2021年新高考读后续写真题汇总（附范文）

2021年1月八省联考

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickoftheway

mostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,Iwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybig

Jeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK（千斤顶）,andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwas

abouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.

Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.Heconveyedthroughherthathehadajack

butthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw（锯子）fromthetruck

andcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.

Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,

andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andI

wasaveryhappyman.

Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20bill

intheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.I

askedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruit

farmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

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1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.

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WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Ishookmyheadandsaidno,wonderingwhyshe

askedsuchaquestion——wasshegoingtotreatmetolunchorsomething?”Waitaminute,saidthegirl,andthenshewent

backtothetruck.Afterafewminutesshecamebackwithapaperbag."HerearesomeMexicansnacksandyoucanhave

somewhenyouarehungry,thegirlsmiled.Iwassosurprisedandtouchedthatwordsalmostfailedme.Ijustsaida

"WOW!"insteadofa“Thankyou!^^whenItookthebag.

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.WhenIsawwhatwasinthebag,Iwasovercomewitha

mixtureofrespectandgratefulness.Inadditiontothesnacks,therewasthe$20bill.Whatakindandrespectablefamily!

Theyareaperfectexampleofwhatkindnessreallymeans.AndI'msureIwillpayitforward.(145)

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WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Ofcoursenot,forIhadbeentrappedthereforquitea

fewhours.Shethenhadawordwithherparentsandwentbacktotheirtruck.Afewminuteslatershecamebackwitha

paperbag."That'sMommy'shand-madetaco,^^explainedthegirl."It'ssoyummythatyoumustloveit."Iwasstarvingto

deathafterallthatexhaustingworksoItooktheMexico-originatedfood,gratefulanddeeplymoved.Thenwewaved

goodbyetoeachother.

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Insidethebagwasachickentaco.Thenextfewminutes

sawmywolfingdownthedeliciousfood.TearswelledupasIwaschewing.Itwasawesometoknowthatwhilemany

peopletendtoignorethoseinneed,therearesomekind-heartedoneswhogooutoftheirwaytolendahand.Thegood

deedtheforeignfamilydidwillneverescapeme.Iamgoingtopassitdowntocreateamuchfriendlierworld.(163)

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第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlost

theirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthe

challenges.

Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewthey

hadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.

Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,

whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—had

interestedherverymuch.

“Iwishyoucouldseehim,^^shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara."Heissuchahelptohismother.He

wantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”

Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.wishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,“

saidClara.utHisfamilyissufferingsomuch.^^

“SodoI,“saidHarry.4tWereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.^^

Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihavea

solutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish（完成）

Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone."Itellyouwhat

wecando,“saidJohn."YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花）,andputit

intopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.

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WhenMrs.Meredithheardoftheidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.ThenMrs.Meredithsearchedtheinternet

andorderedahouseholdpopcornmachine.Afterthat,Mrs.Meredith,togetherwithherthreechildren,paidanothervisitto

thefamilyandtoldthemaboutthepopcornplan.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinally

foundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.Afewdayslater,themachinewasdeliveredtoMrs.Meredith'sdoorstep.Andit

wasn'tlongbeforetheygotthehangofusingthemachinetomakepopcorn.

Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Althoughitwasahardtimeandthingsweretightfor

everybody,Bernard'sbusinessworkedoutquitewell.Hecarriedthepopcornonhissmallbike,goingfromdoortodoorto

sellit.Peopleweresurprisedtoseesuchalittle,poorly-dressedboysellingpopcornattheirdoors,buteventuallyalmostall

ofthemwouldbuyabagortwo.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（续写词

数：164）

2021年1月浙江卷

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Pumpkin（南/氐）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,I

competewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryour

pumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.

Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.

Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofus

werehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmy

headinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.

Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstI

gotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.

FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork（软木塞）forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththe

hugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.

Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy."I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,"Isaid,andwithJason

helpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemy

headthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotinthe

way.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butit

wasnouse."Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

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Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

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ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.__________________________________________________

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Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearing

mecrying,dadcameandhelpedmelaymyheadonthetable,somyneckcouldrestfbrawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,

honey.Ihavetocutthispumpkininhalf."Ihadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtothe

knifemovingonthepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Thenmom

toldmeshehadjustfilmedmemanagingtopullmyheadoutofthepumpkin.

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ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.ActuallymymomhadaskedwhethershecouldpostitontheInternet,

becauseafterallIwassoembarrassedandlookedsosillyinit.Anyway,Inoddedandsupportedheridea.Itturnedoutthat

peoplelikedandforwardeditcrazilyontheIntemet,onlytomakemeanInternetcelebrity.（续写152词）

2020年7月浙江卷

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside

“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.

Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimals-shouldbe

photographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephoto

lens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlic

bread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.

Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblank

shotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkept

tryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws子）.

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeit

arrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇），Itooksomepicturesofthebear.

ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.Thecampmanager

suggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguest

slowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

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Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp,

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Atthatvetymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

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Afewminuteslater;thehearheadedhacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimeven

more,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowing

whattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!

Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn'tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.

