2022年秋中考写作完整版课件Unit1Howtowriteapastthing

Unit11SectionB(3a~3b)

Howtowriteapastthing?项城二中刘强EnglishWritingAMoving“Blackboard”

OnedayAmperewaswalkinginthestreetwhenhethoughtofamathproblem.Hewantedtoworkitoutverymuch,buthehadnopaperorpenwithhim.Justthenhesawa“blackboard”.Hecameuptothe“blackboard”andbegantoworkonit.Afewminuteslater,the“blackboard”begantomove,itmovedslowlyatfirst,butsoonitmovedfasterandfaster.ThenAmperecouldn’tcatchupwithit,sohestoppedtolook,buthefounditwasabackofacarriage(四轮马车).Discussthefollowingquestions:

1.Who

doesthestorytellusabout?2.Whendidithappen?3.Wheredidithappen?4.

Why

couldthe“blackboard”move?5.HowdoyoulikeAmpere?6.Whatdidyoulearnfromthestory?快速阅读课本P862b，小组讨论

并完成下面的思维导图。

Peter’sWorstDayWhatdidPeterlearnfromtheexperience?Wheredidithappen?Why?HowdiditmakePeterfeel?

Whathappened?Whendidithappen?WHOWHENWHEREHOWPeter.ontheschoolsoccerfield.ThatmadePeterveryangryandworried.justaboutanhouragoWHATPeterrealizedpullingtogetherisveryimportant.

Peter’sworstDayPeter’sWorst

DayWHYPetermissedscoringaveryimportantgoal.ChangethelongstoryofTheWinningTeamin2bonPage86intoashortstory(80字左右)。Peter’sWorstDay

ItwastheworstdayofPeter’slife.Hismindwouldn’tstopthinkingaboutwhathappenedaboutanhouragoontheschoolsoccerfield.Hemissedscoringanimportantgoal,sohisteamlostthegame.Hewasveryangryandworried.Assoonashegothome,Petertoldhisfatherwhathappened.Tenminuteslater,Peter’sfathercameintohisroomtocomforthim.

Thenextday,Peterwenttosoccerpracticeagain.Peterthoughtpullingtogetheristhekeytosuccess.Thinkofsomeexperiencesthatmadeyoufeelveryhappyorsad.Tellyourpartneraboutthem.Usethefollowingideastohelpyou.3a●winning/losingacompetition●gettinggood/badgradesonanexam●performingsomethingwell/badlyinfrontofabiggroupofpeople●gettingintoafightwithyourbestfriend●yourfirstvisitoutsideyourhometown

Todaywevisitedafarm.Wehadagoodtime.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.Thefarmworkersgaveusawarmwelcome.Thentheheadofthefarmshowedusaroundthefarm.Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Atnoonwehadapicniclunchinthesunshine.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesorstories.Twoofusevenplayedagameofchess.Weenjoyedourselves.Thetimepassedquickly.Beforeweknewit,wehadtosaygood-byetotheworkers.习作欣赏

MyFirstVisittoaFarmKeypoints：Verbs

visitedafarmmet···bus

hadapicnic

playedchessdanced···sangtoldjokes···storiesTimeorder:

Today···earlyinthemorning···then···atnoon···Afterashortrest···the

timepassedquickly···

作品点评Five“W”andone“H”：When:TodayWho:WeWhere:FarmWhat:VisitafarmWhy:ＰlayHow:Bybus

Thinkofsomeexperiencesthatmadeyoufeelveryhappyorsad.Tellyourpartneraboutthem.Usethefollowingideastohelpyou.●winning/losingacompetition●gettinggood/badgradesonanexam●performingsomethingwell/badlyinfrontofabiggroupofpeople●gettingintoafightwithyourbestfriend●yourfirstvisitoutsideyourhometownWriting查错改错时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否错误固定短语是否正确是否符合语言表达习惯

Grasp:five“W”andone“H”：When:Who:Where:What:Why:How:

Tense:

thesimplepasttenseSummary：Howtowriteapastthing?Writeastorysimilartotheonein2busingyournotesin3a.

Inyourstory,trytoexplainthefollowing:

Whathappened?Whendidithappen?

Wheredidithappen?

Howdiditmakeyoufeel?Why?

Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?Homework

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winning/losingacompetition●getting