专题五 写作-2024五年高考题分类训练（英语）

第1页专题五写作题型1应用文写作题组一Writing1.[2023新课标卷Ⅰ,15分]假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。DearRyan,I'mLiHuafromClass3.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作思路】【参考范文】DearRyan,I'mLiHuafromClass3.We'reoverwhelmedwithexcitementattheknowledgethatanoralEnglishclasswillbearrangedforus（同位语从句）.Butlearningthatwe'llberandomlypairedtodotheoralpractice,Ifeelanurgetoexpressmydifferentvoice,hopingthatthiswouldn'toffendyou（现在分词短语作伴随状语）.Tobeginwith,itcouldn'tbebetterifstudentswithmixedlevelsofEnglishcouldbegroupedtogetherdeliberatelyratherthanatrandom,sothatwecanhelpeachotherduringourpractice.Additionally,toensurethatouroralpracticegoessmoothly,Isuggestthatyouputthreetofourstudentstogether,withoneasthegroupleader（with复合结构）,inwhichcasewecancommunicatewitheachotheratagreatdepth（"介词+which+名词"引导定语从句）.Shoulditbepossible（虚拟语气和倒装句）,Itrulyhopeyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting2.[2023浙江1月，15分]上周末你参加了校学生会组织的"认识我们身边的植物"活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs【写作思路】【参考范文1】GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUsLastweekend,ItookpartinaneventheldbytheStudents'Union,whichisaimedateducatingusmoreaboutplantsaroundus（非限制性定语从句）.Initially,Iattendedalectureontheflowerproject.Thelectureraskedustowriteareviewonit.Sincetulipsaremyfavoriteplant（原因状语从句）,Ididwellandgotpraised.Additionally,Ivisitedthedesertexhibition.Learningmuchfromit（现在分词短语作状语）,Icametounderstandwhyplantsinthedeserthavesharpleaves（宾语从句）.Ultimately,Iwasintroducedtoabrochureabouttreesweusuallyseeinlife,whichbenefitedmealot.Undoubtedly,Igainednumerousknowledgeonplantsandhavebecomeinterestedinthemthroughthismeaningfulactivity.【参考范文2】GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUsLastSundaywitnessedmyparticipatinginameaningfulactivitynamed"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs"organizedbytheStudents'Union（过去分词短语作后置定语）.Tomakeuslearnmoreaboutdiverseplants（动词不定式短语作目的状语）,theorganizersledustoanearbybotanicgarden,whichpresenteduswithcolorfulanddistinctiveplants,suchasdaisies,daffodilsandsoon.Moreover,ariceexperteveninstructedustoobservethegrowthprocessofthehybridrice.Afterhisvividintroduction,theideathatitisdefinitelyYuanLongping'sintenseeffortsthatfeedsomanypeopleonEarth（同位语从句中嵌入强调句）struckmedeeply.TheactivitylastedforthewholedayandIfeltgreatlyluckytohavesuchapreciouschance.Writing3.[2022浙江，15分]假定你是李华，你校图书馆新设了小组学习室。请你给留学生同学Michael写邮件邀请他同去体验，内容包括：1.位置和开放时间；2.室内设施和功能。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】【参考范文】DearMichael,Sincethenewgroupstudyroomhasbeenopenrecently,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutogotherewithmetoexperienceit.Theroomisonthethirdfloorinourlibrary,whichisavailabletoallofthestudentsinourschool（非限制性定语从句）.Itissaidthattheroomisopenfrom8:00o'clockto20:00o'clockonweekends.Meanwhile,itisequippedwithalotofadvancedequipment,suchaswhiteboards,computersandself-servicemachines.Idobelievethatitwilldefinitelyhelpthestudentswiththeirstudyandimprovetheefficiency（do表强调；that引导宾语从句）.Wouldyouliketocomewithmetohaveatryinthisroom?Yours,LiHua题组二Writing1.[2022新高考卷Ⅰ，15分]假定你是校广播站英语节目"TalkandTalk"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。DearCaroline,Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作思路】【参考范文】DearCaroline,①BeinginchargeoftheEnglishprogram"TalkandTalk"runbyourschoolbroadcaststation,Ifeelmuchprivilegedtoinviteyoutoourprogramforalivetalkshow.Theprogram,meanttopromotetheinterestofthestudentsinEnglishlearningandbroadentheirhorizons（过去分词短语作后置定语）,iswidelypopularamongusstudents.Theinterviewwillbeheldat9thiscomingSundaymorning,lastingaboutanhour（现在分词短语作状语）.②YourtalkshowcancoveranythingrelatedtoEnglish,orwhatschoollifeislikeinyourcountry.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyinvitation.Yourssincerely,LiHua【一句多译】①AsI'minchargeoftheEnglishprogram"TalkandTalk",Iearnestlyinviteyoutobeourguestforaninterviewatourbroadcaststation.