仁爱版教材八年级上册写作指导+单元作文范文

写作课ByNancyStep1审题：

时态、人称和文体要点Step2根据要点，有效表达不遗漏要点多用熟悉的句型:so...that,

善用衔接过渡语：连词，插入语，介词短语等Step3检查句子是否流畅？正确？语法？拼写？大小写？标点符号Howtowriteanarticle

插入语：What'smore,Asweknow,Asaresult,总结性语言:inaword=inshort,

atlast,intheend,atleast thatistosay(那就是说），inotherwordsItisadj(forsb)todosthIt'stimetodosthIt'sawasteoftimeto....sbspend钱/时间onsth/doingsthIttakessb时间todosth:做某事花费某人多长时间sthbeimportanttosb:…对某人很重要begood/badforsth/sbBegoodat/dowellinmakesbadj/keepsbadj(e.g.excited/angry/relaxed)makesbdo/helpsb(to)do常用短语1Doyouknow(whyIlike…best)?Nowletmetellyou.so...that,inorderto,sothat,too…toas...astryone’sbestIwillworkhardertodosthsbhadbetter(not）doThemoreyoudo,themoreyouget使用连词：so,because,but,and,if宾语从句：Ihope/think/believe/suggest/know/find/…Inthefuture,IhopethatInmyopinion,Ithinkthat...Isuggestthat常用短语2书写规范工整，卷面整洁，无涂改痕迹分段合理。让阅卷老师很容易找到作文要求的要点和重点句子要点齐全，不缺内容，充分利用提示词开头言简意赅，不罗嗦，不偏题。段与段之间、句语句之间，自然过渡，有合适的连接词。不乱用复合句，巧妙使用连词:when,because,so,if,but,and等内容积极向上总结：Unit2你认为在学校生活中，我们应养成哪些好习惯？下面是李云楠同学记录的“保持健康”建议。请根据内容提示，以TheWaystoKeepHealthy为题,写一篇作文。三要：要多吃水果和蔬菜，多喝开水；要多运动晚上睡眠时间要不少于8个小时三不要：晚上不要不要吃太多的糖和咖啡或茶工作或学习不要太劳累写作提示：直接表达提示内容，写明“三要”与“三不要的利弊”最后陈述自己的愿望提示词：getup，gotobed,eatvegetables,atleast,ever,drinkmilk,takeexercise,everyday,toomuch,keepingoodhealthUnit2–Topic2作文TheWaystoKeepHealthyItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy,Therearemanywaystohelpyoukeephealthy.First,youcaneatmorefruitandvegetables,andyou’dbetterdrinkmoreboiledwater.Next,youhavetodolotsofexerciseandhaveatleast8hours’sleepanight.Don’tdrinkcoffeeorteabeforeyougotobed.Don’teattoomuchsugar.Don’tworkorstudytoolate,becauseitwillmakeyoutootired.Goodhabitshelpyoukeepingoodhealth.Unit2–Topic2作文假如你要在下周的英语课上发表演讲，介绍自己的生活习惯，请你用英语写一篇短文，就自己的好习惯和坏习惯进行总结和反思，为次演讲做准备。

【思路点拨】体裁：说明文时态：介绍日常习惯，用一般现在时人称:第一人称【布局】Paragraph1：引出话题Paragraph2：介绍“我”的好习惯Paragraph3：介绍“我”的坏习惯Paragraph4：做总结Unit2作文Goodmorning,everyone.I’mhappytogiveatalktoday.I’lltalkaboutmyhabits.Ontheonehand,Ihavesomegoodhabits.Ilikeplayingsports,soIoftenplaybasketballafterschool.Ineverstayuplatebecauseitisbadformyhealth.What’smore,Ilistencarefullytotheteachersinclass,andIalwaysfinishmyhomeworkontime.Ontheotherhand,Ialsohavesomebadhabits.Idon’tlikeeatingvegetables.Tokeephealthy,itisnecessarytoeatvegetables,soIamgoingtoeatmorevegetablesfromnowon.Also,Iamnotcarefulenough.Badhabitsdiehard,butit’snevertoolatetogivethemup.Asformygoodhabits,Iwilltrytokeepthem.That’sall.Thankyou.Unit2作文期中每个人都有自己喜欢的运动，请你根据以下提示，以“MyFavoriteSport”为题，写一篇短文内容提示：运动项目：足球特点：足球是世界上最流行的运动之一。有数百年的历史运动频率：每天花半个小时踢足球。

梦想：DavidBeckham是我最喜欢的运动员，长大后想要成为像他一样的足球选手。

优点：

1.是一种保持健康的好方法。2.能够使我强壮。3.对我的腿，心脏有好处。4..........要求：1.80词左右；2.包括提示内容，可适当发挥；2019年作文题目MyfavoritesportIam****.Myfavoritesportisfootball.Itisoneofthemostpopularsportsintheworld.Ithasahistoryofhundredsofyears.AndIspendhalfanhourplayingfootballeveryday.DavidBeckhamismyfavoriteplayer.IamgoingtobeafootballplayerlikehimwhenIgrowup.Ilikeplayingfootball.Becauseitisagoodwaytokeephealthy.Itcanmakemestrong.It’sgoodformylegsandheart.Icanalsomakemanyfriends.

