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duetothefactthatsomepeoplecouldn’tdealwithpressure,theytocommit英语句法的核心——1个中心，3：在并列的动作或并列的句子之间使用并列连词如and,but,soHesmilescomesinto英语句法的核心——1个中心，3：在并列的动作或并列的句子之间使用并列连词如and,but,soHesmilescomesintotheHesmilesandcomesintothe.宾（表）等句子成分。Hewhosmilescomesintotheclassroom.中，who是从句中谓语动词smiles的主语，不可缺少，否则，从句然而，Theboydidn’ttellthetruthisknowntoall.这个句子中，我们能够比较容易的分辨出，主句是Xisknowntoall.也就是Theboydidn’ttellthetruth.做整个句子的主语成who3种思路,,,,,,,的句子应该改为，Thattheboydidn’ttellthetruthisknowntoall。等等，不是有省略引导词的情况吗？！那么，具体的关于引导词回答？，大多数人的第一反应基本上是：pleasetellmewhat’syourname.果是书面表达，我们就要把这个句子改写为：pleasetellmewhatyournameis.因为语法规定，从句中是陈述句的语序，而非疑问语:语等句子成分，同理可证，动名词也可以在一个句子中充当主语，宾语，表语等角色，例如Smokingisharmful.这里的smoke和is都是动词，但我们说一个简单句中有且只能有一个谓语动词，因此我们将smoke变为非谓语动词中的动名词形式，动名词在这里充当主语成分。而在Hesuggeststellingyouthetruth.这个句子中，telling做宾语，再比如说Seeingisbelieving.中，seeing是主语，believing是动名词做表语。todo形式，我们经常会在写作文的时候用到这样的句式：Itisimportanttodo即Todosth.isimportant.我们看在这个句式里，同样是有两个动词do和is词dotodo在TolearnEnglishinXDFisimportant.这个句子中，tolearn=todo,在IwanttolearnEnglish.这个句子中，wantlearnlearntolearn，那么，to在谓语动词want同样的，我们还经常看到这样的表达，MyplanistolearnEnglishwell.islearnlearn变tolearn的形式，在这个句子中，todo不定式在is系动词后面充当句子的表语成分，名词词性。同时，be+todo动词不定式表示将要、打算去做的意思。同理，Seeingisbelieving.ToseeistobelieveThisistheThisisthebestwaytolearnEnglish在这个句子中，todothebestway的定语，即：todoIreadChinaDailyeverydaytoimprovemytodoHeisluckytolearnEnglishinsuchagoodschool.todo做结果状语时find,learnsee,hearonly,never等，其中与only,neverHehurriedtotheairportonlytofindthattheflighthadalreadytakenGoodsimportedfromabroadarenotalwaysbetterthanthosemadein与被修饰名词goods之间是被动的关系，你想，货物只能是被进口或被制造，因此我们用非谓语中的过去分词表示主语与谓语之间的developingcountry&developedcountry发展中国家&Speakingmachine&SpokenEnglish会说话的机器（自己主动会说的）&口语（被说的当然可以：Seeingnobodyathome,shedecidedtoleavethemadecide，不定式toleavedecidesee,seeing句意，我们知道seeingDeeplymoved,shethanked句意，我们知道seeingDeeplymoved,shethankedmeagainandDeeplymovedshethankedmeagainandagain.逻辑主语之间是被动的关系。Seeingsheseedecide这个动作几乎是同时发生的；那么同时可以推理出，movedsheshemoved做Walkinginthestreet,Icameacrossanoldfriendof(whenIwaswakinginthestreet,IcameacrossanoldfriendofGivenmoreattention，theaccidentcouldhavebeenThesongissungalloverthecountry,makingitthemostpopular2、不定式-to现在分词——（与被修饰名词之间）3 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and2%例Explicitlyandcompletelyillustratedinthebarchartisasurveyaboutboysandgirls’choicesofjobs40%oftheboyschosetobeamanager,30%abusinessmenandonly5%ateacher.Thegirlswhochosetobeateacher,amanagerandabusinessmmanaccountedfor45%,15%and25%respectively.注意：多组数据不是每个都要写，关键是你中间段可以分析的拿出描述图表反应的现象（脱离数据本身Inthisday描述图表反应的现象（脱离数据本身Inthisdayandage,it’snotsurprisingtofindthatxxx人做../xxInthisdayandage,it’snotsurprisingtofindthatalargeamountofmoneyisspentinbuyinggiftshavingfindthatalargenumberofpeoplewanttoliveinfindthatalargenumberofcollegestudentswanttodopart-timefindthatalargenumberofmiddle-agedstaffarenotsatisfiedwiththeirfindthatalargenumberofChinesepeopleprefercarsofChinesebrandstocarsofJapaneseandAmericanPreferAto 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Tobegin InLastbutnot名词（名词词组）isafactor/arefactorsthatmustbepointedThedisadvantagesofpaperbookssuchasinconvenience,highpriceandsoonarefactorsthatmustpointedWecanascribethisphenomenonto名词（名词词组ThisismainlybecauseThisismainlybecauseof（名词词组Wecanascribethisphenomenonto名词（名词词组）,which名词（名词词组）shouldberesponsibleforsuchaphenomenon，bywhichImean名词（名词词组）makes/leadto(leadtothepositiveimpactsbroughtbysth.onthepositiveimpactsbroughtbyonlineshoppingsuchasconvenience,productsoflowtheadvantagesofsth.suchasandso（merits优点thedisadvantagesofsth.suchas（merits优点thedisadvantagesofsth.suchastheimprovementinpeople’sliving购买力增 