2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典专题10读后续写情感心理描写20类80句积累2（讲义）

《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题10读后续写情感心理描写20类80句素材积累2（讲义）（背诵版）（一）喜悦1.Hersmilebloomedlikeaflower.她的笑容像花朵一样开放。2.Abrightsmilespreadacrossherface.她脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。3.Hewasinhighspirits,andfeltlikebeingontopoftheworld.他情绪高涨，感觉自己好像站在了世界之巅。4.Shelaughed,hereyesshining/twinklingwithexcitement.她笑了起来，她的眼睛因兴奋而闪闪发光。（二）同情1.Shepressedmyhandinsympathy.她握了握我的手表示同情。2.Hispainfuleyesseemtobegmetospare.他痛苦的眼睛似乎在恳求他。3.Franklinstoodsilently,tornbysorrowandpassion,weighingwhattosay.当富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，犹豫着该说些什么。4.Seeinghercondition,Iimmediatelyfeltahugesympathyforher.Itwasingdeepfromwithinmyheart.看到她的情况，我立即对她产生了极大的同情。这种感觉深深地发自我的心。（三）感动1.Tearswelledupinhereyes.她泪如泉涌。2.Awarmcurrentroseinherheart.一股暖流涌上她的心头。3.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shethankedhimagainandagain.她泪流满面，再三感谢她。4.Iwasdeeplymovedbywhathehaddone,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.我被他的所作所为深深打动了，泪水情不自禁地夺眶而出。5.Tearsdroppingfromhiseyes,herantoMum’swarmhug,andsaidgently"Mum,thankyou."他热泪盈眶，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，温柔地说："妈妈，谢谢你。"（四）宽慰1.Hearingthis,Ifeltawarmflowspreadinginsideofme.流在我体内蔓延。2.Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhairandsaid,“Thingsaregoingtobefine."她用手指抚摸着我的头发说："一切都会好起来的。"3.Hereachedouthishandwithhisfingerforminga"heart",saying,“I’llalwaysbetherewithyou."他伸出手，用手指捏成"心形"，说："我将永远与你同在"。4.Sheheldmyhands,weeping,"Thankyousomuch!Youhavenoideahowmuchthismeanstome."她握着我的手哭着说："非常感谢！你不知道这对我有多重要。"（五）鼓励1.Mymom/wearingasmileonherface,alwaysencouragesme.妈妈总是面带微笑鼓励我。2.Hesmiledwithsatisfaction,pattingmeontheshoulderandsaid,"Welldone!"他满意地笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀说："做得好！"3."Youmatter."Isaidthatsentencetomyself,feelingawarmglowspreadinginsideofme."你很重要。"我对自己说了这句话，感到一股暖意在我体内蔓延。4.Thankstotheencouragement,whichcalmsmedowngradually,Ibegantoacceptthatfailureisapartofgreatvalue.多亏了鼓励，我渐渐平静下来，我开始接受失败是天赋价值的一部分。（六）希望1.Asparkofhopekindledintheirhearts.他们心中燃起了希望的火花。2.Lifebloomedwithhappinessandhope.生活充满了幸福和希望。3.Hopeforthebestandpreparefortheworst.抱最好的希望，做最坏的打算。4.Afteralltheproblems,wearefinallybeginningtoseesomelightattheendofthetunnel.在经历了这么多困难之后，我们终于看到了曙光。（七）激动1.Hisfaceisglowingwithexcitement.他的脸因激动而容光焕发。2.Hewassothrilledthathecouldhardlyspeak.他激动得几乎说不出话来。3.Shefeltherheartracingandherbloodrushing.她的心跳加速，热血沸腾。4.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息，她激动得胃里直打颤。（八）愤怒1.Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。2.Hewasreallyangry,shakinghisfists.他非常生气，挥动着拳头。3.Hercolorwentup,aheavyragecameoverherlikeadarkcloud.她的脸色涨了起来，一股沉重的怒气像一片乌云笼罩着她。4.Hestormedoutoftheroomwithanger,shuttingthedoorhardbehindhim.他怒气冲冲地冲出了房间，重重地关上了门。（九）悲伤1.Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他默默地站着，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。