总复习专项复习第25讲书面表达课件含练习（课件）通用版英语

20242024小升初英语总复习精品课件通用版小学英语作文主要考查学生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等内容进行组句成文的能力，是一种考查学生综合运用英语能力的题型。

书面表达的基本要求：1.内容要点完整；2.语法结构正确；3.词汇运用准确；4.书写规范、整洁。书面表达的基本流程：1.审题并理清思路：考虑写什么，挑选关键词，搭建作文框架；2.选择词语：根据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语言材料；3.遣词造句：根据选取的语言材料，用合适的句型写作；4.语篇定稿：根据思维导图修改、润色作文。常见书面表达的类型：一、人物介绍类；二、叙事类；三、空间介绍类；四、动物介绍类；五、应用文类；六、看图作文类。

人物介绍类书面表达通常以一般现在时为主，介绍自己、朋友或家人的外貌、年龄、职业、爱好和上班方式等情况。【示例】

请以“Myself”为题，介绍一下自己。要求：1.不出现真实的人名、校名；2.书写规范，语句通顺；3.不少于40词。

Hello,everyone.MynameisLily.I’m11yearsold.I’maquietgirl.Ilikedrawingpicturesandreadingbooks.Myfavouritefoodisvegetables,becausetheyarefreshandhealthy.Theycanmakemestronger.Myhomeisn’tfarfrommyschool,soIusuallygotoschoolonfoot.Ioftenhelpmyclassmatesatschool,sotheyalllikeme.Doyouwanttobemyfriends？【范文】Myself

请以“Myfriend”为题，介绍你的一位朋友。内容包括年龄、爱好等，并在文章末尾写下你对他/她的祝福。（请另附纸张完成）要求：1.书写规范，语句通顺，标点正确；2.不少于40词。Myfriend

Ihaveafriend.HisnameisWangXiaoming.He’stwelveyearsold.Hisfavouritefruitistheapple.Becauseanappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.Hisfavouritefoodisbeef.Becauseit’shealthy.Helikesplayingbadminton.Becauseit’sgoodforhisbody.Heoftenplaysbadmintonwithmeafterschool.Ilikemyfriend.Ihopeheishappyeveryday.

叙事类书面表达的话题较为丰富，如：一天的活动、周末活动、节假日活动、郊游、假期旅游等。写作时要注意写作要求，确保时态正确。【示例】

根据表格信息，请以“Tom’sday”为题，介绍他的日常生活。要求：包含表格中的所有活动，书写规范，表达准确。【范文】Tom’sday

Tomgetsupat6:00inthemorning.Thenhewasheshisface.Hehasbreakfastat7:00.Thenhegoestoschool.Classesbeginat8:00.Hehassevenclasseseveryday.Schoolisoverat4:30intheafternoon.Afterschool,heoftenplaysping-pongwithhisfriends.Hehasdinnerat7:00intheevening.Thenhelistenstomusicinthebedroom.At9:00,hegoestobed.That’sTom’sday.

假如你是李华，请根据思维导图的提示，以“Mylastsummerholiday”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。（请另附纸张完成）

IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentslastsummerholiday.BeijingisinthenorthofChina.It’sveryfamous.Iwenttherebytrain.InBeijing,IclimbedtheGreatWall.IvisitedTian’anmenSquare,thePalaceMuseum,theBird’sNestandtheMingTombs.IatePekingDuckandtooklotsofpictures.IhadagoodtimeinBeijing.Mylastsummerholiday

空间介绍类书面表达一般介绍房间、学校、村庄等。【示例】

以“Mybedroom”为题，介绍一下你的房间。【范文】MybedroomIhavemyownroom.It’ssmallbutnice.Thereisabed,adesk,achairandabookshelf.Therearetwobesidetablesnearthebed.Thecomputerisonthedesk.Thebooksareonthebookshelf.Therubbishbinisbehindthedoor.Ilikemybedroom.

假设你住在乡村，请以“Myvillage”为题写一篇短文。（请另附纸张完成）要求：1.用一般现在时；2.不少于5句话。Myvillage

Iliveinasmallvillage.It’sbeautiful.Theairisfresh.Thewaterisclean.Thecloudsarewhite.Therearemanytreesandflowers.Therearemanyfishintheriver.Ioftengofishingwithmyparentsonweekends.Ilikemyvillage.

