高三英语一轮复习英语作文写作如何进行细节拓展课件

HowtoEnrichyourWritingbyAddingDetails假使你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信，询问你高考后的暑假安排。请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.陪伴父母；4.参加社会活动假使你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信，询问你高考后的暑假安排。请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.陪伴父母；4.参加社会活动IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcause,Iwilldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.Iwillspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemaboutmyfuturemajorchoiceanddoingsomehousework.Ifpossible,Iwilltakepartinsomesocialactivities,throughwhichIwillsurelybroadenmyhorizonsandenrichmylifeexperience.1交际性拓展Communicativeexpansion拓展2细节性拓展Detailedexpansion3逻辑性拓展LogicalexpansionHowtoadddetailstoyourwritingIamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.SampleOne1).Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.2).Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedtoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.1.给今年即将毕业的全体高三学生写封信，信中建议他们在高考（theCollegeEntranceExamination）结束后的暑假中能够安排一些有意义的事去做。给建议Lookforwardtoyourreply.SampleOne

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.2.听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习，用英语写一封自荐信。tip：交际性拓展(communicativeexpansion)，主要集中在信件开头与结尾，可通过背景介绍，感谢期待等内容的添加，让书信交际功能更生动而又有人情味。

Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedintoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2017全国II卷DearHenry，

I’mverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition,whichwillstartonJune20inourschoollecturehallandlastforaweek．(展览时间、地点)

Asiswell-knowntousall，Chinesepaper-cuttingisfamousallovertheworldandI’msureyou

willbe

interestedinit，soIplantoinviteyoutopayaclosevisit.Theexhibitionisacollectionofworkscreatedbysomefamouspaper-cuttingartistsinChina.(展览内容)Duringtheactivity,IwillshowyouaroundourschoolandthisisagoodchanceforyoutoenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture．

Wouldyoupleasehavealookat

theexhibitionwithme？I‘dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.

I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyassoonaspossible．(殷切希望)

Yours，LiHuaInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities.SampleTwoInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,enjoyinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.1.中英寒假生活调查，向英国朋友介绍中国学生的寒假生活。InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship.SampleTwoInChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.2.你准备了中国结作为礼物送给外国网友，感谢他的帮助。细节拓展可通过两方面进行:1.下义延伸，即通过适当添加例子，将写作内容具体化。（suchas,forexample,like…）2.平行补充：挖掘写作对象的不同方面。1.InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,eatinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.2.InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.DeareditorI’msogladtogivemypersonalopinionsonmyfavoritenewspaperEnglishMonthlysetupbytheStudentUnion.I’mahighschoolstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutreadingnewspapersandIwanttolearnsomethingfromthem.IthinkEnglishMonthlyhasmanyadvantages.Foronething,it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization.Foranother,it’saguidetoEnglishlearning.Throughit,Icanhaveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroadandI’veimprovedmyEnglishreadingskills.IfonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirationalstoriesintheculturecolumn.HereIreallyhopeEnglishMonthlywillattractmorereaders.

Yours,Lihua.SampleThree1.邀请他来中国体验文化。

2.暑假建议你去学车。IwouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinathissummer.Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense.WhynotpayavisittoChina,

sothatyoucanhaveatasteofChinesecultureinperson?Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense,whichwillenableyoutodriveinyourdailyroutine.sothatwhich表结果3.向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，推荐同学李雷为导游。4.李华，考试不要紧张。I’dliketorecommendmyclassmateLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams.AsIknow,youwantsomeonewhohasabroadknowledgeoftraditionalChinesepainting,soI’dliketorecommendLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams,because

itwillpreventyoufromconcentratingyourattentiononthetestpaper.SampleThree表原因逻辑性拓展前因，后果,让步，递进…拓展小技巧背景介绍；感谢期待；下义延伸（举例子）；平行类拓展（多方面；多角度）

掌握拓展技巧，在于先写出句子主干(核心信息)，再根据需要增添附加成分。逻辑性拓展交际性拓展细节性拓展拓展小结前因，后果,让步，递进…NoticeNextweek,ourEnglishClubwillholdaseriesofactivitiesduringour“EnglishLearningWeek”.WehavepreparedavarietyofactivitiesonEnglishlearning,suchaswatchingEnglishfilms,holdingpartiesandgettingtogetherwithforeignstudents.TherewillalsobeanEnglishspeedcontest,inwhichourforeignteacher,Peter,willbethejudge.Theseactivitieswillbeheldateveryeveningclassinourschoolhallnextweek.IamsuretheseactivitieswillnotonlyhelpimproveyourspokenEnglish,butalsobringyoumuchfun.Ireallyexpectyourenthusiasticparticipation.(2018全国Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing

Together,内容包括:1.短片内容