2.Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她哭了起来，跑出了房间。3.Sheshookherheadmiserably,tearspouringdownhercheeks.她痛苦地摇了摇头,泪水顺着脸颊流下。4.Shewalkedtome,withgreatsorrow,thelightinhereyesdarkened,andsaidwithsadness,“Ifailed."她走到我面前，悲痛万分，眼睛里的光芒暗了下来，悲伤地说："我失败了。"（十）惊恐1.Afloodoffearwelledupinher.她心中起一股恐惧的洪流。2.Scaredandshocked,shecouldn'tsayaword.他又害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。3.Hefrozenwithfear,tooscaredtomoveaninch.他吓得僵住了，不敢动弹。4.Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodthere,tonguetied.他的脸色变得苍白，站在那里，舌头打结。5.Thesightofthefiercewolf,Mikefeltsoscaredthathisthroattightenedandhiskneesfeltweak.看到那只凶猛的狼，迈克感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。（十一）紧张1.Hisheartbeatwildlyandhislegstrembled.他的心脏狂跳着，双腿颤抖着。2.Hisheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.如此剧烈，他感到如坐针毡。3.Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedinandpalmssweating.他正要回答时，感到舌头被绑住了，手掌开始出汗。4.Asthebusgotcloserandcloser,Tom'sheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltnearlybreathless.公共汽车越来越近了，汤姆的心脏剧烈跳动，几乎呼吸困难。（十二）悔疚1.Istoodthere,withregretfultearsinmyeyes.我站在那里，眼里含着遗憾的泪水。2.Onhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelyguilty.听到这个坏消息，她感到非常内疚。3.Desperateandhelpless,Janetkneltdownwithtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.绝望而无助的珍妮特跪了下来，后悔的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。（十三）困惑1.Hissuddenchangeinmoodpletelyconfusedher.他的情绪突然变化完全把握弄糊涂了。2.Wearealittleconfusedaboutwhatwearesupposedtobedoing.我们对正在做的事情有点困惑。3.WhenIstoodonthestageinfrontofthelargeaudience,mymindwentblank.站在舞台上面对大批观众时，我的头脑一片空白。（十四）忧虑1.Worriedaboutthejourney,Iwasunsettledforthefirstfewdays.由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。2.HewassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthathelayawakehalfthenight,worrying.他对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。（十五）震惊1.ItgavemeashockwhenIrealized...．当我意识到．..，我感到震惊。2.Hefroze,withhismouthhangingopen.他僵住了，张着嘴。3.Ijumpedtomyfeetandsteppedbackinnotime,pletelyataloss.我跳了起来，立刻后退了一步，完全不知所措。4.Everyonegaspedinastonishmentasthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽车驶过最后一个弯道时，每个人都惊呆了。（十六）羞愧1.Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.她感到非常羞愧，几乎要哭了。2.Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushedtoherface.我感到非常羞愧，甚至能感觉到鲜血涌到脸上。3.Shefeltsoashamedofherfoolishbehaviorthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她为自己的愚蠢行为感到非常羞愧，以至于感到脸红了。（十七）疲惫1.Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了。2.“Arewealmostthere?"sheasked,feelingburntout.“我们快到了吗？”她问道，感到筋疲力尽。3.Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestreamrestingherachingfeet.她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪边休息着疼痛的双脚。（十八）孤独1.Awaveoflonelinesswashedoverher.一阵孤独感席卷了她的全身。2.Coldwithnohopeforwarmth,shefeltlikedrowninginacrowdofpeople.她感到又冷又无取暖的希望，感觉就像被人群淹没一样。（十九）尴尬1.Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassmentandshefeltbloodrushingtoherface.妻子尴尬地站在那里，感到鲜血涌向脸上。2.Alltheairseemedtodisappearandshefeltasifthewholeworldwaswatchingher.所有的空气似乎都消失了，她觉得整个世界都在看着她。3.Heloweredhishead,hesitatedforamoment,wonderinghowtohidehisinnerembarrassment.他低下头，犹豫了一会儿，不知道如何掩饰内心的尴尬。（二十）绝望1.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他非常绝望，把悲伤淹没在酒中。2.Hegazedattheconfusionaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdespair.他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。3.Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。1．（2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。Initially,ItotallybelievedthatDaddywantedaboy.IcouldjustimaginehisdisappointmentwhenIwasborn.Whatalwaysfrustratedmewasthathenevertriedhidinghisfeelingsfromme.Hehadhopedaboywhowouldhelphimwiththefarmandfinallystepintohisshoes.Butagirl…ItriedtodoeverythingjusttopleaseDaddy.NotonlydidIgetupearlytohelpwiththehousework,butalsosometidyworkonthefarm.What’smore,Iwenthomestraightfromschool,expectingthatIwasneeded.Buthedidn’tseemtobemovedbythoseatall,letaloneputtingonasmile.TheyearIturnedthirteenwasthe100thbirthdayofourtown.Thetowncouncildecidedtoholdaparade(游行),andtheywantedayoungladywhocouldleadtheparade.Thefamiliesintheareawereaskedtosendpicturesoftheirchildren.Everyparentintheareahopedthattheirdaughterwouldbechosen,everyparentexceptDaddy.Mommysentinapictureofmewithouttellingme.IwasalwayssobusybeingtheboyDaddywanted,andIneverconsideredhavingthechancetoleadtheparade.SoitwasquiteasurprisewhenthetowncouncilstoppedbyoneeveningtotellusIhadbeenchosen.Mommywasexcited.AsIanticipated,Daddyshowednointerestinthematter.Thedayofthebigparadefinallyarrived.Iwasdressedinabeautifulwhitedress.AtfirstIfeltshyI’dhardlyeverworndresses.ButsoonIfeltlikeaprincessinafairytale.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:Astheparadepasseddownthemainstreetofourtown,IsawMommyandDaddyontheside.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AsIwentbackfromtheparade,Daddystoodinfrontofthegate,smiling.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Astheparadepasseddownthemainstreetofourtown,IsawMommyandDaddyontheside.paredtoMumwhorejoicedwithwildexcitementthemomentshesawme,Daddyjustremainedcold,pokerfaced.Theignitedhappinessinsidemesuddenlyvanishedintothinair.“Hey,youlooksogorgeous!”Iwasgrabbedbacktotheparadebythoseplimentsshoutedoutfromthecrowd.Istraightenedupmybody,andresumedmydutyofleadingtheparade.Lookingatthosesmilingfacesontheside,Isurprisinglynoticedthatmymoodwasimproving,especiallywhenIsuddenlycaughtsightofafamiliarfigure,myfather,movingtotheendoftheparadetogetherwithmyproceeding.MaybeIwasexpectingsomething.Butwhatwasit?AsIwentbackfromtheparade,Daddystoodinfrontofthegate,smiling.AsifbeingkissedbyGod,Ileaptthreefeethigh,orevenpinchedmyself.Imurmured,“WasDaddysmilingtome?Wasthatadream?”WhatconfirmedmyideawasDaddy’swarmhand.Hestrokedmyhead,praisingthatIdidquiteagoodjob,andIwasthebestgirlhehadeverknown.NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatthosewordscameoutfromhismouth.Ifinallyprovedmyself!Iwasfinallyacceptedasagirl!WhenIwasbaskingintheafterglowofmyfather’srecognition,itsuddenlydawnedonmethatweallhaveourownglitteringmerits,andbeingatrueandconfidentselfisalwaysawayout.