高考英语应用文-咨询信-范文与重点短句子讲义

范文与重点积累【仿写演练】假设你叫李华，高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信，询问相关事宜。内容包括：1.

对申请者的相关要求；2.

课程的相关事宜；3.

住宿和吃饭的条件；4.

需要做的相关准备。注意：1.

词数80个左右；2.

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.

开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanksagainforyourtime,andI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua参考答案1DearSir/Madam,

I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAintheingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.

IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaseremendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给TravelAmerica国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线；2.请其告知相关的旅游费用。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：intheingJuly（在即将到来的七月）；inquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency（询问你的旅游路线）；havealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms（看看一些独特的自然风光，领略一下当地的风土人情）；remendsomesuitabletravelroutes（推荐一些合适的旅游路线）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhich

Ihopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句中使用非限制性定语从句；I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,

coveringallthetravelingexpenses.现在分词做伴随状语。参考答案2DearSirorMadam,

Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.

Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.

Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandacmodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtomakeanyotherpreparations,letmeknow,willyou?

ThanksagainforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于咨询信。要求考生就“高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动”的相关事宜进行咨询。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：offer→provide得到：obtain→get/gain普通的：ordinary→usual/mon提前：aheadoftime→inadvance2.句式拓展原句：Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.拓展句：Thereasonwhy

Iamwritingtoyou

isthat

Iwanttoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.Bonnie来帮你：原因状语从句引出写作动机，建议句式背过哦！【点睛】[高分句型1]

Iamveryinterestedintheexchange