求助信咨询信信和慰问信作文指导课件-高考英语一轮复习

求助信、咨询信、推荐信和慰问信文体(一)

求助信

求助信是针对目前自己遇到的一些困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型。一般是就自己目前的困境求助,所以以一般现在时为主;若涉及过往遭遇,则可用一般过去时。因为是向对方求助,所以言辞要诚恳,如实说出自己的困难和迫切需要帮助的境况;此外还要提前表达谢意。具体写作结构如下:1.吸引眼球开头句①IamamiddleschoolstudentandIamwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastroubledme.我是一名中学生。我写信告诉您一个困扰我的问题。②I’mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.我写信是想问您能否帮我一个忙。③I’mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpmewith...我想知道您是否能费心帮我……⑤Ihavedifficultyindoing...whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择,只能向您求助。④I’msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.很抱歉打扰您,但我有些困难需要您的帮助。2.亮点出彩篇中句①Iseemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.在这儿我似乎不能与他人融洽相处。②IlongtolearnEnglishwell,butIdon’tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望学好英语,但我不知道怎么学,这使我很烦恼。③WhatbothersmeisthatIdon’tknowwhattodo.困扰我的事情是我不知道要做什么。④Ican’tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedays,andIfailedinthelastexam,whichworriesmealot.这些日子我不能专心学习,上次考试我没及格,这使我很着急。⑤Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon’tknowhowithascomeabout.在这所学校我经常感到受冷落,我不知道这是怎么回事。⑥Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的困难,我不得不向您求助。3.韵味无穷结尾句①I’meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I’meagerforyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到您及时的帮助。②Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme.../Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavourand...如果您能帮助我……我会非常感激。③I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.如果您能考虑我的请求,我将不胜感激。④Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgive/lendmeahand.如果您能帮助我,我将十分感激。Dear

⁠,

Mynameis

⁠.I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.(说明自己的身份,提出写信目的)

Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein

⁠(交代自己面临的困难).Besides,I’mveryupsetthat

⁠(提出令自己苦恼的问题).What’smore,Idon’tknow

⁠(进一步说明自己的困境).I’mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindasto

⁠sothat

⁠(请求对方帮助).Inthemeantime/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto

⁠sothat

⁠(再次请求对方的帮助).

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand(表达对对方帮助的感激).I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua

假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtolearnfromyouaboutwhichtraditionalChinesecultureismoreappealingtoforeignfriends.Ourschoolplanstoholdaclassmeetingwhose

theme

is

to

introduce

traditional

Chinese

culture.Themeetingwill

be

displayedontheEnglishwebsite.Inordertocarry

forwardthetraditionalChinesecultureandattractmoreforeignfriends,we’redeterminedtomakethemeetingmeaningfulandimpressive.Ido

hopeyoucangiveussomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyassoonaspossiblewithgratitude.Yours,LiHua【名师点评】1.文章开篇表明写信意图;随后说明求助的具体内容(向对方了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人);最后表达希望和感激。2.范文中使用了appealing,carryforward,impressive,gratitude等高级词汇,并运用了较多的语法结构,如whose引导的定语从句、动词不定式短语作表语、被动语态、强调等。这丰富了文章的语言结构,展示了较强的综合运用语言的能力,增加了文章的亮点。

假定你是红星中学即将毕业的高三学生李华,最近你和父母在大学专业的选择上有些争论。请给你的外教Black写一封求助信,内容包括:1.求助缘由;2.你的选择和理由;3.你的期望。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。DearBlack,Longtimenosee!