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Atthatvetymoment,thehelicopterarrived.€tThankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,

wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthat

thebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraand

photographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!（续写词数：153）

2020年1月浙江卷

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

'Tmgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,"saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.He

stoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions（情绪）getthebetterofhim.

Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntothe

universitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedand

smiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.

Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.UIguessthisisit."hesaid."I'llseeyouback

homeinamonth,okay?^^Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsof

studentsandparents.Theboy'smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.^^

Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn'tseeminterestedinher

dinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit,

Poppydidn't.

Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljust

wasn'therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried,"WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?"askedDad.

"We'vetriedeverything.^^

“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,“smiledMom.''Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecould

useabitoffun.Let'sgetalittledogforPoppy.M

Itdidn'ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppy

welcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseon

it.Hertailbeganwagging（摆动）eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.

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1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

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Paragraph!:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.

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Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.Shelowered

herheadtowatchitcuriously.Thenshebecamesoexcitedthatsheaccidentallyknockedovertheboxinanattempttoget

closer.Withtheboxtippingover,outcamethelittleone,whowasnotshyandinstantlygotfamiliarwithPoppy.Itdidn't

takelongbeforethetwoplayedaroundthehouse,cheerfullyrunningaftereachother.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hehadbeenmissinghisparentsandthedogsinceitwas

thefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.WhentheboycaughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushing

towardthedogandbentdowntogiveherabighug.Suddenly,theboynoticedthelittledog."Ohmygod,whoisthis?”His

parentslaughedatthelookofsurpriseonhisfhce."It'sPoppy'snewcompanion."saidMom.（155）

2018年6月浙江卷

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatriptothe

WildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenight

intheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivurnearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.

UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfhrm,“hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAunt

Tinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.Iwasimpressedtoseemy

dadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.I

wasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,and

headedslowlytowardsthemountains.44Don,tbelateforsupper,UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon't

getlost!”"OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfannhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefuland

quietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.

Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontqfmvhorse

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他hadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

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Suddenlyalinlerabbitiunwedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.

Afterawhile,wewerecompletelyAstintheforest.Therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.uWemaynotbeable

tomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper."Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindaway

out,wefelthungryandtired.

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傀hadnoideawherewewe忆andit卬asgellingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedto

thedifficultyofusinfindingawayhome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmoston

theedgeofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,"Don'tworry,myson.Irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.

Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome."Finally,wefoundtheriverandgotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesstosay,we

atealatedinner.（续写词数162）

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第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Avacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,

yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeks

drivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,my

eight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?Finally,

themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarand

bravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler's

checksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:44You

standoutsidethedoorandplaylookout（放哨）whileIgo,andrilstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo."I

hadterriblepicturesinmymind:"Honey,wherearethekids?”"What?!Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfully

quiet."Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad（roublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Mom

suddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?

DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.If

astrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisas

niceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

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Wedrovethrouqhseveralstatesandsawlotsofqreatsiqhtsalonqtheway.

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ThenextdciN7/erememberedthebrand・tte\vtentwehadbroughiwith〃s.Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthe

hotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.Dadrecommendedbuyinganewone,whileMominsistedonourgoingbacktofetch

it,saying"Forgetfulpeoplelikememaylosethingsrepeatedly,soit'sunwisetogiveupthetent.^^Finally,wegotbackthe

tentandhittheroadagain.IfMomhadn'tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagain

andagain.

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I论draethroughseveredstatesandsawlotsofweatsightsaIon父the“av.Oneday,towardsevening,wefoundagreat

campingsiteatthefootofahighmountain.DavidandIhelpedDadputupthetent,andMomwasbusypreparingsupper.

Whenthesettingsuncastanorangelightoverthemountains,thetentwassetupandthemealwasready.Sittingaroundthe

campfire,wetalkedandlaughed.Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewould

spreadoverMom'sface.（续写词数163）

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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newlentwehadbroughtwithus.TDourdelight,Momgaveuptheideaof

campinginsomestranger'sbackyard.Instead,wefoundawonderfulcampingsiteinthewild.Itwasaclearinginthe

woodsbyasmalllake,whereDadcouldcatchsomefishfordinner.Wehadno（roublesettingupourtent,butwewere

disappointedtofindthatMomforgottopackuppillows.Needlesstosay,weallwokeupwithasoreneckthenextmorning.

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加drovethroiiwhseveralstatesandsawlofsofRrealsiwhtsalonwthew4V.Itwasafantastictrip.Wecrossedbigrivers

andvastplains,climbedhighmountains,andoverlookeddeepvalleys.Duringthetrip,Mom'sbeingabsent-mindednot

onlygotusintomuchtrouble,butalsogaveusmanyfunnymoments.Butluckily,shewasnotsoforgetfulastoleaveme

andDavidbehindinthegasstationbathrooms.Weallarrivedatgrandparents5homesafeandsound.（续写词数147）

2017年6月浙江卷

第二节读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhis

friends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywould

catchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled（骑彳亍）alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersat

home.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.

ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim."Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtothe

side,hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.

Mac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.A

brightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhis

sideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,

itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）.

Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteep

uphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'd