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动物是人类的朋友。你最喜欢的动物是什么呢？它有什么特点呢？题目自拟，写出你最喜欢的动物。要求：不少于6句话，语句通顺，书写规范。【范文】Mydog

Ihaveapetdog.It’scuteandnaughty.Ithasablacknose,alongtail,brownhairandbigeyes.Ithasitsownhouse,butitlikestosleepundermybed.Iliketalkingtoit.Iwouldliketosharethehappythingswithit.Becauseit’smybestfriend.Italsolikesplayingwithballs.Ioftentakeittothepark.Ireallylikeit.

你有宠物吗？它是什么样子的？你和它在一起时会做些什么？请写出来跟大家分享吧！要求：40词以上，语句通顺。（请另附纸张完成）Mypet

IhaveapetdognamedLucky.Ithaswhitefur,twosmallearsandalongtail.Myauntgaveittomeonmybirthday.Itissofriendlyandlovelythatweallloveitverymuch.Itlikesplayingwithballsoutside,soIoftentakeitoutandletitplaywithballsafterschool.Ioftenfeedit.Itisoneofmybestfriends.

应用文一般有书信、日记、电子邮件、邀请函、贺卡、通知、请假条等。此类作文在写作时要注意格式。【示例】

假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Linda在信中介绍了她的父母，并请你在回信中介绍一下你的父母，内容包括年龄、职业、外貌、性格、爱好等。要求：1.条理清晰，注意大小写和标点符号的运用；2.书写工整，不少于60词。【范文】DearLinda，I’mveryhappytoreceive（收到）yourletter.Nowletmeintroduce（介绍）myparentstoyou.Myfatheris40yearsold.Hehasglassesandheistall.Heisadoctor.Heoftenhelpspeople.He’sverykind.Helikesplayingbasketballwithhisfriends.Mymotheris38yearsold.Sheisnottall.Shehaslongblackhair.Sheisateacher.Sheisfriendly.Herstudentslikeherverymuch.Shelikessinginganddancing.Yours，LiMing

书面表达。（请另附纸张完成）毕业在即，旧日时光难再续。即将分别，几多离愁藏心底。假如你是大明，你的同桌Amy就要回英国念中学了，请根据提示内容（包含四个方面：评价、往事、期许、祝福）给她写一份毕业赠言吧。提示内容：1.Whatdoyouthinkofher？2.Whatunforgettable（难忘的）thinghappenedbetweenyouandherinthepast？3.Whatareyoulookingforwardto（期待）？4.Whatwisheswillyougivetoher？要求：1.内容齐全，表达准确，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当发挥；2.不少于40词。Amy，

Maybewewillsaygoodbyetomorrow.ButIstillhavealotofwordstosay.

Youareagoodgirl.Once,itwasmyturntoshowmyEnglish.Iwasnervous.Iwantedtotalkaboutapicture.ButIcouldn’tsayanywords.Iaskedyouforhelp.Youhelpedme.Ididwellatlast.Theteacherpraisedme.Iwasveryhappy.Imustsay“Thanks”toyou.IhopemyEnglishwillbeasgoodasyours.AndIhopeyouwillmakeprogressinyourmiddleschool.

Goodluckforthefuture！Daming

做此类题要做到以下几点：1.认真看图，弄清大意；2.列出要点，拟定提纲；3.紧扣要点，扩写成文；4.通读短文，修正错误（注意查看有无语法错误，如时态、人称等）。【示例】

今天是星期六，你和你的家人都在家里，请根据图片提示，描述一下你和你的家人此刻正在干什么。要求：1.语句通顺，表达准确；2.书写工整、规范；3.不少于50词。【范文】

MynameisJohn.TodayisSaturday.Idon’tgotoschoolandmyparentsdon’tgotowork.Weareathome.It’s11o’clocknow.Mymotheriscookinginthekitchen.Shecooksverywell.MygrandpaiswatchingTVinthelivingroom.HelikesBeijingoperaverymuch.Mygrandmaisgoodatdrawing.Nowsheisdrawingpicturesinherbedroom.Whatismyfatherdoing？Haha，heistellingmestoriesinthestudy.

这是Lucy和同学们在动物园里拍的一张照片，请根据照片内容帮她描述一下动物们正在做什么，不少于5句话。（请另附纸张完成）

TodayisSunday.Itissunnyandwarm.Wegotoazoo.Thezooisbig!Therearemanyanimalsinthezoo.Look!Thetwoelephantsareplayingwithwaterbytheriver.Thegiraffeissotall.Itiseatingleaves.Thetwotigersarestrong.Theyarerunning.Thebearistired.It’ssleepingunderthetree.Whatalovelymonkey!Itisclimbingthetree.Thebabylionisplayingwithaballwithitsmotherhappily.Theyhavealotoffun.