⁠Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,

LiHua参考范文:DearBlack,Longtimenosee!I’llgraduatefromseniorhighschoolsoon.Recently,Iarguedwithmyparentsaboutthechoiceofthemajoratcollege.Asdoctors,myparentswishmetomajorinmedicineandbecomeadoctor.However,I’vebeeninterestedinvehiclessinceIwasinprimaryschool.Ithinknewenergyvehicleswillhaveapromisingfuture.SoIplantomajorinAutomobileEngineeringatcollege.Idon’tknowwhetherIshouldsticktomychoiceandpersuademyparentstochangetheirminds.Iwonderifyoucangivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua文体(二)

咨询信

咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。具体写作结构为:1.吸引眼球开头句①I’mwritingtoinquireifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding/concerning...我写信想询问您是否能提供给我关于……的信息。②I’dliketoknowwhetheryoucantellmesomethingabout...我想知道您是否能告诉我有关……的情况。③I’mwonderingifyoucouldprovidesomespecificinformationabout/relatedto...我想知道您是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。④Iwonder/amwonderingifyoucould/wouldletmeknowsomethingabout...我不知道您是否能够告知我有关……的情况。⑤I’mLiHua,aChinesestudentplanningto.../astudentinterestedin...I’mwritingtoinquire/askforsomeinformation/detailsabout...我是李华,一个计划……的中国学生/一个对……感兴趣的学生。我写信是为了咨询有关……的一些信息/细节。2.亮点出彩篇中句①I’dliketoknowsomethingabout...Iwouldalsoliketoinquire...我想知道关于……的一些事情。我还想咨询……②AnotherpointIamuncertain/unclearaboutis...我还不确定的另外一点是……③Couldyoubesokindastotellmethetimearrangementfor...您能告诉我……的时间安排吗④I’dbegratefulifyoucouldletmeknowifthereareanyspecialrequirementsfor...如果您能告诉我对……有何特殊要求,我将不胜感激。⑤I’dalsoliketoseeksomehelp/informationon...我还想寻求一些有关……的帮助/信息。⑥Ifthereisanythingelsethatneedsspecialattention,pleaseinformmeatyourconvenience.如果还有其他需要特别注意的地方,请在您方便时告诉我。3.韵味无穷结尾句①Couldyoubesokindastooffermesome...ontheabove-mentionedproblems您能否就上面提到的问题给我提供一些……②Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourtimelyattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.感谢您的善意,对于您对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。③I’mlookingforwardto/eagerforafavourablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.我盼望您方便时尽早回复好消息。④MayIhaveyourreplyby...(日期),ifpossible如果可能的话,我可否在……之前收到您的答复呢⑤Iwouldgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience.请方便时尽早回信,对此我将不胜感激。Dear

⁠,

Iam

⁠(自我介绍).Havingread

⁠(信息来源),Ifeelinterestedandwanttojoinin

⁠(活动).Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithsomespecificinformationregarding

⁠(要询问的内容).

Tobeginwith,couldyoubesokindastotellme

⁠(第一个问题)Besides,Iwouldalsoliketoknow

⁠(第二个问题).Inaddition,Iwonder

⁠(第三个问题).What’smore,whatdeservesmyspecialattentionis

⁠(最重要的一个问题).

Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourearlyreplytothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours,

LiHua

假定你是红星中学高三学生李华,得知某国外语言培训机构正在全球招聘在线中文辅导教师。请你写一封信表达授课意愿,并就以下问题提出咨询:1.上课时间;2.上课报酬。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionofpart-timeChineseteacheradvertised

on

the

Internet.IamverymuchinterestedinthejobandIthinkI’mfullyqualified

forit.Firstofall,thetimetableisof

the

greatest

concerntome.

If

onlyitwerescheduledatweekends!Besides,

nothing

could

be

betterifyouoffermesomedetailsaboutthepay.Iwouldappreciateitifitisconvenientforyoutoprovidemewiththerelevantinformation.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【名师点评】1.文章开篇表明授课意愿;随后询问具体问题(上课时间及报酬);最后表达希望和感激。2.范文中使用了bequalifiedfor,ofgreatconcern,schedule,relevant等高级词汇,并运用了较多的语法结构,如过去分词短语(advertisedontheInternet)作后置定语、ifonly句型、“否定词＋比较级”(nothingcouldbebetter)表示最高级含义等。这些表达增强了文章的表达效果,彰显了作者较强的语言运用能力,增加了文章的亮点。

