高考英语观点对比类作文写作技巧

高考英语

观点比照类作文

写作技巧三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。

一些同学认为

另一些同学认为1．应从儿童时期开始学习英语2．儿童时期记忆力好，可以记住很多单词3．能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，易混淆3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习讨论未取得一致意见注意：1．文章的起始句已给出；2．词数：100左右〔不包括已给的起始句〕；3．参考词汇：根底—foundation汉语拼音—Chinesepinyin审题

文体：时态：内容要点：

议论文一般现在时1．赞同儿童时期开始学英语。2．儿童记忆力好，记单词多。3．为今后打根底。4．反对从儿童时期开始学英语。5．既学汉语拼音又学英语易混淆。6．影响今后的汉语和英语的学习。7．结尾句。

Thestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.

Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Butothersdonotagree.

YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeverylikelyforthemtomixthemup.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.

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Thestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.

Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.ThiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Butothersdonotagree.

YoungchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.What’smore,

What’sworse,作文模板

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink_________should________._____.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_______shouldn’t______.What’sworse,______.

Inshort,_______havenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以……

Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以……

We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可以……

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…过渡句Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.

Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Differentpeople,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter.在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。主要有两种不同意见。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介绍正方观点：Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea.

Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…Somepeoplethinkthat…Accordingtothem,allofusshould...Somebelievethat…Theyareoftheopinionthat…进一步介绍正方观点What’smore,wecan…aswellas…Besides,it’s…,which…介绍反方观点However,…ofthestudentsthink…Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsthink…However,othershavedifferentopinions.But…ofthestudentsthink…Othersarguethat…Intheiropinion,…进一步介绍反方观点What’sworse…What’smore…Inaddition,…Besides,…Plus,…First,…Second,…Third,…总结句Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.Sofar,noagreementhasbeenreached.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.范例1：假设你事实李华，你班同学最近开长了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点．比例５５％４５％你的观点观点支持反对主要理由１．应该每天进行体育锻炼２．做早操，打乒乓球，打篮球，但时间不要过长３．锻炼能增强体质减少疾病４．锻炼能使大脑休息，使学习效果更好．１锻炼浪费时间２．锻炼使人疲劳３．锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习４．锻炼中可能受伤．．．．．．1.关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤takeexercisesdomorningexercisesbuildupthebodyreducethediseasehaveareststudymoreeffectivelyawasteoftimepayattentiontostudybehurt2.作文结构1.….havehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins./Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.2.55%ofthestudentsthink………….suchas(举例)……..〔原因〕…..3.Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelieve…….(原因〕……..4.Inmyopinion,Ipreferto

3.范文：

Recently,wehavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.Asweknow,everycoinhastwocoins.

55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeallkindsofexerciseseveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercises,playingtabletennisandplayingbasketball,butnotspendtoomuchtimeonthem.Asaproverbsays,”allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy."Exercisebuildsuptheirbodyandreducelotsofdiseases.Sportsletthemhaveagoodrestsothattheirstudywillbemoreeffective.

Ontheotherhand,45%ofthestudentsbelievetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeandtiring.Aftertakingexercise,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Andit’spossibletobehurtinsports.

Inmyopinion,Iprefertotakeproperexercisesinmysparetime.

范例２：某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers，whichdoyouprefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。

老年教师

青年教师·教学耐心．讲解细致．经验丰富·精力充沛．教学活泼．勇于创新

你的观点?

注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数；2．短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯学生作品1：

Comparewith

youngteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.

Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.They

notonly

sparenoeffort

toteachthestudents,butalso

giveclassescarefully.Theywill

doalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstand

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content.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,

especiallyforusseniorstudents.

Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这局部信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。∧1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting缺乏之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品2:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.

Somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience.

However,theothershaveadifferentopinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy.Besides,theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas.Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot.点评：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方：1〕2)3)＼4)1)prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones2)withexplanations3)the去掉4)TheyoungteachersOnepossibleversion:

Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsmaylikeelderlyteachers'teachingbecausetheythinkelderlyteachershavemoreteachingexperienceandthattheytendtobepatientandcarefulwithexplanations.Howe