了意义表达

•缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文阳不连贯

0分白卷、内容太少无法手惭或续写内容与所提供的内密无关

1.运用句式结构，锦上添花

句式分词短语作状语

Havinqsleptsopoorlv,Lucywasnotreadyforthedayatall.Lucy没

有睡好觉，根本没有准备好迎接这一天。

句式2：形容词（短语）作状语

Excitedandmoved,hefollowedthesoundandwentoutforhelp.他

又激动又感动，顺着声音出去求助。

ith复合结构

Thehousecaughtfirelastnight,withnothinaleftinit.那座房子昨晚着

火了，里面什么。

独立主格结构

Theboyrushedtotheoldman'shouse,hisfacecoveredwithsweat.

男孩冲到那位老人的家,满脸是汗。

句式5：|强调句

Itwasthewholesituationthatmadeherverydepressedandupset.

正是整个情况让她感到非常沮丧和失望。

倒装句

Coldandtiredthoughwewere,thekids'smilingfacescheeredusup.

虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。

虚拟语气

Fivefeettotheright,hewouldhavefallendowntothebottomofthe

hole.往右五英尺，他就会掉到洞底。

2.妙用修辞，追求卓越

修辞1：比喻

Itwasaveryhotdayandthesandswereglitteringlikeqoldinthe

desert.

修辞2：拟人

ThebrightsunliqhtbeaaedMiatoopenherevesandshelovedthe

daywhenherbirthdaytookplace.

修辞3：夸张

Despitethecold,hewassweatingfromcarryingamountain

ofcardboardintothebackyard.

3.名言谚语，升华主题

1.Youarenevertoooldtosetanothergoalortodreamanew

dream.-C.S.Lewis

（你永远不会太老去定下另一个目标或梦想一个新梦。-C.S.路易斯）

2.Believeyoucanandyou'rehalfwaythere.-Theodore

Roosevelt

（相信你能，你的成功已经有一半了。-西奥多•罗斯福）

3.Apersonwhonevermadeamistakenevertriedanythingnew.-

AlbertEinstein

（从未犯错误的人从来没尝试过任何新事物。-阿尔伯特•爱因斯坦）

4.Successisnotfinal,failureisnotfatal:Itisthecourageto

continuethatcounts.-WinstonChurchill

（成功并非最终，失败并不致命：重要的是继续下去的勇气。-温斯

顿・丘吉尔）

5.Yourtimeislimited,don'twasteitlivingsomeoneelse'slife.-

SteveJobs

（你的时间有限，不要浪费它，过别人的生活。-史蒂夫•乔布斯）

6.Don'twait.Thetimewillneverbejustright.-NapoleonHill

（不要等待。时机永远不会恰到好处。-拿破仑•希尔）

7.Theonlywaytodogreatworkistolovewhatyoudo.-Steve

Jobs

（做出伟大成就的唯一途径是热爱你所做的事情。-史蒂夫•乔布斯）

8.Strivenottobeasuccess,butrathertobeofvalue.-Albert

Einstein

（不要力求成功，而是力求有价值。-阿尔伯特•爱因斯坦）

9.Ifyouwanttoliveahappylife,tieittoagoal,nottopeopleor

things.-AlbertEinstein

（如果你想过幸福的生活，把它与目标联系起来，而不是与人或物。-阿

尔伯特•爱因斯坦）

10.Youcan'tbuildareputationonwhatyouaregoingtodo.-

HenryFord

演练Passagel：

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnic

blanket.Andy*sfingertracedthelinesonablankUnitedStatesmap,eachstate

representedbyanumber.Hewhisperedtohimself,"NewJerseyiseating

Pennsylvania,andOhioisachickennugget/1Besidehimlayanotherpaperwith

numbers1-50writtendown.Despite20minutesofintenseconcentration,allAndy

hadtoshowforhiseffortswerethosenumbers.

"OK,andUtahisthewashingmachine.No,Montanaisthewashing

machine.OrNorthDakota?Gah!They'reallwashingmachines!"Andy

wascaughtinhisconfusion.

Thiswasn'tthefirsttimehismemoryhadfailedhimduringatest.

Nomatterhowhardhestudied,nothingseemedtostayinhisbrainfor

long.Hehadtriedmemorytricks,evenspendingnightsexaminingan

oldpapermapinhisbedroom.Ithadgivenhimaglimmerofhope,but

nowthathopefeltdistant.

Thetimewasup,andMr.Cranebegancollectingtheanswersheets.

Andyquicklystuffedhisblanktestintothepile,wantingtoforget

aboutit.Unfortunately,hisbrainseemedtorememberonlythethings

itshouldforget.Duringlunch,Andystaredatamap,frustratedthathe

hadhandedinablanksheetofpaper.