②Intheinterview/talkshow,youcantalkaboutanythingconcerningourEnglishstudy,orintroducetheschoollifeinyourcountrytous.Writing2.[2022浙江1月，15分]假定你是李华，在"中国——爱尔兰文化节"活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】本题要求考生给在活动中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件。考生可根据所给要点提示合理安排写作。首段开门见山，简要表达问候，说明写邮件的目的；第二段为文章的主体部分，重点描述活动经历并分享参与这次活动的收获；末段简要表达希望和Chris保持联系。考生可适当使用亮点词汇和高级句式，以提高得分档次。【参考范文】DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Withheartfeltdelight,I'mwritingtosharemysincerefeelingabouttheChina-IrelandCulturalFestivalwithyou.Althoughaweekhaspassedsinceyoureturnedhome（时间状语从句）,Icanstillrecalltheenjoyabletimewespenttogether.FromChinesecalligraphytoIrishpaintings,we'veexperiencedeachother'scultureaswellasthehistory.Besides,wealsoformedafriendshipwhichwillcertainlybecherishedforgood（which引导的定语从句）.Isincerelywishourfriendshipwilllastforever.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaWriting3.[2021新高考卷Ⅰ，15分]你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。YouthandMe【写作思路】【参考范文】YouthandMeBelieveitornot,①thefirsttimeIhappenedtoreadthenewspaperYouthacoupleofmonthsago,Ifeltanurgetofinishreadingitinonebreath.Fromthenon,Ibecameoneofitskeenreaders,nevermissingasingleissueofit（现在分词作伴随状语）.Whilemanycolumnsleaveadeepimpressiononme,thecolumnthatstandsoutmostisnoneotherthantheonewhereyouregularlyputarticlesaboutforeignculturesandthemostefficientwaysoflearningEnglish（定语从句）.②Ifeelprivilegedtohavebeenintroducedtoyournewspaper,whichdefinitelycontributesalottomyprogressinEnglishstudy.It'smysincerehopethatthenewspaperwillbemorepopularamongusstudents（主语从句）.【一句多译】①表达方式一：acoupleofmonthsago,whenIwasintroducedtoyournewspaperYouthforthefirsttime,Ifellinlovewithit表达方式二：it'squiteafewmonthssinceIbegantoreadyournewspaperYouth,whichhasbecomemyfavoritenow②表达方式一：It'smyprivilegetohavethechancetoreadYouth,anewspaperthathelpsmemakegreatprogressinmyEnglish.表达方式二：I'mhonoredtoreadyournewspaper,whichbenefitsmyEnglishstudyalot.题组三Writing1.[2021浙江，15分]昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括:1.展览时间、地点；2.观展感受；3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】仔细审题，明确写作步骤:1.审体裁&话题：应用文——宣传稿，宣传学生国画作品展2.审时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主3.写作要点：（1）展览时间、地点：本月每天下午3:00到5:00，校图书馆二层大厅；（2）观展感受：感受到了中国画的魅力，了解了中国文化，丰富了业余生活；（3）推荐大家观看展览。4.分段落，构建写作框架：第一段：引出话题；第二段：介绍展览时间、地点和观展感受；第三段：号召大家来观展。【参考范文】Yesterdayafternoon,myfriendsandIvisitedthetraditionalChinesepaintingexhibitioninthehallonthesecondflooroftheschoollibrary.Theexhibitionopensfrom3:00to5:00everyafternoonthismonth.Allthepaintingsondisplayareworksbystudentsofourschool.Somepaintingsareaboutscenesofnature,andsomeareaboutdailylife.Iamdeeplyimpressedbythevividscenesthepaintingsshowandthestudents'skills.Howtalentedtheyare!Theexhibitioniswellworthseeing.ComeandenjoythefeastoftraditionalChinesepainting!Writing2.[2021浙江1月，15分]假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dearfriends,WefeelsodelightedbyyourvisitandI'mextendingourwarmestwelcometoyouonbehalfofourschool.Wehavemadeadetailedarrangementforyou.First,you'llbeshownaroundourschoolandhavelunchatalocalrestaurant,whereyoucanhaveatasteofauthenticChinesefood（非限制性定语从句）.ThenatalkconcerningChineseandNewZealandcultureisscheduledtodeepenmutualunderstanding.Aimingtopromoteourfriendshipfurther（现在分词短语作状语）,wealsoplantoorganizeafriendlybasketballmatch.Wesincerelyhopeyouhavearewardingandmemorabletime!Writing3.[2020新高考卷Ⅰ，15分]假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace【写作思路】本题要求写一篇活动报道，介绍学校举办的5公里越野赛跑，为半开放性写作。写作时需要注意：1.审要点。题目给了三个要点（参加人员；跑步路线；活动反响），根据要点内容合理安排每个要点的详略，参加人员简述即可，跑步路线和活动反响可以详细写作。2.审时态和人称。题目要求报道已经发生过的活动，所以时态主要用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。3.提分词汇和句式。写作时注意各要点之间使用合适的关联词衔接，并运用一些高级词汇和高级句式来为自己的作文提升得分档次。【参考范文】ACross-CountryRunningRace①Inordertoenrichourcampuslife,ourschoolorganizeda5kmcross-countryrunningracelastSunday.