2019年作文题目假如你叫李波，你的爷爷已经80多岁了，但身体依然健康，因为他保持良好的生活习惯。请你根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍一下你爷爷的健康生活。可适当发挥。

要求：1.

每天锻炼，经常散步。有好的饮食习惯。充足的睡眠和休息，保持乐观心态。不吸烟，不喝酒。

2020年期中作文I’mLiBo.Mygrandfatherisover/morethan80yearsold,butheisstillveryhealthy.Nowletmetellyousomethingabouthishealthylife.First,heoftendoesexercise.HealwaysdoesTaiChiintheparkinthemorning.Andhealwaystakesawalkafterdinner.Second，hehashealthyeatinghabits.Everydayheeatsalotofvegetablesandfruit.Heseldomeatsmeatorsugar.Third,hehasenoughsleepandrest.Andhealwayskeepshappy/heisalwaysinagoodmood.Last/Finally,heneverdrinksandsmokes.Thesehealthyhabitshelpmygrandfatherkeephealthy.2020年期中作文注意： 1.以第三人称写作文 2.谓语动词用单三Unit3Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.Doyouknowwhatismyhobbies?(万能句式）Iusedtorideabikeandreadstorybooks.Theycouldgivemelotsofinformationabouttheworld.Ikeepcatsanddogs.Ithoughtpetswereveryfriendlyandlovely,butnowIlikelisteningtomusicandchattingontheInternet,becausemusiccanrelaxmeafterthedailyworkandchattingcanbringmehappinessandfriendship.

Ihavedifferenthobbiesindifferentseasons.Inspring,Ilikeflyingkites.Insummer,Igoswimming.Ioftenclimbhillsinfall.Ilikemakingsnowmenbestinwinter.

MyhobbiesMyhobbiesInthepastReasonNowReasoncollectstampsreadbooksfunlearn...from......listentothemusicplaybasketball…help...relax...begoodfor...….请你根据下面表格中的提示，写一篇关于爱好的文章。

要求：1、文章要体现表格中的所有提示，可适当发挥。

2、词数不少于70词。

(总)Ihavesomehobbiesandtheyarechangingallthetime.Doyouwanttoknow?Nowletmettellyou.(letmesharewithyou)(过去-用过去式)Inthepast,Iusedtobefondofcollectingstamps.Ithoughtcollectingthemwasalotoffun.Icouldalsolearnalotoffamouspersonsandeventsfromthestamps.Iwasalsointerestedin(reading)booksbecauseIcouldlearnmanyfunnythingsbyreadingbooks.(现在-用一般现在时)Butnow,Ienjoylisteningtomusicinmyfreetime.Musiccanhelpmerelaxafterhardwork.Ibecomeinterestedinplaying

basketball.It’sgoodformyhealthsoIoftenplaywithmyfriendsonWeekends.What’smore,Icanmakemanyfriends.最后总结Hobbieshelpmealotinmanywaysandmakemylifecolorful.Whatisyourhobbies?Sharethemwithme!MyhobbiesUnit3Topic1Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.Doyouknowwhatismyhobby?(万能句式）Myhobbyisdoingoutdoorsports,suchascycling,mountainclimbingandskating.Doingoutdoorsportsisnotonlygoodformyhealthbutalsogoodformymind.IusedtobeweakbecauseIdidn’tlikedoingsports.AfterIbegantodooutdoorsports,Mybodygotbetterandbetter.Alsothanksto(多亏)outdoorsports,Imadesomegoodfriends.Ifeelhappyaboutthat.DoingoutdoorsportsisagreathobbyandI’llkeepdoingit.Ialsowanttostartmorenewhobbiesinthefuture.MyhobbyUnit3Topic2Iamamusicfanlikemostyoungpeople.Ilikepopmusicbestbecauseitisaboutmyeverydaylife.Listeningtopopmusicmakesmefeelrelaxed.Ofallthepopsingers(of后面表范围“在所有流行歌手里面”),IlikeTaylorSwiftbestandcansingmostofhersongs.What’smore,Ioftentakepartinthesingingcompetitioninmyschool.Ihaveadream.Thatistoholdmyownconcertoneday.Tomakeitcometrue,Iplantogotoagoodschooltolearnmoreaboutmusicandpracticemysingingskills.IlovemusicUnit3DearJack,I’mhappytohearfromyou.Everythingisgoingverywell.Ienjoyreadinginmyfreetime.Ispendatleasttwelvehoursreadingeveryweek.Ireaddifferentkindsofbooks,suchasstorybooks,picturebooks,sciencebooksandsoon.Forme,booksarelikefriends.Icanlearnalotfromgood.Ilikee-booksbetter

thanpaperbooks.Paperbooksusuallycostmorethane-books.Also,paperbooksareheavytotake.Icanreade-booksatanyplaceandatanytime.ReadingisaninterestingthingtodoandIhopeyoucanshareyourideasaboutreadingwithme.Yours,LiPingUnit4如何写一篇“HowtoprotectXXX”的文章？结构：

总(Why)：简单说XXX对我们很重要，所以要保护。我有几条建议想法。

分(How)：Howtoprotect

总(summary)：

Thesearemysuggestions.

