读后续写专题第8章如何进行动作描写讲义-高三英语作文写作复习

读后续写:动作描写1.动作描写3种句式①动作+五官:独立主格句式②动作+分解:非谓语句式③动作+场景转换:时间状语从句2、动词语料库①万能动词短语(如何扩写sbdosth)②常用动词(高分替换词)③各部位动作(动作描写,超全汇总,看这里够了)动作描写:3种写法1.动作+五官:独立主格句式①独立主格:身体部位+非谓语动词,sbdosth.(with+情绪名词/声线)Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepoliceinatremblingvoice.2、动作+分解:非谓语句式①Ving,主句②主句，Ving③Havingdonesth,主句④Ved(情绪形容词),主句,Ving⑤Todosth,主句(前加目的)3、动作+场景转换:时间状语从句主宾.分离(加动作/加地点):Sbdosth>改成:Whensth....sbdosth解析1、动作+五官之独立主格句式独立主格:身体部位+非谓语v,sbdosth.(with+情绪名词/声线)◆眼泪Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.泪水在他的眼睛里涌出，他用颤抖的声音向警察表示感谢。Myspiritssank,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.我的情绪低落，泪水顺着我的脸颊流下来。Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,sbdosth.(眼里充满遗憾的泪水,某人做某事)Eyesglitteringwithrelief/joy,sbdosth.(眼里闪着欣慰和喜悦，某人做某事)Eyeswideninginjoy/surprise/fear(情绪名词),sbdosth(眼睛..地睁大)◆脸/心/肢体Faceblushingscarlet,heapologizedforwhathehaddone.脸红着，他为自己的所作所为道歉。Heartburning/filledwithfrustration,sheloweredherhead.心在燃烧/充满挫败感,她低下了头。Heartpounding/beatingwithhappiness,sheleaptintotheair.心因快乐而跳动着,她跳了起来。Arms/legs/musclesachingandkneesshaking/trembling,Isatdown.胳膊/腿/肌肉疼痛,膝盖颤抖/颤抖,我坐了下来。2、动作+分解:非谓语句式◆动作几乎同时发生:①Ving,主句②主句,VingConsideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.考虑到熊的威胁，我们远离它。Feelingecstatic,shedashedoutoftheroomlikeawind.她欣喜若狂，像风一样冲出了房间。◆动作前后发生:③Havingdonesth,主句Havingknownwhathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.在知道发生了什么之后，她开始着手处理这个问题。◆动作前加情绪:④Ved(情绪形容词),主句,Ving.Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.我们松了一口气，欣喜若狂,对直升机大喊大叫，试图引起它的注意。◆动作前加目的:⑤Todosth,主句Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.为了分散熊的注意力，我们把一块面包扔得很远。◆动作分解:⑥V1,V2,andV3(可改成:Ving,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.我们从座位上站起来，走出大厅，离开了电影院。Seeingthehelicopter,wecriedout“Help!",wavingourhandslikemad.看到直升机，我们大声喊着“救命!”,并疯狂地挥舞着双手。总结①Ving,主句②主句,Ving③Havingdonesth,主句Consideringthethreatofthebear,westayedfarawayfromit.Havingknownwhathadhappened,shesetaboutdealingwiththeissue.④Ved(情绪形容词),主句,Ving(前加情绪)Relievedandoverjoyed,weyelledatthehelicopter,tryingtocatchitsattention.⑤Todosth,主句.(前加目的)Todistractthebear,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.⑥V1,V2,andV3.(分解动作)(可换成:Vding,sbdosth,Ving)Werosefromtheseat,walkedoutofthehall,andleftthecinema.(离开电影院)Seeingthehelicopter,wecriedoutHelp!",wavingourhandslikemad.3、动作+场景转换:时间状语从句动作+场景转换:时间状从(while/when/as/themoment..)句式:Sbdosth>改成:Whensb/sth..,.sbdosth.(可加地点,分离主宾画面)◆句式扩写:Whensbwas+五感动词，sbdosth+造个地点.[例句]构思:Mary发现一一个信封。.普通版本:Suddenly,Maryfoundanenvelop.进阶版本:WhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanenvelope.玛丽在思考时，突然看到桌子上有件物品。她走过去，找到一个信封。[练习]Shegotdowntotidyingupthesofawhenanenveloplyingonitcameintohereyes.她正准备收拾沙发时，沙发上的一个信封映入了她的眼帘。万用动词短语◆某人做某事sbdosth”扩写:managetodo想方设法做某事achieve/acplishsth实现/完成某事原句:StevesavedMagaritto.扩写:StevemangedtosaveMagait.StevesucceededinsavingMagaritto.SteveachievedtherescueofMargaritto.◆“某人做某事sbdosth”扩写:Managetodo想方设法做某事succeedindoingsth成功地做了某事achievetacplishsth实现/完成某事struggletodosth努力做某事Makeeffortstodosth/努力做某事(makeanefforttodosth)makeeveryefforttodosth竭尽全力做某事>」endeavortodo努力做某事strivetodosth/striveforsth(过去式strove)努力/奋力做某事can'thelpdoingsth/feellikedoingsth忍不住做某事/想做某事takeactionstodo采取行动去做getdowntodoingsth开始做/着手做(尤指需花费精力之事)keepdoingsth保持做某事goondoingsth继续做某事carryondoingsth继续做某事forcesbtodosth迫便某人做某事(sbwasforcedtodosth)persuadesbintodoingsth说服某人做某事talksbintodoingsth说服某人做某事allow/enablesbtodosth使某人能够做某事Cannothelpdoingsth禁不住做某事imaginedoingsth想象做某事万用动词/形容词短语：固定搭配castlighton阐明某事catchsightof看见catchaglimpseof瞥见;窥见layemphasison强调makethemostof充分利用takeadvantageof利用sufferfromsth遭受...beinvolvedinsth参与/专心投入beexposedtosth暴露/面临/接触bedevotedtosth投身于/致力于becuriousabout...对..好奇bebusywith忙于...becoveredwith被..覆盖be,ready/preparedfor为....作好准备besurprised/amazed(at)对...感到惊讶beexcitedabout激动于...beangrywith愤怒于...bemadat疯狂于...besatisfiedwith对....满意beregarded/treatedas被视为...高分替换词◆替换“cannotdosth无法做某事”:failtodosthsb'sdoingsthwasafailurebeunableltodosthpreventsbfromdoingsth原句:Atthesightofthesnake,hewassoscaredthathecouldn'tmove.按需替换:Extremelyscared,hefailedtomoveatthesightofthesnake.Enormousscarepreventedhimfrommovingatthesightofthesnake.Hisattempttomovewasafailureatthesightofthesnake.◆替换“decidetodosth决定做某事”:bedeterminedtodosth下定决心做某事makeupone'smindtodosth下定决心做某事◆替换“wanttodo想做某事”intendtodosth/aimtodosth;feellikedoingsth想要做某事;plan/preparetodosth预备/准备做某事◆替换“makesbwanttodosth使某人想..”:remindsbtodosth提醒某人做某事encouragesbtodosth鼓励/使某人做某事motivate/drivesbtodosth激励/推动某人做某事urgesbtodosth促使某人做某事高级动作描写各部位描写heburiedhisfaceinhishandsherubbedhishandstogetherhefoldedhisarms/handsoverhischestSheraised/liftedherhead/chin/handsSheheldherbreath/heldsthinhandsmovedforward/backwards/towards/closertoheshivered/trembled/shookshesteppedaway/forwarddashto/rushto/sprinttograb/grasp/seize他把脸埋在手里他使劲揉/搓着双手他把双臂/双手交叉在胸前抬头/抬起下巴/举手她屏住呼吸/手里拿着东西.前进/后退/朝向/靠近他颤抖她走开/向前冲向/冲向/冲刺抓住动作描写：肢体1heshivered/trembledhisbodyshooksheflinchedshestraightened/shestretchedsherosefromherseathepulledaway/hepushedawayheturnedawayheturnedaroundshesteppedawayshedrewnearer他颤抖着他的身体颤抖着她退缩了她挺直了/她伸展她从座位上站起来..他拉开/他推开他转身离开他转身她走开了她走近了动作描写：肢体2hele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