一、仔细观察图片，看看图片中的人物在做什么。发挥你的想象力，用英语简单描述一下。不少于5句话。作业书面表达

Nowit’stimetocleantheclassroom.Allofusarebusy.Anniscleaningtheblackboard.Look，Jimiscleaningthefloor.LucyandMaryarecleaningthedesks.I’mcleaningthewindow.Wearebusybuthappy.

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Nowit’stimetocleantheclassroom.Allofusarebusy.Anniscleaningtheblackboard.Look，Jimiscleaningthefloor.LucyandMaryarecleaningthedesks.I’mcleaningthewindow.Wearebusybuthappy.

⁠二、小学学习生活转眼就要结束了，这六年里你一定遇到了很多好老师。选一位你印象最深刻的老师，从外貌、性格、教授的课程等方面详细介绍一下她或他吧！要求：1.不出现真实的姓名，老师用Miss/MrWang代替；2.语句通顺，可适当发挥，不少于5句话。提示：Miss/Mr、tall/short、thin/heavy、kind/strict。Ihavemanyteachers.Butmyfavouriteteacheris

MissWang.SheismyEnglishteacher.Sheisshortandthin.Shehaslongblackhair.Shealwayswearsapairofglasses.Sheiskindtous.Herlessonsareinteresting.Wealllikeherverymuch.

⁠MissWang.SheismyEnglishteacher.Sheisshortandthin.Shehaslongblackhair.Shealwayswearsapairofglasses.Sheiskindtous.Herlessonsareinteresting.Wealllikeherverymuch.三、“爆竹声中一岁除，春风送暖入屠苏。千门万户曈曈日，总把新桃换旧符。”这首诗提到了哪个中国传统节日？请先圈出节日名称，再根据思维导图的提示写一段话，不少于50个单词。要求：意思连贯，语句通顺。

SpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina.It’sinJanuaryorFebruary.Beforethefestival，peopleoftencleantheirhouses.OntheeveofSpringFestival，familiesgettogetherandhaveabigdinner.Childrenlikethisfestivalverymuch，becausetheycanhavedeliciousfoodandwearnewclothes.Theycanalsogetluckymoneyfromtheirelders.Theyareveryhappy.

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SpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina.It’sinJanuaryorFebruary.Beforethefestival，peopleoftencleantheirhouses.OntheeveofSpringFestival，familiesgettogetherandhaveabigdinner.Childrenlikethisfestivalverymuch，becausetheycanhavedeliciousfoodandwearnewclothes.Theycanalsogetluckymoneyfromtheirelders.Theyareveryhappy.

⁠四、机器人在我们的日常生活中越来越常见，如：cookingrobot、singingrobot、cleaningrobot等。请以“A

⁠Robot”为题，根据表格提示，发挥自己的想象，描述一下你想要的机器人。要求：1.书写规范，语句通顺；2.不少于5句话；3.题目需要补充完整。NameItsnameis…Appearance（外貌）Ithas…Ability（能力）Itcan………Iwant

tohaveasportsrobot.ItsnameisRobin.It’stallandstrong.Ithasabigheadandtwolongarms.Itcandomanykindsofsports.Suchasrunning，swimming，football，basketball，badmintonandsoon.Iwanttodomorningexerciseswithiteveryday.Ithinkthatwillbefunny！

⁠tohaveasportsrobot.ItsnameisRobin.It’stallandstrong.Ithasabigheadandtwolongarms.Itcandomanykindsofsports.Suchasrunning，swimming，football，basketball，badmintonandsoon.Iwanttodomorningexerciseswithiteveryday.Ithinkthatwillbefunny！A

Sports

⁠RobotSports

五、根据图片提示，写一篇日记，写一写你周日做过的事情。要求：1.使用一般过去时；2.语句通顺，不少于5句话。

Sunday，May14th

SunnyMySunday

busybuthappy.Igotupat8：00inthemorning.ThenIhadbreakfastanddidmyhomework.Afterthat，Icleanedmyroom.Intheafternoon，Iplayedbasketballinthepark.ThenIvisitedmygrandparentswithmyparents.Wehaddinnertogether.Ihadgreatfuntoday.

⁠busybuthappy.Igotupat8：00inthemorning.ThenIhadbreakfastanddidmyhomework.Afterthat，Icleanedmyroom.Intheafternoon，Iplayedbasketballinthepark.ThenIvisitedmygrandparentswithmypare