初中九年级英语课件中考英语写作My school life

CompositionMySchoolLife

中考作文评分标准第五档（13-15分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误（词汇拼写错误2个以内或语法错误1个）；第四档（10-12分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少（词汇拼写错误4个以内或语法错误2个以内）；第三档（7-9分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多（与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误6个以内或语法错误3个以内）第二档（4-6分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句子形式，有3-4个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）；第一档（0-3分）要点不全，语言无可读性（与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。A:Whatdoyouusuallydoatschool/afterclass?B:Ialways…Iusually…Isometimes…Ihardlyever…Inever…A:Whatdoyouthinkofyourschoollife?Let’stalkaboutyourschoollife.B:It’sbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticboring/terrible/so-so…Myschoollife

MynameisBeth．IstudyinNo.1MiddleSchool.Myschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Iwanttosaysomethingaboutmyschoollife.Myschoollifeisbusybutpleasant.

Wehavesixclasseseveryday.Ilikealltheclasses，becausemyteacherscanmaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish,soIjoinEnglishclubeveryweek．IcanspeakEnglishwithmanyotherstudentsthere．It'sveryinterestingandexciting.Ithinkit'shelpfulformetolearnEnglishwell.AndmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Zhang,isverykindandpatient.Sheislikeoursister.Sheoftenhelpsuswithstudyandencouragesustoworkhard.Weallloveherverymuch.Afterclass,Ialwaysplaychessanddiscussmathproblemswithmyclassmates．Theyareoutgoingandclever.What’smore?Ioftentakepartinallkindsofactivities,becauseIwanttoimprovemyabilities.

Inaword，Ilovemyschool．Ilovemylessons，myfriendsandmyteachers．Ifindmyschoollifeismoreandmoremeaningfulandcolorful．五步法：五美四连三列二构一审书面表达Stepbystep1.审2.构3.列4.连5.美文体_____时态_____人称_____连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节列出要点一.ReadtheTitle(审题）文体_____时态_____人称_____记叙文一般现在时第一人称（I/We）二.Structure（结构）开头中间结尾MySchoolLife（怎么样..（

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(情感：期待，热爱，收获Beginning开头（怎么样..interesting/enjoyablecolourful&meaningfulbusybutpleasanthavealotoffun…….MyschoollifeMySchoolLifeTeachersClassmatesSchoolActivitiesStudyEnding结尾Myschoollife(情感：期待，热爱，收获Ibelieve/lhope+从句How/What+感叹句结构初现：抛出观点——展开描述——总结（点题、升华感情）三.

Makealist(列)列出要点Teacherskind/friendlyHumoroushaveastrongsenseofresponsibility/bestrictwithpatienthelp/encouragemetoimprovemystudyClassmatesoutgoingdicussproblemstogetherhelp/encourageeachothersmart&hardworkingActivitiessportsmeetingsArtFestivaljointheclubstakepartindifferentcompetitionsActivitiesfun&interestinguseful/meaningful:Toimproveourabilitiesrelaxourselvesmakemorefriendsdevelopourinterestsorhabitsspend…onsth/(in)doingsthAlthough…

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连：连字成句，连句成段MySchoolLife

第二段Body(正文)StudyClassmatesActivitiesTeachers第一段Beginning:interesting/enjoyable

colourful&meaningfulbusybutpleasant

havealotoffun

Ending结尾：情感升华：期待，热爱，收获

Ibelieve/lhope+从句How/What+感叹句临考如何提高写作能力：１．适当加