Whataboutyours？Pleasesharewithme

2.参考短语：BeimportanttosbIt‘sadjforsbtodoIt’stimetodosth.savepaperuselesspaper(以保护环境，热带雨林为例）cutdownasksbnottodomakesb/sthadjTopic1

Rainforestsareveryimportanttousbecausetheycancontroltheclimate.Itisnecessaryforustoprotectthemverywell.Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldmakemorepeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingrainforests.Thenweaskpeoplenottocutdownthetreeswithoutplans.Forus,weshoulddosomethingwecan.Forexample,wecansavepaperasmuchaspossible.Whenwehavemeals,wemustn’tusechopsticksforonlyonce.Thesearemyownsuggestions.Whatareyours?PleasetellmeHowtoprotectrainforest假如你所在的英语社团将举办以Myfavoriteanimal为题的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示问题用英语写一篇短文，为征文比赛做准备。提示问题：1)你最喜欢的动物是什么；2)它长什么样，吃什么，有什么生活习性；

3)……写作要求：1)文中须包含以上提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3)词数90左右。Topic1Myfavoriteanimalisthekoala.ItisasymbolofAustralia.Koalashavelargeheadsandbignoses.Theycangrowto0.6to0.85meterslong.Theyliveintheeucalyptusforestsandtheymainlyfeedoneucalyptusleaves.Koalasliveaslowlife.Theyusuallysleepinthedaytimeandfindfoodatnight.Theycansleepupto20hoursaday.Ithinkkoalasarethecutestanimalsintheworld.TheyareourgoodfriendsandweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthemMyfavoriteanimal今年9月5日，四川泸定县发生6.8级地震，造成很多人员伤亡。如果我们能掌握一些求生技巧，在发生重大地震时就能减少伤亡。请以“Howtoprotectourselvesinanearthquake”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你知道的地震求生技巧。要点提示：1)地震前应做哪些准备；2)地震时应该怎么做； 3)地震后应该注意些什么。写作要求：1)文中须包含以上提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；3)词数90左右Topic2Earthquakeshappensometimes.Inordertokeepsafe,wemustlearnhowtoprotectourselves.Beforeanearthquake,weshouldlearntoturnoffthewater,gasandelectricity.Wemustkeepbedsandchairsawayfromwindows.Alsodon’tputheavythingsonhighshelves.Duringanearthquake,weshouldbecalmandkeepawayfromwindows.We’dbetterstayunderstrongfurnitureandcoverourheadswithourhands.Afteranearthquake,weshouldcheckonourfamilyandneighbors.Call120forhelpifanyoneisseriouslyhurt.HowtoprotectourselvesinanearthquakeTopic3Hello,everyone.Ilikereadinginmyfreetime.Ispendaboutanhourreadingeveryday.IusuallyreadEnglishnovels,newspapersandmagazines.Englishnovelsaremyfavorite.IliketakingnotesinEnglishwhenIdothereading.Byreading,Icannotonlyhavemuchfunbutalsogetalotofknowledge.Atthesametime,myEnglishimprovegreatly.IlearnmanyEnglishwords,andI’mdoingbetterandbetterinEnglishreadingandwriting.ReadinghelpsmealotandI’llkeepreadinginthefuture.That’sall.ThanksforlisteningExample假如你是你校英语校报的小记者，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇英语短文报道你校部分学生参加的暑期社会实践活动——“体验乡村生活”，并谈谈你的看法。要点提示：1)学生们住在农家；2)他们学习了如何种植土豆、胡萝卜等蔬菜；

3)他们帮忙采摘（pick）了一些水果；4)他们还帮忙喂鸡、鸭和猪；5)你认为……Somestudentsinourschooltookpartinanactivitynamed“ExperienceLifeintheCountryside”duringthesummerholiday._____________________作文2Inordertohaveabetterunderstandingofthelifeinthecountryside,theystayedinfarmers’houses.Duringtheirstayonthefarm,thestudentslearnthowtoplantvegetableslikepotatoesandcarrots.Theyhelpedpicksomeofthefruits.Also,theyhelpedfeedanimalssuchaschickens,ducksandpigs.Thesethingswerenoteasytodo,butthestudentstriedtheirbesttodothemwell.Ithinkthisisaverymeaningfulschoolactivity.Throughsuchanactivity,thestudentscannotonlygetclosetonaturebutalsolearnsomethingnewIlovemusic英语作为一门国际语言,在世界各国人民的交往中发挥着重要作用,我们都应该学好它。请以“HowtolearnEnglishwell”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你学英语的方法和经验。要点

1)学习英语的重要性

2)你有哪些学习英语的好方法;3)总结或鼓励。要求

1)文中不得出现与本人真实信息。

2)词数90。Englishisanimpor