假定你是李华,计划寒假期间去英国某校开办的为期六周的培训班学习英语。请你给该校负责人写一封信,询问有关情况,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.咨询内容(班级大小、课时、费用及住宿问题等);3.期盼回复。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考范文:DearSirorMadam,I’mastudentfromChinaandIplantoattendtheEnglishcourseofyourschoolduringthewintervacation.I’mwritingtoenquireaboutthedetailsofyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.Myfirstconcerniswhenthecoursestarts.Besides,couldyoupleaseoffermesomeinformationontheclasssizeandyourtuitionpolicyI’malsowonderinghowmanyperiodseachweek,forIprefersometimeatmydisposal.Finally,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtellmesomeinformationaboutaccommodationmoreclearlyandexactly.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandthankyouinadvance.Yours,

LiHua文体(三)

推荐信

推荐信是向收信人推荐人/事物(包括人文历史,旅游观光和文体娱乐等)的书信,推荐物品等时应写清物品的好处或优点,用词应简洁明了。具体写作结构为:1.吸引眼球开头句①LearningthatyouarecomingtovisitChina,I’dliketorecommendseveralplacesofinteresttoyou.得知你将来中国游玩,我想向你推荐几处名胜。②Glad/Pleased/DelightedtoknowthatyouaretravellinginShanghai,IthinkitagoodchoicetovisitHuangpuRiver.很高兴得知你在上海旅游,我认为游玩黄浦江是个不错的选择。④I’mmorethanglad/pleased/delightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoBeijing,andI’dliketooffermyrecommendations.得知你要去北京我很高兴,我想向你提议。③Havinglearntthatourlibraryisplanningtobuynewbooks,I’mwillingtorecommendsomebookstoyou.得知我们图书馆计划买新书,我愿意向你推荐一些书。2.亮点出彩篇中句①ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitstressestheimportanceofgoodhabits.我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。②Itoffersyouanopportunitytodosomethinginterestingandcreative.Meanwhile,itprovidesyouwithasourceofpleasure.它给你提供了一个做有趣且富有创意的事情的机会,同时也是你快乐的源泉。③Itmakesmedelightedthatyoushowgreatinterestin...andthatyouwanttoknowsomethingabout...我很高兴你对……很感兴趣,并且想知道关于……的一些情况。④Irecommenditmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.

我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。⑤Irecommendthatyou...sothatyoucan...我建议你……以便你……⑥Thereareallkindsofcoursesforyoutochoosefrom,soyoucanvisitthewebsitefordetailedinformation.有各种各样的课程可供选择,你可以访问网站了解详细的信息。3.韵味无穷结尾句①Idohopeyoucantakemyrecommendationsintoaccount/considerationandmakeafinaldecision.我真希望你能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。②Ifyouhaveanyquestion/needfurtherinformation,don’thesitatetocontactme.如果你有任何问题/需要更多信息,请及时联系我。③I’llbemorethanhappyifyoucantakemyrecommendations/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。④Wheneveryouneedhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.无论你何时需要帮助,请及时让我知道。⑤Iftherestillexistfurtherquestions,pleasecontactmewithouthesitation.如果还有问题,立即联系我。Dear

⁠,

Havinglearntthat

⁠(事情),Istronglyrecommendtoyou

⁠(被推荐的人或物).Ihopeyouwillbeinterestedin

⁠(him/her/it).

ThereareseveralreasonswhyIthink

⁠(推荐的对象)isabetterchoice.Firstofall,

⁠(理由一).Besides/Moreover,

⁠(理由二).Lastbutnotleast,

⁠(理由三).Inaword,

⁠

(总结).

Iwouldbemostgratefulifyouwouldliketoconsidermyrecommendation./Ihopeyouwillfindmyrecommendationhelpful.Yours,

LiHua

假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Vincent发邮件告诉你他和家人要来中国旅行,希望你能给他推荐一些有特色的旅游景点。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.推荐的景点及原因;2.良好的祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】DearVincent,Learningfromyourlaste-mailthatyou’llpayavisittoChinawithyourfamily,I’mmore

thandelightedtorecommendalistofattractionstoyouindetail.As

the

old

saying

goes,“OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”Asoneoftheworldwonders,theGreatWallisregardedasthesymbolofChina,

which

you

can’t

miss.Additionally,withahistoryofhundredsofyears,theSummerPalaceshowstypicalancientChinesearchitecturalart.

