BEC中级写作强化课

剑桥BEC中级

强化课程

Vincent魏琛TIMEPOSITIONACTIVITYCLIENT2016.1交替传译武汉中英医疗圆桌会议

2015.10陪同口译厦门国际茶产业博览会美国Bellocq公司及英国LeafAffair公司2015.5陪同口译厦门国际石材展意大利公司Porphyry公司2014.11陪同口译厦门大学孔子学院交流项目厦门大学新西兰中小学校长团队2013.10陪同口译华中师范大学110周年校庆美国雅礼协会会长2013.9陪同口译武汉申办2015亚洲田径锦标赛筹备组亚田联理事会议副主席2013.8现场英文播音世界女排大奖赛武汉站

2013.8陪同口译世界女排大奖赛武汉站管理委员会主席2013.8陪同口译世界现代五项青年锦标赛

2013.5讲座交传；分组讨论耳语同传、陪同口译华中师范大学首届世界农村与农民学论坛Working

ExperienceEnglishSkills&Certificates专业八级证书专业四级证书BEC高级证书上海中高级口译证书CATTI二级口译证书厦门大学三级口译证书英语四六级口语考试最高等级“A+”英语四级617英语六级606强化写作写作目的与要求1.

Canmakenotesthatareusefultobothhim/herselfandtocolleagues.2.Canwritemostlettershe/sheislikelytobeaskedtodo;sucherrorsasoccurwillnotpreventunderstandingofthemessage.3.Canwriteasimplereport.测试范围与选材1、身份介绍(PersonalIdentification)2、工作环境与日常事务(Theoffice，generalbusiness，environmentandroutine)3、接待与闲暇活动(Entertainmentofclients，freetime，relationshipswithcolleaguesandclients)4、商务旅行(Travel)5、健康(Health)6、购置与销售(Buyingandselling)7、公司结构、系统及程序(Companystructures，systems，processes)8、产品与效劳(Productsandservices)9、成果与成就(Resultsandachievements)

写作评分四个方面：

1content2language3structure&vocabulary4organization写作技巧分析1.防止冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复原句：Theproblemwasthatthecarwouldnotstart修改：Thecarwouldnotstart2.少用陈词滥调3.多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思原句：PaymentoftheiraccountswillbemadebyJohnsonsnextweek．修改：Johnsonswillpaytheiraccountsnextweek．

写作技巧分析1.具体(Concreteness)尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息原句：Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.修改：TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.写作技巧分析1.具体(Concreteness)使用具体地道词汇原句：Duetotheunusualnatureoftherequest,…修改：Astherequestisunusual,…写作技巧分析2.完整(Completeness)

自查：谁(Who)?什么(What)?

什么时候(When)?在哪里(Where)?为什么(Why)?怎么样(How)?写作技巧分析：礼貌(Courtesy)DearMrs.Walters,Becauseyoudelayedsolonginyourresponse,ModelGSFisoffstock.Ifyouareinterested,wehavesomesimilarmodelsonhandYourstruly,DearMrs.WaltersIfIhadknownyourneedsbeforeMay20,IcouldhaveshippedModelGSPimmediately.However,thespringsaledrainedourstock.TheModelGSK,asimilarinstrument,isinstock,andyoucouldhaveitatthesamepriceastheGSF.Itnormallysellsfor$10,000more.wewillshipitassoonasyougiveustheword.Yourssincerely写作技巧分析：礼貌(Courtesy)使用礼貌友好的词汇体谅对方的写作态度(You-Attitude)例句：Writeremphasis:WeareshippingyourorderonFriday.Readeremphasis:YouwillreceiveyourorderbyMonday,October10.措辞得体(AppropriateWording)防止采用消极性的词汇或句式例句：NegativeWording:TheofficeisclosedafterfourO'clock,PositiveWording: TheofficeisopenuntilfourO'clock.防止使用有性别歧视之嫌的词语用“person”代替第三人称单数。例如:Insteadof: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor.Hewillfinditinteresting.Say: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor,whowillfinditinteresting.连贯(coherence)常见连接词有：1表示罗列增加First,second,third,First,then/next,afterthat/next,finallyForonething…foranother…,On(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,Besides/what’smore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover/another/also,Especially/Inparticular,2表示时间顺序

now,atpresent,recently,after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,inafewdays,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,immediately,soon,suddenly,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,themomentformnowon,fromthenon,atthesametime,meanwhile,till,not…until,before,after,when,while,asduring,

3表示解释说明now,inaddition,forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,moreoverfurthermore,infact,actually4表示转折关系but,however,while,though,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,incontrast,despite,inspiteof,eventhough,except(for),instead,ofcourse,afterall,5表示强调indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,aboveall,6表示概括归纳inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,Asweallknow,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,insummary,inconclusion,

商务报告与建议书的语言常用的概括图表信息的词组和表达方式上升趋势toincrease/anincreasetogouptogrow/agrowthtojump/ajumptoleap/aleaptoreachapeak/apeaktosoar/asoartorise/arisetoupsurge/anupsurgetoupswing/anupswing下降趋势tocollapse/acollapsetodecline/adeclinetodrop/adroptodecrease/adecreasetofall/afalltogodowntoreachalowpoint/alowpointtoreduce/areduction升降程度较大

agreatdeal/big/alotapparent/apparentlyclear/dearlyconsiderable/considerablyimportant/importantlydramatic/dramaticallygreat/greatlydrastic/drasticallymarked/markedlymuchobvious/obviouslyfast/remarkable/remar