【导语】本文以父亲为线索，讲述了作者觉得父亲因为自己是个女儿而感到非常失望，因为为了得到父亲的爱，作者尽量让自己做男孩能为家里分担的事情。小镇举行游行，作者在妈妈的帮助下获得了领队的角色。这一次，作者终于获得了父亲的表扬。作为女孩，作者终于被父亲接受了！在作者看来，每个人都有缺点，但一定要做真实的、自信的自己。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当游行队伍经过小镇的主街道时，我看到了父亲和母亲。”可知，本段可以写父母的反应，以及人群的反应，这让作者充满了自信。在游行的结尾，作者看到了父亲。②由第二段首句内容“当我结束游行回到家时，父亲站在门口，微笑着。”可知，本段可以写作者回到家后，父亲的感到骄傲和自豪，并夸奖了作者，作为女孩，作者终于被接受了，这让作者感到非常高兴，并认为只有做真实的、充满信心的自我，才可以获得别人的肯定。2.续写线索：在游行时看到父母→母亲很激动，父亲却依然很冷淡→周围人夸奖作者，作则提升了自信→回到家看到父亲→父亲夸奖了作者→作者感觉自己终于被接受了→作者的感悟。3.词汇激活：行为类：看到：sb.catchsightofsth./stheintoone'sview/sth.greetsb表扬：praise/makeapraise/patontheback微笑：smile/beamasmile情绪类：高兴：happiness/delight/pleasure自信的：confident/befullofconfidence/selfassurance激动：excitement/thrill/agitation【点睛】【高分句型1】Lookingatthosesmilingfacesontheside,Isurprisinglynoticedthatmymoodwasimproving,especiallywhenIsuddenlycaughtsightofafamiliarfigure,myfather,movingtotheendoftheparadetogetherwithmyproceeding.(运用了现在分词作状语。)【高分句型2】NeverinmywildestdreamhadIimaginedthatthosewordscameoutfromhismouth.(运用了部分倒装。)2．（2023·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I’dbeenlivinginfostercare(抚育院)sinceIwastwo.Iwasputindifferentfosterhomes.Ifeltlonelyandconfused.BecauseIactedup,eventuallymypreviousfostermomsentmebacktotheadoptionagency,justasthemombeforehad.IthoughtIwasthemostunlovablegirlintheworld.ThenImetKate.Iwasseven.WhenmyfostermothertoldmethatKatewassingleandwantedtoadoptachild,Ididn’tthinkshedchooseme.Icouldn’timagineanyonewouldwantmetolivewiththemforever.But,KateaskedmeifI’dmindlivingwithoneparentinsteadoftwo.“AllIwantissomeonewholovesme,”Isaid,feelingexcitedbutafraid,too.Iwonderedifshe’dchangehermindonceshegottoknowme.Katesensedmyfear.“Iknowyou’vebeenhurt,”shesaid,huggingme.“Iknowyou’rescared.ButIpromiseI’llneversendyouaway.We’reafamilynow.”WhenImovedinwithMomKate,Iwenttosleepthatnightfeelingsafe.IprayedIwouldn’thavetoleave.Everyday,shetoldmeshelovedme.Butlovewasn’tenoughtohealthehurtinsideme.Ikeptwaitingforhertochangehermind.Ithought,“IfIactbadlyenough,she’llleavemeliketheothers.”SoItriedtohurtherbeforeshecouldhurtme.Ipickedfightsoverlittlethingsandthrewtantrums(发脾气)whenIdidn’tgetmyway.Islammedthedoors.IfMomtriedtostopme,I’dhither.Butsheneverlostpatience.She’dhugmeandsayshelovedmeanyway.Momwasverystrictaboutmyhomework,becauseIwasfailinginschoolwhenIcametolivewithher.Oneday,IkeptwatchingTVbeforefinishingmyhomework.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1：Shecameinandturneditoff.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：“I’llneversendyouback,”shesaid,stillpeacefullybutseriously.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________