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应用文写作新闻报道

假定你是李华,你校于上周五晚上7点在学校报告厅成功地举办了英语演讲比赛,现在请你用英文为校报写一篇报道,内容包括:

1.

活动简述;

2.

比赛过程;

3.

比赛意义。一、审题1.写信人的身份及其他情况2.收信人的身份及其他情况3.内容要点写作目的第一段：写信背景(信息来源,写信目的等等)：

第二段：实现写作目的最重要的内容：第三段：表达希望等等：二、内容构思+谋篇布局1.活动简述

演讲比赛时间、地点以及目的等等2.比赛过程

主持人/选手/评委等人物,演讲/才艺表演/评分/互动/颁奖/致辞等环节3.比赛意义

英语学习的兴趣/热情/英语知识和能力的提高...2-4行1-3行ProblemOne：单词短语用错比赛

competition/contest/game评分,打分数

scoregradevt.划分等级,(给书面作业)打分

markn.(学生作业)分数评价,划分等级

rate

裁判员,评判员

judge奖prize/award颁奖,授予award轮流

inturn/onebyone轮流做某事taketurnstodosth.演讲比赛speech/speakingcontest/competition才艺演出talentshowlecturehall报告厅witness

vt.

见证

witnesssth.(不接宾语从句)LastFridayeveningwitnessedanEnglishSpeechContestwhichwasheldinourschoolLecturehall.sth./活动

beaimed/tragetedatsth.旨在,目的是...sb./组织aimtodosth.力求达到AimingtogetstudentsmoreinterestedinEnglish,ourschoolheld...Aimed/TargetedatgettingstudentsmoreinterestedinEnglish,anEnglishspeechcontestwasheld...演讲比赛目的

的表达inordertodosth.

为了InordertogetstudentsmoreinterestedinEnglish,

...ProblemTwo：比赛过程

不等于

比赛要求/规定ProblemThree：时态用错对比赛过程的报道

一般过去式比赛意义

现在完成时/一般过去式写稿人的希望和祝福

一般将来时Highlyexpectedfinalistsgavetheirwonderfulspeechesandperformedtheirtalentshow,whichofferedanenjoyablefeastforeveryonepresent.Thecompetitionturnedout

tobeacompletesuccess,whichhassparkedgreatenthusiasmforEnglishlearning.Ihopemoreactivitieslikethiswillbeheld.丰富的短语和句型it作形式主语和形式宾语强调句型

itis...that...

动名词做主语从句(定语从句,...)倒装固定搭配/词组近义词/同义词提升表达的方式it作形式主语和形式宾语强调句型

itis...that...

Itwas

anenjoyableexperiencetoseethecontestantsdelivertheirspeechesinturn.Itwasthebrilliantcompetitorsthat/whotookturnstogivetheirspeeches.Thecontestantsdeliveredtheirspeechesinturn,whoseperformanceswonburstsofapplause.动名词作主语：Deliveringthespeechesinturnwasthemajorandstrirringpartofthecompetition.动名词做主语从句(定语从句,...)倒装固定搭配/词组要点一：选手轮流登台演讲近义词/同义词it作形式主语和形式宾语强调句型

itis...that...

动名词做主语从句(定语从句,...)倒装固定搭配/词组要点二：评委根据学生表现打分近义词/同义词Ratingallthecontestantaccordingtotheperformanceswasanextremelypartforjudgesaswellastheaudience.Itwasratherexcitingforeveryonetoseetheresultsratedbythejudgesaccordingtotheperformances.Thejudgesscoredandratedthespeechesbasedontheirperformances,whichheldthebreathofeveryonepresent.强调句型:itis/was...thatit作形式主语和形式宾语强调句型

itis...that...

动名词做主语从句(定语从句,...)倒装固定搭配/词组要点三：学校领导给获奖选手颁奖近义词/同义词Ourschoolleadersawardedthewinners,____________________________________________________________(这意味着

他们的努力和表现最终被认可了).Itwasthemostmemorable/unforgettablemomentsforthewinners______________________________________________(被学校领导颁奖).whichmeanttheireffortsandperformanceswererecognizedatlast.tobeawardedbytheschoolleaders.

LastFridaywitnessedanextraordinaryEnglishSpeechCompetitioninthelecturehall,whichlastedfrom7p.m.to9p.m..Studentsfromeachclasstookpartinit.[写信背景

+1.活动简述]Thecontestantsdeliveredtheirspeechesinwell-designedways,makingeveryonepresentcheerful.TheirfluentEnglish,logicalthinkingandgoodself-imagewonburstsofapplauseandthejudgesweredeeplyimpressed.Intheend,thewinnerswereawardedprizes.[2.比赛过程]

Thecompetitionprovidesachanceforstudentstoshowthemselvesandstimulatesstudents'interestinEnglish.

[3.

比赛意义]范文赏析语言亮点

LastFridaywitnessedanextraordinaryEnglishSpeechCompetitioninthelecturehall,whichlastedfrom7p.m.to9p.m..Studentsfromeachclasstookpartinit.Thecontestantsdeliveredtheirspeechesinwell-designedways,makingeveryonepresentcheerful.TheirfluentEnglish,logicalthinkingandgoodself-imagewon

burstsofapplause(阵阵掌声)andthejudgesweredeeplyimpressed.Intheend,thewinnerswereawardedprizes.Thecompetitionprovidesachanceforstudentstoshowthemselvesandstimulates(促进,激发,刺激)students'interestinEnglish.

Targetedatcultivatingstudents’enthusiasmforEnglish,anEnglishspeechcompetitionwasheldsuccessfullyat7p.m.lastFridaynightinourschoolhall.Somedetailsconcerningthecompetitionareasfollows.[写信背景

+1.活动简述]

Initially,tomakesurethatthecontestwasfair,thecompetitionorderwasdecidedbydrawinglotsonsite.Moreimportantly,itwasrequiredthattheparticipantsdeliveranEnglishspeechwithapositiveandcheerfulthemefluentlyandconfidently.Afterwardscamecomments,adviceandmarksofthejudges,basedonthecompetitors’performance,whichenabledthemtogainusefulexperienceandmakeprogressefficiently.Ultimately,thetopthreestudentswonprizesaswellassomesmallgiftsforallthecompetitors.[2.比赛过程]

Sofascinatingisthecompetitionthatitnotonlybroadensourhorizonsbutalsoenhancesourabilityofspeakinginpublic.

[3.

比赛意义]范文赏析

学生范文1101陈怡彤

Targetedatcultivatingstudents’enthusiasmforEnglish,anEnglishspeechcompetitionwasheldsuccessfullyat7p.m.lastFridaynightinourschoolhall.Somedetailsconcerning(关于)thecompetitionareasfollows.Initially,tomakesurethatthecontestwasfair,thecompetitionorderwasdecidedby