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Lackdueto名词（名词词组）原因，自写（写一个句子名词（名词词组）原因make(makes)sb.dotheimprovementinpeople’slivingstandardsmakespeoplewanttohaveamorefashionableway名词（名词词组）原因enablesb.todo名词（名词词组）原因make(makes)it形容词forsb.todoincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninthejobmarketandgrowingpressuremakeitnecessaryforstudentstoaccumulateworkexperiencethroughdoingpart-timejobs.Makeitnecessaryforsb.todotheawakeningofsb.’sawarenessoftheawakeningofpeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalWecanascribethisphenomenontotheawakeningofseniorstudents’awarenessofaccumulatingthe/sb’spursuitofthe/sb’spursuitofseniorstaff’spursuitofastablesomepeople’spursuitofconvenienceandfreeonlinebooks-better/highereducation(higheracademicdegrees-betterpersonal-highersalariesandsocialstatus-productsoflowSomestudents’pursuitofbroadeningtheirhorizonsshouldberesponsibleforthisphenomenon(thatmorestudentsgotostudyabroad)sb’sdislikeofmodernpeople’sdislikeofheavypapersomeChinesepeople’sdislikeofproductsofJapanesedistrustofunsatisfactionwithinfluencesfromsb.’speersandfriendsorso-calledgroupthelackofyoungpeople’slackofacomprehensiveunderstandingoftheirjobsandthecompaniestheyworkingpeople’slackofawarenessofenvironmentalthelackofmoralguidance(inthelackofmoralguidance(inlovingandrespectingelderlythelackofproperguidanceincareerdevelopmenttheemphasison Chinesepeople’semphasisonproductsoflowpricesandhighFailuretodoSb’sfailuretodosth.Ourgovernmentfailuretoprovideenoughjobsinrural总 第一句：BasedonthereasonsabovesuchatrendisboundtocontinueinthefutureItisalsonecessaryfordomestic(国内的)manufacturers(生产商)/businessmentoimprovetheoftheirproductsandtheirHowever,weshouldalsokeepaneyeonthepotentialrisksofsthsuchasrisksofdoingpart-timejobssuchaswasteoftime,personalsecurityandso中性偏负面（不该继续了1.Basedonthereasonsabove,itisnecessaryforsb.todo例：…. itisnecessaryforthiscompanytotakemeasurestoenhancestaff’sjobBasedonthereasonsabove,jointeffortsmustbemadetoreversetheOntheonehand,Sb.’sawarenessofthesignificanceof正面主题词/severityof负面主题词mustOntheonehand,thecompany’sOntheonehand,thecompany’sawarenessofthesignificanceofstaff’sjobsatisfactionmustbethepublicawarenessofthesignificanceofprotectingintellectualpropertyrightmustbeenhanced.thepublicawarenessofthesignificanceofsavingenergyandnaturalresourcesmustbe3.Ontheotherhand,itisnecessaryforsb.todo•Explicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisthetrendinthenumberofthemobile-subscriptionsinbothdevelopedanddevelopingcountries.Aswecanseefromthegraph,in2009,withthenumberindevelopedcountriesincreasingslightlyfrom0.7billiontoonethatistosay,thenumberofmobile-phonesubscriptionsindevelopingcountrieswas3timesthanthat（ofmobile-phonesubscriptions）indevelopedcountriesin•Whathascausedthesechanges?Firstly,thecomingageofinformationexplosionandanentrywhichalmostturnsmobilephonesintoabasicnecessityofmodernlife.Secondly,wecanalsoascribeittothegradualimprovementinpeople’slivingstandardsandgrowingpurchasingpower,mobilephonesarenolongeraluxuryformostofpeopleindevelopingcountries.Inaddition,limitedpopulationofdevelopedcountrieswhichisfarlessthanthatofdevelopingcountriesisfactorthatmustbepointed•Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itisnosurprisetoseesuchaphenomenon.AsfarasIconcerned,domesticmanufacturersofmobilephonesshouldcatchtheopportunitytoseizemarket•Explicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisthegeneraltrendintheproportionofdifferentcarbrandsdomesticcarmarket.Aswecanseefromthegraph,theproportionofcarsofChineseincreaseddramaticallyfrom25%in2008to35%in2009,withtheproportionofcarsofbrandsdecreasingsignificantlyfrom30%to15%duringthesameperiod.WhenitcomestoAmericanbrands,wecanfinditremainedrelatively•Manyreasonscouldaccountforthisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,thehugeleapforwardinqualityandfunctionofcarsofChinesebrandsqualityandfunctionofcarsofChinesebrandsaswellastheirrelativelylowprices,Ideem,isathatmustbepointedout.Inaddition,somepeople’sdislikeofJapanesebrandsmightbeawhytheirmarketsharejumped.Equallyimportant,carsofAmericanbrandsareusuallyconsumingandonlytargetacertaingroupofpeople,sotheirmarketsharekept•Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthatwhateverisistrue,andwhateveristrueisreasonableandsuchatrendisboundtocontinueinthefuture.IthightimethatdomesticmanufacturersseizedthisopportunitytopromotethedevelopmentofofChinese•Explicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisthegeneraltrendinthenumberofpeoplewhoshopthroughcomputersandmobilephones.Aswecanseefromthegraph,thenumberofpeopleshoponlinethroughcomputersincreasedstablyfrom30189in2013to36142in2014，withnumberofpeoplewhoshoponlinethroughmobilephonessurgingfrom14440to23609duringsame•Severalreasons,bothsocialandindividual,couldcontributetosuch•Severalreasons,bothsocialandindividual,couldcontributetosuchaphenomenon.Fromaperspective,Romewasnotbuiltinaday,sotheawakeningofpeople’sawarenessandmediapublicityabouttheconvenienceofonlineshopping,Ideem,isafactorthatmustbeout.Inaddition,asmoderntechnologyisdevelopingrapidly,mobilephonesbecome“smart”,withtheirfunctionsbeingmuchmorepowerfulthanbefore.Accordingly,peoplecanvariousAppsintheirmobilephonessuchasTaobao,T-mall,JDansoontobuyalmostwhateverwant,whichisalsoamoreconvenientandtime-savingwayofshoppingthanusinga•Asisdiscussedabove,inmyopinion,thistrendisboundtocontinueinthefuture.However,onlinefraudandscamsandso•Explicitlyillustratedinthelinechartisthegeneraltrendinthenumberofpeoplewhoabroadfrom1993to2014.Aswecanseefromthegraph,thenumberincreaseddramaticallylessin1993tomorethan in2011,thensurgingin•Inthisdayandagewhena•Inthisdayandagewhenagreatnumberofthoroughchangeshavetakenplaceineveryaspectoflife,itwouldnotbesurprisingtofindmoreandmorepeopletravelingaroundtheworld.Onthehand,duetotheimplementationofreformandopening-uppolicyaswellastheimprovementChinesepeople’slivingstandards,travellingabroadisnolongeraluxuryformostofChineseifnotall.Ontheotherhand,communicationrevolutionandthehugeleapforwardintransportationmakeitmuchmoreconvenientforpeopletogettoknowforeigncountriesandtravel•Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthatwhateverisreasonabletrue,andwhateveristrueisreasonableandsuchatrendisboundtocontinueinthefuture.don’tletyourpoormannersinpublichumiliateyourExplicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisthegeneraltrendintheproportionofthestudentswhotakepart-jobsinacertaincollege.Theproportionincreasedslightlyfrom67.77%amongfreshmento71.93%amongjuniorstudents,thensurgingto88.24%amongseniorstudents.ThereisnodenyingthefactThereisnodenyingthefactthattakingpart-timejobshasitsmeritsanddemerits.Tobeginwith,canlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothersandknowthesocietymoreprofoundlybytakingapart-timejob.Furthermore,fierceandacutecompetitioninthejobmarketmakesitnecessaryformostofseniorstudents,ifnotall,toseekwaystoaccumulateworkexperience.Equallyimportant,thedemeritsoftakingpart-timejobssuchasoccupyingstudents’timewhichshouldbespentontheirstudyandtherisksofbeingcheatedbyfraudsarealsoAsfarasIamconcerned,thingswillturnintotheiroppositeswhentheyreachtheextreme，sotakingrationalattitudetowardstakingpart-timejobs,Ibelieve,isalwaysthebestpolicy.Inaddition,itisessentialforstudentstostrikeabalancebetweenstudyandpart-timejobs.Thereareseveralreasonstoaccountforsucha1Fierceandacutecompetitioninthejobmarketmakesitnecessaryformostofseniorstudentsifnotall,toseekwaystoaccumulateworkexperience.2：Somecollegestudentspursuitofobtainingextramoneytosupporttheireducationisalsoa3Such•ExplicitlyillustratedinthebarchartarethechangestakingplaceinthepopulationofcitiesandareasinChina.Aswecanseefromthegraph,thepopulationincitieswentupsignificantlyfrommillionin1990tomorethan650millionin2010,almostparallelingthatinruralareasin2010.Oncontrary,thepopulationinruralareaswentdowngraduallyduringthesame•Factorsthatcontributetothisphenomenoncanbesummarizedasfollows.Tobeginwith,convenienceandadvantagesoflivingincitiesarequiteobvious.Inaddition,theconvenienceandadvantagesoflivingincitiesarequiteobvious.Inaddition,theadvancementurbanizationandfiercecompetitioninthejobmarketpushpeoplelivinginruralareastomovecities,withthehopethattheycanfindadecentjobthere.Lastbutnottheleast,wecanalsothephenomenontothebackwardnessandlimitationoflivinginruralareasincludingrelativelyconditionsofeducationand•Takingallthesefactorsandanalysisintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthistrendwillsustainforaperiodoftime.However,thingswillturnintotheiroppositeswhenreachtheextreme.SuchaphenomenonwillalsocausemanyproblemsincludingoverpopulationcitiesandunbalanceddevelopmentbetweencitiesgovernmenttookmeasurestopromoteruralExplicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisaforecastaboutthepopulationineachcontinentontheearth2050.Aswecanseefromthegraph,thepopulationinAsiawouldincreasetoalmost5billion,Africathan1billionandSouthAmericanear0.5Inaddition,thepopulationinEurope,NorthAmericaOceania（Australia）wouldincreaseto1billion,0.6billionand0.1billionItwouldnotbesurprisingtofindthatthepopulationsinAsia,AfricaandSouthAmericaincreaseSeveralreasonscouldSeveralreasonscouldcontributetosuchaphenomenon.Ontheonehand,countrieslikeChina,IndiaSouthAfricahavequitelargepopulations.Inaddition,thegradualimprovementinpeople’slivingstandardsinthosecountriesaswellastheadvancementinmedicalcaremakespeoplelivelongerthanbefore.Ontheotherhand,peopleindevelopedcountrieshavealreadybeenawareoftheinconveniencesandproblemscausedbyoverpopulation,sothenumberofnew-bornbabiesissmallTherefore,suchatrendisunderstandable.Afterall,whateverisreasonableistrue,andwhateveristruereasonable.Inaddition,itishightimeforourgovernmenttotakeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestocopewiththoseproblemscausedbyoverpopulation.Explicitlyillustratedinthebarchartisthegeneraltrendintheproportionofdifferentreasonsforaccordingtoageofstudent.Aswecanseefromthegraph,betweentheageof26and49，theproportionofpeoplewhostudyforcareerdecreasesdramaticallyfrom80%tolessthan20%,withtheproportionpeoplewhostudyforinterestincreasingsignificantlyfrom10%toSeveralreasonscouldaccountforthisphenomenon.Firstly,duetothefierceandacutecompetitiongrowingpressureinmodernsociety,mostofyoungstudentsconcentrateonhowtofindadecentjobtheirstudy.Secondly,asamansows,soheshallreap.Therefore,middle-agedpeople’spursuitofjobTherefore,suchatrendisunderstandableinmodernsociety.However,IhavereadaChineseproverbtoeffectthatinterestisthebestteacher，soitisalsonecessarytodevelopinterestinourExplicitlyillustratedinthetableisasurveyaboutthestaff’sjobsatisfactioninacertaincompany.50%ofstaffundertheageof40arenotclearaboutwhethertheyaresatisfiedwiththeirjobsornot,whilethestaffbetweentheageof41and50whoarenotsatisfiedwiththeirjobsaccountfor64%.Asfortheproportionofthestaffovertheage50whoaresatisfiedwiththeirjobs,thepercentageis40%,rankingthefirstamongallageSeveralreasons,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforsuchaphenomenon.Firstly,duetotheandacutecompetitionandacutecompetitionandgrowingpressureinmodernChina,manyChinesepeople,ifnotmost,havestruggletomeettheirownbasicneedslikeclothes,foodandhousing.Therefore,itisunderstandablethatmostofthestaffundertheageof50inthiscompanyarenotcontentedwiththeirincomeorsocioeconomicofthecompanyshouldalsoberesponsibleforsuchaphenomenon.Thirdly,mostofthepeopleovertheageof50havebeentransformedfromapassionateadvocateofthephilosophyof“havingitall”intopeoplewhoarehappytosettleforabitof追求/重视什么: pursuitofsth./emphasison不喜欢什么：people’sdislikeofsth如：ofpoorqualityofJapanese缺乏什么：people’slackof人们不喜欢人们抵制….people’sresistancetosthresistancetothehighpriceofAmericanyoungeremployees’pursuitofworkexperienceandthefactthattheymaychangeajobinthenearfutureFromtheanalysisabove,suchaphenomenonpresentedinthegraphiscommonandtoenhancestaff’sjobExplicitlyillustratedExplicitlyillustratedinthepiechartisasurveyabouttheresidents’expenditureduringtheSpringFestivalacertaincityofChina.Fromthestatisticsgivenabove,thepercentageoftheexpenditureonbuyingYear’sgiftsranksthefirst,at40%,whiletheexpenditureontransportation,gatheringanddiningaswellasothersaccountsfor20%,20%,20%respectively.Severalreasons,bothsocialandindividual,contributetothisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,theimprovementinChinesepeople’slivingstandardandgrowingpurchasingpowerarethemajorcontributors.Inaddition,buyingNewYear’sgiftsisatraditionalcustominChina,whichisthereasonwhyitaccountsforalmosthalfofpeople’sexpenditure.Lastbutnotleast,duetotheinfluencesfrompeers,friendsandmassmedia,travellingandgatheringanddiningwithfriendsandfamiliesalsobecomepopularintheSpringAsfarasIamconcernedsuchaphenomenonpresentedinthegraphiscommonandHowever,itisalsonecessaryforpeopletoadvocatethriftandfrugalityinPublictransportationsmakeup38.9%,privatecars34%,andbicyclesThischartillustratesthatmostcitizenstendtochoosepublictransportationortoridebicycleswhentheyout.Suchaphenomenoncanbeascribedtothefollowingreasons.Firstly,duetothegrowingnumberofprivatecars,theinconveniencesandtroublescausedbytrafficjamsmakepeoplemorewillingtotakepublictransportationswhichcouldsavealotoftime.Secondly,duetotheawakeningofcitizens’awarenessandextensivemediapublicityabouttheimportanceofenvironmentprotection,residentsingrowingnumbersfinditnecessaryforthemnottodriveprivatecarsveryoften,soastoreducethegreenhousegasemissions,whichcouldimprovethecity'sairFromwhathasbeendiscuss