②Ninetystudentsfromtwentyclassesparticipatedintherace,amongwhomthirtyweregirls（非限制性定语从句）.Participantssetoutat9amfromourschoolgate,throughtheRenminPark,andfinallyarrivedatthefootoftheNanshanMountain.Aftertherace,wefeltthatnotonlydidtheeventimproveourphysicalandpsychologicalquality（倒装）,butitalsohelpedusbuildapositiveattitudetowardslife.Wedohopethatourschoolcancarryoutmoresimilaractivitiesinthefuture.【一句多译】①Withtheintentionofenrichingourcampuslife,ourschoolorganizeda5kmcross-countryrunningracelastSunday.②Ninetystudentsfromtwentyclasses,thirtygirlsincluded,tookpartintherace.题组四Writing1.[2023全国卷乙，25分]学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.简要描述;2.体验和感受。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。LearningaNewSkill【写作思路】【参考范文】LearningaNewSkillItisimportantforustomastersomebasiclivingskillstoprepareusforourfuturelife.ThatiswhyIlearnedhowtocookduringtheMayDayholiday（表语从句）.Sincemymotherisskilledatcooking（原因状语从句）,Idecidedtolearnfromher.Earlyinthemorningweboughtsomeingredients,includingsomevegetables,meatandafishinthelocalmarket.Oncewegotbackhome（时间状语从句）,Ibegantowashandcutthemcarefully.Undertheguidanceofmymother,Iturnedonthegascooker.Ifirststir-friedtwovegetables.ThenIcookedmeatwithpotatoes.Themostdifficulttasktodowascookfishwithtomatoes.However,Ifinallydidit.ThemomentIputthedishesonthetable（时间状语从句）,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.IfeltsoproudthatIsharedhouseworkwithmyparents,whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup（定语从句）.Writing2.[2023全国卷甲，25分]你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意:1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。TheHistoricalFigureinChina【写作思路】【参考范文】TheHistoricalFigureinChinaAmongtheChinesehistoricalfiguresthatarewidelyacknowledged（定语从句）,FanZhongyanisthemostinfluentialinmyopinion.Herearethereasons.KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty（过去分词短语作状语）,FanZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehemadegreatcontributionstosociety.Hesparednoefforttocarryoutaseriesofreformstomakehiscountryprosperous.Besides,heproposedtheestablishmentofanationalschoolsystem,whichhadafar-reachinginfluenceontheChineseeducationalsystem（非限制性定语从句）.Whatimpressesmemost（主语从句）ishisfamousphilosophyoflife:"Bethefirsttoworryaboutthetroublesacrosstheland,thelasttoenjoyuniversalhappiness."FanZhongyanissucharolemodelthathealwaysencouragesmetobeamanofnoblecharacter（结果状语从句）.Writing3.[2022全国卷乙，25分]学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.【写作思路】【参考范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.Asthechartshows,studentsadoptdifferentwaystolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroom.①ThepercentofthestudentswholistentoEnglishsongs（定语从句）isashighas65%.50%ofthemwatchEnglishmovieswhileonly18%readEnglishbooks.ThosewhovisitEnglish-learningwebsitesaccountfor12%.②ThefiguresofthechartsuggestthatthereareavarietyofwaystolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomwiththedevelopmentofmoderntechnology.StudentscanchoosewhattheyliketoenrichtheirEnglish-learningexperiences.AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeakingsothattheycandeveloptheircommunicationskills（目的状语从句）.【一句多译】①表达方式一：Asmanyas65%ofthestudentsturntoEnglishsongs.表达方式二：Themajorityofstudents（65%）choosetolistentoEnglishsongs.表达方式三：StudentslisteningtoEnglishsongsaccountfor65%.②表达方式一：ThefiguresofthechartshowtherearevariousapproachestolearningEnglishbeyondtheclassroomwiththedevelopmentofmoderntechnology.表达方式二：Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,awiderangeofwaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.题组五Writing1.[2022全国卷甲，25分]你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.【写作思路】写作类型应用文——短文投稿——倡议书写作时态一般现在时介绍海洋的重要性一般将来时表达期待写作人称以第一人称和第三人称为主写作要点第一段引入话题，表明主题第二段阐述海洋的重要性第三段发出保护海洋的倡议并提出具体举措语言特点语言应严谨、真挚、有感染力，能够充分说明海洋的重要性，并让人意识到保护海洋的紧迫性【参考范文】OurOceans,OurResponsibilityJune8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorldOceansDay.Itaimstoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingoceans.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatoceansplayacriticalroleintheworld.Notonlydotheyprovideabundantresourcesandfoodforus（倒装句）,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.①Additionally,oceansare"thelungsofourplanet",providingmostoftheoxygenwebreathe（非谓语动词短语，其中包括一个省略that的定语从句）.Ashighschoolstudents,wearesupposedtoburdenourselveswiththeresponsibilityofprotectingthem.Firstofall,dowhatwecan（宾语从句）tomakeadifference.Forexample,stopthrowinggarbageintooceans.Inaddition,callonpeoplearoundustotakeaction,too.Ibelievewewillhavecleaneroceans（宾语从句）.【一句多译】①表达方式一：Inaddition,being"thelungsofourplanet",oceansprovidemostoftheoxygenwebreathe.表达方式二：Furthermore,oceans,whichare"thelungsofourplanet",providemostoftheoxygenwebreathe.Writing2.[2021全国卷乙，25分]你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。BesmartonlinelearnersOnlinelearninghasbecomeanimportantwaytolearnrecently.【写作思路】根据试题的写作要求，考生应以"Besmartonlinelearners"为题，写一篇发言稿参加英语演讲比赛。如上图所示，我们可以分为三部分。第一部分引出话题——网络学习；第二部分对网络学习的利弊进行分析，并针对如何使用网络进行学习提出一些建议；第三部分简要总结自己的观点。由于发言稿具有口语的特点，要使听众听懂,文章就要条理清楚、层次分明；而且要尽量使用简短的句子和口语化的语言。此外，我们要动之以情、晓之以理，语言富有"鼓动"性，可使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式，以增强语言的感染力。【参考范文】BesmartonlinelearnersOnlinelearninghasbecomeanimportantwaytolearnrecently.However,onlinelearninghasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Itsadvantagesareobvious.①Itallowsustolearnatanytimewhereverweare（地点状语从句）.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.②However,itsdisadvantagescannotbeignored.Staringatthescreenisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon'thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswisetotakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutes（"itis+adj.+不定式"句式）.③Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology（"only+介词短语"位于句首引起的部分倒装）.【一句多译】①表达方式一：It'sconvenienttolearnonlinebecausewecanlearnanytimeanywhere.表达方式二：Onlinelearningallowsustolearnwhateverwelikeoutsidetheclassroom.表达方式三：ThankstotheInternet,wecanmakeuseofallkindsofresourcestolearnnomatterwhenitisandnomatterwhereweare.②表达方式一：However,thereareproblemswithonlinelearning.表达方式二：Whileonlinelearningisbeneficial,itcanbeharmfultous.表达方式三：Inspiteofitsadvantages,onlinelearninghassomedisadvantages.③表达方式一：Inaword,onlybybecomingsmartonlinelearnerscanwebenefitfrommoderntechnology.表达方式二：Let'sbesmartonlinelearners,andthenwecanenjoythebenefitsofonlinelearning.Writing3.[2021全国卷甲，25分]假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1.阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】本篇书面表达的写作任务是向外国友人Chris了解他们对哪些中国传统文化更感兴趣，任务情境真实，要点设置开放性和灵活性强，突出了对写作这一关键能力的考查，而且为不同英语水平的考生提供了发挥空间和条件。【参考范文】DearChris,How'severythinggoing?AschoolwidediscussionwhosethemeistraditionalChinesecultureistakingplaceinourschoolandtheupcomingresultswillbedisplayedontheEnglishwebsite.Iamwonderingifyoucouldtellmewhatmightattractforeignersmostamongthesetopics,suchaspapercutting,calligraphy,BeijingOpera,andChinesepainting.①AsyouhaveapassionfortraditionalChineseculture,yoursuggestionswillbegreatlyhelpfultous.②TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldonMay15intheformofclassmeetingsandthedisplaywillstartonMay25,whichwillbeagoodopportunitytolearnabouttraditionalChinesecultureforbothusandforeigners（非限制性定语从句）.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtellmeyouropinion.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【一句多译】①SinceyouarefondoftraditionalChineseculture,yourfeedbackwillbeofgreathelptous.②TheactivityisscheduledforMay15intheformofclassmeetingsanditwillprovideforeignersaswellasuswithagoodchancetolearnabouttraditionalChineseculture.题组六Writing1.[2020全国卷Ⅰ，25分]你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThepersonIrespectTherearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.