高考短文改错公开课

DearTom,

Howareyou?Imissyou.I’dliketointroducethelayoutofmyschooltoyou.Enteringthecampus,andyouwillsteponthemainpathledthroughthewholecampus.Ontheleftofthecrossroadsislocatedthemodernlaboratorybuildingwhileoursplendidteachingbuildingisintherightwherewehavefascinatinglessonseveryday.Attheendofthemainpath,thelibraryontheleftgreetstoyouandthegymisontheoppositeside.Happily,wedidsportsafterclassinthefootballfieldwhichisbetweenthelibraryandthelabbuilding;thebasketballcourtfacesthefootballfieldacrossthemainpath.Ilovemyschoolwithstudentsworkinghardtorealizetheirdreamsandteacherstrainuslikeourparents.Providedyoucanvisitmyschoolsomeday,Iwillshowyouaroundit.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyou.Bestwishes.英语高考专题复习HowtocompleteProof-reading

如何做改错题？Findthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.Beresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonMakeagreatprogressTheaccidentwashappenedSharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblyforoninwithShoesequipmentGenerallypossiblePlayagame高考英语全国卷短文改错新题型假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号〔∧〕，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线〔—〕，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者〔从第11处起〕不计分。

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes〔圣女果〕inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!What’sthemaintroublewithus?1.对错误类型不熟悉，看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对;2.看出句子出错的地方,但由于词汇记忆基

础不扎实无法改正;3.知道改正句子错误的地方,但无视题目要

求而是按照自己的习惯随意使用更正符号，

以及将更正后的单词写在规定处之外的地

方。Anyrules？Anyskills？

Howtocorrect?动词形，名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语，细区分,代词格，细领悟;ALimerick

打油诗介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析；逻辑连词需关注；一、动词形

主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。2010全国卷ⅠOnedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp.2011全国卷ⅠbuttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.2012全国卷Ⅰ…butwhenthingsgowrong,Igotangry.

camewerewent或在go前添加did时态主谓一致时态2012全国卷ⅠWhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid…2013全国卷ⅠIwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.2013全国卷ⅡTeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.2014全国卷ⅠForalltheseyears,wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseed…torepasseddrunkhave时态时态过去式与过去分词的混淆(被动语态be+过去分词)时态二、名词数

主要指名词单、复数形式、还包括所有格、可数名词和不可数名词的混淆等的用法错误。2010…hestoppedataboxofgoldenballforChristmastrees.2011Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2012Idestroyedeachofmytoy.2013(I)Hewastall,withbroadshoulder.2014Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoesto…ballsluggage不可数名词toysshouldersyears2010全国卷：MyfriendNicktoldmeastoryabout…whichwasinterested.2013全国卷Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.

注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。三、还要注意形和副interestingwell2007浙江卷Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.学生常见错误：Weshouldworkhardlytoachieveourgoals.hardproud四、非谓语，细区分

这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有_______、________、_______和_______错误。2010全国卷：Ontheboxwasacardsay:“25centseach”.2011全国卷1.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuya

tickettoHangzhou.

2012全国卷Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner…现在分词过去分词动名词不定式sayingbuyingHaving2013全国卷Sheusedtoholdingmeonherknees.ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetsofarthisyear.学生版:Thebigfireburnedhundredsofhouses,madehundredsoffamilieshomeless.LiMengcameseemeeveryday.Ialwaysmaketheteachertoexplainmyquestionsformorethanonce.

to∧foundholdmaking人称代词，及其主格和宾格，物主代词的使用．2.反身代词oneself的使用．3.不定代词的使用．4.关系代词，连接代词．5.Both,

all,

either,

neither,

none的使用.6.Whose

和who’s，its和it’s的区别．五、代词格，细领悟2010全国卷I

MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS…Oneday..theoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp…Withoutamoment’sdelay,myneighborprickedupthebox…his2011全国卷IWhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhe...2012全国卷II

washappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.

Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegan

toseewhichwashappening2014全国卷IThefruitsaresmallinsizebut…therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.manythemmy∧whatfriend’s2007陕西：JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!

myself学生版：Wemusttryour’sbesttoovercomealldifficultiestosolvethisparticularproblems.

ourcatchasightofasthewholelosemyheart表灰心lateoninhurrybythepriceof10inSundayafternooninthisweekendexpressusItissoabeautifulplace!suchmanypeopleMycarneedswash.

主要考查固定短语、习惯搭配、习惯用法，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和惯用法或搭配错误。aon∨ourselvesso六、介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住alateratsuchwashing2012全国卷IThismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.

2013全国卷heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduring

theycameovertoplay...2.Havingteaintheafternoonprovidesabridge

betweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbe

serveduntil8o’clockatnight.七、句子成分多分析

不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。growthwhenwhich词性误用时间状语从句定语从句关系代词的选择2014全国卷I1.Thefruitsaresmallinsizebutjuicyandtaste.2.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.tastywonderful词性误用八、逻辑错误须关注1.句子的上、下文不一致，张冠李戴，甚至相矛盾；2.连词but，and，or和so的用法错误属于逻辑性错误；3.过渡词的误用；2010全国卷I25centseachpiece…Nickhasbroughtthepriceupto10centsapiece.2011全国卷Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor...downand2013全国卷However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.2014全国卷Althoughweallowtomatoesto….but….ever改为yet或删but其他常见错误：Iopenedthewallet,tyingtofindoutwhoseitwas.Therefore,Ifoundnothingbut300yuaninit.However过渡词误用动词形，名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语，细区分,代词格，细领悟;ALimerick

打油诗介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析；逻辑连词需关注；3stepsforproof-reading解题三步骤Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意〕2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.〔分句阅读，逐行找错〕3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.〔检查核对，攻克难点〕短文改错应注意的问题

四不改:

①标点符号不改。

②大小写不改。

③词序错误不改。

④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。

Don'tforget!亲，请注意标准答题！！！WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredyuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Buthesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwenttosellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasingwhenIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginewhatmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyo