高中英语课件-书面表达课件

高考书面表达的命题趋势及应试对策

书面表达是一个综合性题目,要求考生根据所给图、表、提纲等,运用所学知识将所提示信息组成句子,句子连成段,段连成篇。它不但要求考生有丰富的词汇和语法知识,而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是考生综合素质水平的展现。【2010年高考考纲说明】2006年-2009年高考湖北卷书面表达年题材体裁提示方式形式2006高中生英语阅读兴趣调查记叙文+应用文文字及柱状图半开放2007某校学生到养老院慰问老人书信应用文文字半开放2008投诉某外国公司生产的手机质量问题书信应用文文字开发式2009解释“无所不为”“无所事事”邮件应用文文字开放式题材体裁提示方式形式家长是否应该陪伴学生就读书信应用文

文字开放式荆州市质检二调书面表达近几年高考书面表达的命题趋势从题材来看：1.贴近学生生活实际,使学生有话可说。2.表达了高考英语作文的命题原那么:合理性、交际性和实用性。3.具有时代气息，尤其注重学生素质教育的培养从体裁上看：以夹叙夹议的应用文/说明文为主提示方式：创设情景,以图画、图表和提纲提示为主,汉语提示为辅。100个/120个单词左右的短文。从命题形式看：全部材料→半开放→开放式。NMET对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100/120个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本局部总分值25分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原那么1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.21~25分第四档.16~20分第三档.11~15分第二档.6~10分第一档.1~5分0分语言地道，标准覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：

内容要点齐全；词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯性；语言的得体性。应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇,句型〔高级〕和语法多样化〔较复杂〕

1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？高考书面表达的应对策略爽心悦目对策一、书面表达如何写？过程三步骤1、审题信息分段题材、人称、时态、要点开头、正文、结尾2、以词及点：用单词/短语写出每句话的要点联词成句：用联词成句法将上述要点的词语扩展成句联句成文：注意：①主语和谓语+…②背景〔适当增加时间、地点条件等〕③逻辑关系④开头与结尾⑤语篇衔接3、检查修改，标准抄写假设你叫李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Jackie在网上看到了如下的漫画并向你发电子邮件询问其内涵，邮件内容必须包括图画内容，请回一封邮件告知

注意：字数120左右parody滑稽模仿作品春眠不觉晓，处处不闻鸟。白日弹弓声，伤禽知多少。飞鸟难上天。

Theparodyimitatesan

ancientpoemSleepinginSpringwrittenbyMengHaoran…….

Insping,peoplewillstillbesleepingwhendaysbreak,butnowherecanpeopleseebirdsflyinganylongernow.Thatpeopleshootmanybirdswithslingsandtheneatthemcontributestoadramticdeclineofthenumberofbirds…….Whattheparody

impliesisthatwearesupposedtoprotectwildanimalsandliveinharmonywithnature

结构三局部Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述局部；层次清楚3.Ending小结；照应主题段落层次的构思对策二内容三字经What文章的主题是什么？2.Why论证主题的原因是什么？3.How采取哪些举措？开放式作文入手对策对策三

1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式技巧三要素对策四Eg:五一节快到了

1.MayDayiscoming2.MayDayisapproaching

3.MayDayisonthecorner

4.MayDayisdrawingnear

5.MayDayisontheway

Eg:学习英语很重要1.learningEnglishisveryimportant2.ItisimportanttolearnEnglish3.ItisofgreatsignificancetolearnEnglish4.Wearesupposedtoattachimportanceto…eg:他对科幻小说很感兴趣

1.Helikessciencefiction2.Heisfondofsciencefiction3.Heisinterestedinsciencefiction4.Heisintosciencefiction5.Heisabsorbedinsciencefiction6.Hehasloveforsciencefiction7.Hehasastrongappetiteforsciencefiction1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.

5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria

forthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Atthenewsofhisdeath,

shewentpalewithsorrow.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.

丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构〕利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感慨句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、

倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardlyhadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.4、

省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingor

ridingonabus.

Cometomeifnecessary.5、

with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwitha

handbaginherhand.6、

定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.7、

各种名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.

Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.8、

各种状语从句

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.

Docallmebeforehand

sothatIcanmeet

youattheairport.

Theyhadtowait

becausetherainwas

gettingmoreandmoreheavily.