Seeing

it

by

yourself

is

bound

togreatlydeepenyourunderstandingoftheextensiveandprofoundtraditionalChineseculture.Isincerelyhopethatmyrecommendationcanbe

of

some

helptoyou.MayyouallhaveagoodtimeduringyourstayinChina!Yours,

LiHua【名师点评】1.文章开篇表明写作意图,向对方推荐旅游景点;随后推荐了长城等旅游景点并解释了理由;最后表达了良好的祝愿。2.范文中使用了morethan,isboundto,deepen,profound,beofsomehelp等高级词汇,并运用了较多的语法结构,如定语从句(Astheoldsayinggoes和whichyoucan’tmiss),动词-ing短语(Seeingitbyyourself)作主语等,展示了作者对复杂句式较强的运用能力。

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1介绍学校体育课程及活动;2.推荐一项中国传统体育项目。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考范文:DearDavid,I’mdelightedthatyouwillcometoourschoolasanexchangestudent.Sinceyouenjoysports,IwouldliketointroducethesportscoursesandatraditionalChinesesporttoyou.Initially,therearetwoPEclasseseveryweek,inwhichbasiccourses,includingbasketballandrunning,arecompulsory.Additionally,theschoolsportsmeetingisheldannually,whichiswellreceived.Eventually,Irecommendyoutolearntaichi,atraditionalChinesesport,forpracticingitregularlywillhelpyoustayhealthyphysicallyandmentally.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yourssincerely,LiHua文体(四)

慰问信

慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到灾难的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真挚、尽量以乐观的口吻来减轻对方的烦恼和痛苦,并鼓励对方对日后的生活和学习充满信心。具体写作结构为:1.吸引眼球开头句①I’msorrythatyouarehavingsuchahard/toughtimeatthemoment.Nearlyeveryonemayhaveoneoftheseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.得知你目前身处困境,我很难过。几乎每个人都可能有这样一个时期,一切似乎都出了问题。②IjustcannottellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyourunhappy...得知了你不幸的……你不知道我有多难过。③IfeltverysorryindeedwhenIwasinformedof...当我得知……我真的感到很难过。④Iwasshockedtolearnofthenewsthat...听到……的消息,我很震惊。⑤Ijustcan’texpresshowsorryIwastoknowyouraccident.当我得知你发生事故时,我无法表达我是多么难过。2.亮点出彩篇中句①Idohopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。②Iwasdeeplyconcerned/worriedwhenIlearnedthat...当我听说……时,我非常担心。③Suchproblemisnotuncommonamong...在……中这样的问题并非罕见。④Keepingadiaryisalsoagoodchoice.记日记也是一个不错的选择。⑤Exercisingregularlyisoneofthemostimportantwaystohelpyoustayawayfromcatchinganyinfections.经常锻炼是帮助你避免任何感染的最重要手段之一。3.韵味无穷结尾句①IwishthereweresomethingIcouldsayordotoeaseyour...我希望我能说些或做些什么来减轻你的……②Pleasedon’thesitatetotellmeifthereisanythingIcando.如果我能做些什么,请直接告诉我。③Rememberwewon’tbefarawaywhenyouneedanyhelp!记住,当你需要任何帮助时,我们就在你身边!④Mayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.愿你早日摆脱烦恼。Dear

⁠,

Learningyouareupsetabout

⁠(说明不幸:如生病、考试不理想、比赛失利等),Ifeelverysorry.Actually,

⁠(给予安慰).Therefore,there’snoneedtobeupset/worried.Astohowto

⁠(如何处理),I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.

Tobeginwith,

⁠(第一个建议),as

⁠(说明该建议的好处).Additionally,itisagoodchoice/ideato

⁠(第二个建议).Lastbutnotleast,

⁠(第三个建议).

Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.Yours,

LiHua

假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Amy不幸染上传染病,正在医院接受隔离治疗。请你用英语给她写一封慰问信,内容包括:1.表示同情;2.给予安慰;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【满分范文】DearAmy,Itisshockingtole