读后续写北斗星盟讲义高考英语一轮复习

读后续写北斗星盟读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwas19,IspentpartofmysummeratanadventurecamponVancouverIsland,supervising(照料)agroupof10yearoldgirls.Towardstheendofthefirstweek,Itookthemonacamping.Bysixintheevening,we'dclimbedasmallmountain.Thepeakhadtreesononesideandbaldrockontheother.IletthegirlsplayinthewoodedareawhileIarrangedthingsfordinner.Whenthescreamingstarted,Iwasn'ttooalarmedIcouldseemygrouptearingthroughthebushandthoughtthey'djustdisturbedabees'nest.Asthefirstgirlappeared,Iaskedwhatwasgoingon."Wildcat!"shegasped.Theimageinmyheadwasofahousecatgonewild,butwithhernextbreathsheadded,"It'sattackingAlyson."Itoldthegirlstoclimbontotherocksandthenrantowherethey'dbeenplaying.Alysonwaslyingbybush.Shewasonherback,eyeswide,staringatahugecatbesideher.Thecatwaswatchingme.Anyonefamiliarwithwesternswillhaveseenacougar(美洲狮)themountainlionthatspringsfromtherockfaceontothepasserby.We'dbeentoldhowtodealwithbears:"Keepstill,backup,makeyourselflookbig."Butwehadn'tcoveredcougars.Igrabbedastickandswungitintotheanimal'sface.Startled,ittookoffintothebushes.SeeingthatAlysonwashurt,Isetoffforthefirstaidbox,buthadn'tgonefourstepswhenIheardamoan.Turningback,Isawthecougarcrouched(蹲伏)byAlyson'shead.Itappearedtobeeatingher.ThistimeIusedabiggerstick,hitharderandheldon.Onceagain,itdisappeared.andIkneltbyAlyson."There'snowaysomeonecanlivethroughthis,"Ithought.Thecathadtorndeepintoherneck.Shehadlongcutsonherface."AmIgoingtodie?"sheasked.Herheartbeatwasracingbutweak,thesignofahearttremblingfromshock.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好:4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.___________________________________Paragraph2FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.___________情节构思：第一段：Alyson安慰后的反应+我的解决或急救方法+发现方法行不通+听到远处别人声音第二段：陌生人的帮忙+直升机的到来+我们下山+最后对这件事的反思本文内容是典型的遇到挫折困难之后解决挫折困难，总体思路都是差不多的。1.遇到问题（环境描写/情境描写、情绪描写:恐惧、绝望、鼓起勇气）2.自我解决问题（动作描写：施救动作、挣扎努力）3.自救失败（一般自救都会失败。情绪描写、动作描写）4.出现转机（求救与被救过程。对话描写、动作描写）5.被救之后的反应（内心反思和对施救人的反应和感激等）6.主旨呼应升华参考范文：Paragraph1:"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.ItookoffmyTshirtandgotAlysontoholditagainstherneck,thenranforthefirstaidkitandasleepingbag.Theothergirlsstaredfromtheirrock."Everything'sfine!"Iyelled.ThenIrealisedIcouldn'tleavetogethelp,orrisksendinganyoneelse.Iwasterrified;Iwantedsobadlytorunaway,butknewthatwasn'tanoption.Instead,Iclimbedatree,wonderingwhetherIcouldbeluckyenoughtoseekhelpanywhere.(81字)Paragraph2:FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.Theywereanothergroupofcampers.Icriedout,"Help!Cougarattack!"Helpeventuallyarrived.Anothercounsellor,John,hadsenthisboystoraisethealarmwhileherantous.Asdarknessfell,ahelicopterarrivedtoliftAlysonoffthemountain,andtherestofuswereacpanieddownhilltoawaitingtruck.Alysonrecoveredslowly.Allthatmademechoose"fight"over"flight"wasthethoughtofAlysonbeingeatenalive.(74字）下水文：Paragraph1"You'renotgoingtodie,"Isaid.Afaintsmiletuggedatthecornerofhermouth,yetherskinghastlypaleandwaxy.Staringatbloodoozingfromherwound,Iendeavoredtoreasonoffthenervousnessthatovertookmeandcollectmyselftothinkofafeasibleplan.Worriedthatthecougarwouldreturn,Itriedtocarryherinmyarmstoheadforthefirstaidsite,which,however,deterioratedthedeepcuts.Itwasatmywit’sendthatIheardavoiceingfromsomewherenotdistant.Paragraph2FrommybranchIcouldseesomepeoplemovingonanearbymountain.Igaveablastonthewhistleandshouted,“Help!Help!Cougarattack!”NosoonerhadtheyarrivedthantheybandagedAlyson’sneckwoundwithgauzefromtheirfirstaidkit.Oneofthemmadeanemergencycall.Notlongafterthat,achopperroaredoverheadandAlysonwaseventuallyflownbythehe