Andy'sfriendAaronshrugged."Youonlyneeda70topass.*'

"Yeah,wellit'shardtogeta70whenyouhandinablanksheetof

paper,"Andymumbled,frowning.

Aaronpoppedagrapeintohismouth."Well,Mr.Cranewillletyou

retake（补考）ittomorrow."

AndywastheonlyonestandingatMr.Crane'sdeskafterschool.

Heapologizedquickly,headdrooping.Butinsteadofscoldinghim,Mr.

Cranepattedhisshoulder,saying,nIthinkyouaretrying,butyou

mightlearnbetterbybeingactive.Justpracticemore!n

AndylookedintoMr.Crane'seyes,findingcomfortintheteacher's

understandinggaze.Mr.CraneinvitedAndytohelphimorganizea

pileofmagnets（磁铁），eachwiththenameofastateonit.Onthewall

hungalargemagneticmap-partofareviewgametheclasshadbeen

playing.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

AsAndyarrangedthemagnets,anideasuddenlycameintohismind.

Whendoinghomework,Andywastoldhescoredan88ontheretake.

冲突矛盾：

1.Memoryfailedhimduringtestagainwhileheneeda70topass

theexam.

2.Theonlyonetoretake.

演练Passage!：

Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.

NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecently

becauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowas

settledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullof

mytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,

decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.Myspace,myoldlife,

wasgone.

“Hereweare!”Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourand

sweetsmellwashingoverme.MyauntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowers

forMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassoovercome

withtirednessandenvy.Whybothertobringthemflowerswhenthey

wereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?

SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers."Yourmumtoldme

therehasn'tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou."Notmuch,

sinceRosathealarmclockwasinstalled（安装）Icomplainedwitha

hugeyawn（哈欠）.

“Irememberhavingtocreep（蹑手蹑脚地走）aroundlikea

worn-outmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonths

hatinghersomuch.”"ButyouandMumseemsoclose,“Isaid,guiltily

hidingawaymyenvyofRosa.

“Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbig

sister.Fewflowersblossom（绽放）overnight,youknow."Shepulled

meinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakea

walkoutside.

Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.

Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslike

gatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI'dsitwithDad,

makingflowerchains,crowning（授子）eachotherwiththesilliest

titles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.

TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa'sbaby

room.Wassheawake?Iwondered.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相

应位置作答。

1.SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

2.Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnic

blanket.

Passagel参考答案：

AsAndyarrangedthemagnets,anideasuddenlycametohismind.He

placedUtahcorrectlyandthenproceededtofixNewJerseyand

Pennsylvania.Asurgeofconfidencewashedoverhimashelookedat

themap.Inspired,heslappedtheMontanamagnetinplace,declaringit

asanoldmanwithabeard.Thewordsflowedeffortlesslyfromhis

mind,eachstatetakingonauniqueidentity.Mr.crane,whohad

quietlyobservedAndy'sprogress,praisedhimforcombiningmemory

trickswiththephysicalactofmovingpiecesaroundtheboard.

EncouragedbyMr.crane,Andypracticedagain.Thistime,everything

seemedtostickinhisbrain.Thenhetooktheretakethenextday.

Feelingmorepreparedthanever,hefinishedthetestsoon.

whendoinghomework,Andywastoldhescoredan88onthe

retake.!Mouthwidened,andforamoment,hecouldn'tfindthewords

toexpresshisemotions.Agrinspreadacrosshisface,stretchingfrom

eartoear.Hehaddoneit!Thehardworkandpersistencehadpaidoff.

Then,foralongtime,thewholeclasswasfilledwithhisear-splitting

criesandhisclassmates,cheers,whoopsandapplausecongratulating

himonhisincrediblepass.Andycouldn'twaittoexpresshisthanksto

Mr.craneforhissupportandguidance.Ashewalkedoutofthe

classroom,aweightseemedtohaveliftedoffhisshoulders.Thesun

shonebrighter,andhenoticedthevibrantcolorsoftheworldaround

him.Theoncedauntingroadaheadnowseemedfilledwithendless

possibilities.Andy'sconfidencesoared,andherealizedthatthekeyto

successwasnotjustpassivelymemorizingfactsbuttruly

understandingandconnectingwithmaterials.

Passage!参考答案：

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Itwasmyparents

withRosainthebabybasket.Seeingthemtogetherbathedinthespringsunand

smileswrittenontheirfaces,Ifeltleftout,arushofpiercingpainrunthrough

mybody.Iwantedtolookaway,butthecornersofmyeyesgavee