1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.〔使用V-ing形式〕.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.〔使用名词性从句〕3.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气〕Onhis

arriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.〔使用状语从句〕

9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.〔用并列句〕10．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.高考大纲中常用的连接词1.

表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：what’smore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;

onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否那么:orelse;otherwise

5.表示时间关系当…的时候:

when;while在…之后:

after

在…之前:

before

直到:

until一…就…:

assoonas

后来，然后:

later;

afterwards不久:

soon

近来:

lately;

recently自从…:since从那时起:

fromthenon6.表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:

aboveall

其次:

secondly然后:

then;next

最后:

finally;eventually,intheend7.换一种方法表述换句话说:

inotherwords;thatistosay;namely

8.进行举例说明例如，比方:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.

对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,tosumup

其它常用到的副词

Therefore;otherwise;finally;

furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;增强阅卷人印象效果印象三种美外观美卷面整洁，字体标准，段落清晰2.语感美紧扣主题；层次清楚，词句高级3.素质美思想境界高；赋予哲理，韵味无穷对策五增强阅卷人印象效果印象三种美外观美卷面整洁，字体标准，段落清晰2.语感美紧扣主题；层次清楚，词句高级3.素质美思想境界高；赋予哲理，韵味无穷对策五1.根本句子翻译主语+谓语+宾语+。。。。2.同义词替换；句型转换3.限时训练〔30分钟〕4.学生之间互相批改，特别是标出高级的词汇和句子5.背诵佳句/谚语，优秀范文书面表达训练方式对策六

1.Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutthesun.

人生没有朋友犹如生活中没有太阳2.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难朋友才是真朋友3.Atruefriendisonesoulintwobodies.

挚友如异体同心4.Amanwhohasfriendmustshowhimselffriendly.要有朋友，必须以友谊待人(BOOK1Unit1Goodfiends)课文谚语/佳句摘选5.Weneverknowtheworthofwatertillthewellisdye.(Book1unforgettableexperience)

井枯方知水可贵6.Lovemakesonefitforwork.

爱能使人适合任何工作7.Ifyouwouldbeloved,loveandbeloveable.

如果你要人们爱你，你就要爱人，并且做个爱人的人8.Onlythroughhardworkcanweachieveourgoals.(Thesilverscreen)课本谚语/佳句的摘选9.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingman.

〔Greatman)世上无难事，只怕有心人

10.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成〔Greatman)11.WheninRome,doastheRomansdo入乡随俗〔Bodylanguage〕12.Asmilecanopenthedoorandteardownwalls.Itcanbeusedtoexpressanyemotion微笑能翻开门户，拆去高墙，表情达意13.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也会变傻14.Knowledgeispower知识就是力量15.Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration.

天才是百分之一的灵感加百分之九十的汗水16.Knowledgeisatreasure,butpracticeisthekeytoit知识是一座宝库，而实践是开启宝库的钥匙17.Thebestwealthishealth.最大的财富是健康18.Soundinbody,soundinmind

有健康的身体才有健康的心灵19.Hewhohashealthhashope,andwhohashopehaseverything.

身体健康就有希望，有了希望就有了一切假定你是李中华，Cherry是你的美国笔友。她发现在中国有不少家长在学校周围租房子，专陪同自己的孩子读书，她对此现象很感兴趣，来信向你了解此事。请你给她写封回信，简要分析当前中国的家长陪读现象产生的原因；并谈谈你对此现象的看法。要求：1、语音连贯，流畅，要点齐全；2、词数120词左右；3、首句和结尾已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：陪同：keepsbcompany（2010届荆州二调）短文写作（满分25分）一、审题1.话题：分析当前中国家长陪读现象2.体裁：书信+应用文3.人称：第一人称4.时态：一般现在时二、内容关键词:现象;原因；看法三形式：开放式完成此篇书面表达的流程Practice1评析二调学生习作Dearcherry:

GladtohearfromyouandthankyouforyourconcernforChinesestudents.

Asweknow,it’satraditionalideathatparentslovetheirchildrenmorethanthemselves.Intheireyes,achildistoaparentwhatwateristofish.Sonowadays,thereisatendencythatmanyparentsrenthousestokeeptheirchildrencompanyaroundtheirschools.

Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Firstofall,parentsthinktheirchildrenarenotindependentenoughtoattendtothemselves,thelessburdenindailylife,themoreprogressthechildrenwillmake.Themostimportantreasonisthattheyhopetheirchildrenwillstandoutfromtheirfellowsandbeadmittedtokeyuniversities.

ButasfarasI’mconcerned,studentsare

supposedtoliveontheirownwithouttheirparents’company.becauselittlebirdswillflyawayfromtheirmotherssoonerorlater.besides,itisofimportancetodeveloptheirabilityofindependenceandlearntofacedifficulties.Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrenstandontheirownfeetinthefiercecompetitionofsociety.

yourssincerely,LiZhonghua

Practice2批阅学生习作联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据以下提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，2005年后变化很大，人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建，新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读注意：1〕要点齐全，前后连贯2〕词数：100-120之间

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，2005年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Practice书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince2005.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!

Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!

①Thisvillage

isverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500

people.Itwasverypoor.

②

Ithas

changedalotsince2005③.Peoplehere④arericher

thanbefore.Nowitisnewandbeautiful.①Thisvillage,wherelive100families,isasmallonewithapopulationof500,whichusedtobepoor

②However,greatchangeshavetakenplacesince2005.

③Withthedevelopmentofsociety,Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.

学生原文：Nowthevillagetakesonanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.⑨

Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

But

nowithasbeenrebuiltthe

mostbeautifuloneinthevillage.⑨Muchtoourdelight,

alltheschool-agechildrenherecanenjoyeducationforfree.

⑦and

thenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧with

4storeys

is

⑩

Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!

Thankyou.

Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!

①Thisvillage,whereliveabout100familiesisasmallone

withapopulationof500,whichusedtobeverypoor.②

However,

greatchangeshavetakenplacesince2005③

andwiththedevelopmentofsociety.

④Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤

andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦

andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧

with4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Muchtoourdelight,alltheschool-agechildrenhere⑨canenjoyeducationforfree.

⑩

Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

书面表达图表类范例假设你叫李华，受某报社的委托，对你校高中一、二、三年级的近视情况作个调查，每个年级抽一个班。请根据以下图的抽样调查信息写一篇短文，介绍相关数据，并分析原因及措施。Practice3Recently,asimplesurveywascarriedoutinoneclassofeachgradeinourschoolabouthowserioustheproblemofshortsightisinseniorhighstudents.Theresultsaremorethanworrying

Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,about25%ofthestudentsinSenior1aresufferingfromshortsighted,whilethenumberhasclimbedto50%forSenior2students,withSenior3studentsatabout70%.

Severalreasonsmayaccountfortheworseningsituation.

Themainreasonisthatstudents,especiallythoseinSenior3,arefacedwithtoomuchpressurefromtheirschoolwork,simplyhavingnotimeforexercise.Becides,thestudentshavethemselvesbetoblame,formanyofthemdon’tattachgreatimportancetohowtoprotecttheireyes.

Astohowtogetthissituationimprovedbeforeitgetsworse,thereare

manymeasuresthatcanbetaken.Mostimportantofall,wemustbefullyawareof

theimportanceofprotectingoureyesandthereforehavethecorrectwaytouseoureyes.Secondly,wemustsparesometimeeverydaytoengageourselvesinexercise.

Inaword,eyeistomanwhatwatertofish.Onlyifpropermeasuresaretaken,willthesituationdefinitelygetimprovedandkeepoureyeshealthy.全文一般分为三段第一段：简要分析说明图表和图画内容。〔注意：1.简要2.围绕主题〕第二段：阐述观点并分析此现象产生的原因，必要时写出建议或措施。〔注意：1.一般2-3个原因，原因之间巧用链词2.理由/措施要具有说服力〕第三段：归纳总结。〔1—2句话〕注意：1.结束语要照应前文的观点2.句子简洁明了，赋予哲理3.不要写错句子，给阅卷人留下好的印象图表/图画作文模块第一段：AScanbeseeninthepicture…/Thepictureshowsusthat…/Fromthepicturewecansee…/nowadays/asweknow/第二段:原因：maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows,themainreasonisthat(原因一)，besides,〔原因二〕thelastbutthemostimportant,(原因三)措施：someeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakento….，firstofall(措施一)，inadditon(措施二)第三段：inaword,onlybydoing…canwe…或者使用谚语结尾

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