Unit+1+Writing+for+writing高中英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

人物介绍写作WritinganIntroductionofaPerson某英文报正在举办主题为“ApersonIadmiremost”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。注意：词数120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________本写作任务要求介绍最钦佩的人，属于描写文。这类作文主要是通过对人物外貌、事迹等的描写来反映人物的思想、性格、品质等特点。ApersonIadmiremostThepersonIadmiremostisTuYouyou,acommittedandpatientscientist.BorninNingboin1930,TuYouyougraduatedfromPekingUniversity.In1967,shewaschosentojoinateamofscientistswiththeobjectiveofdiscoveringanewtreatmentformalaria.Herteamexaminedmanyoldmedicaltexts,andevaluatedlotsofplantsfortheirmedicalproperties.Fromtheirresearch,theyfoundasubstancethatworked.Theyeveninsistedontestingthemedicineonthemselvestomakesurethatitwassafe.Finallythemedicine,whichwascalledartemisinin,soonbecameastandardtreatmentformalariaandsavedthousandsoflives.TuYouyou’sworkissoimportantthattheNobelPrizeof2015wasawardedtoher.TuYouyou,whoisnotinterestedinfame,saiditwasateameffort.Sheisconsideredasamodelforotherpeople,inspiringmorepeopletomakegreatcontributionstoourcountry.简单介绍人物背景重点讲述人物主要事迹人物评价人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：第一部分Beginning：

引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等第二部分Body：

介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等第三部分Ending：

人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点注意：运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用

，，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用

。一般现在时一般过去时1.引出人物：ThepersonIadmiremostis….,Ofalltheoutstandingpeople,Iadmire….themost.Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.TheonewhoIadmiremostis....1.引出人物：---简单介绍人物背景(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)出生于：___________________酷爱；对……有强烈的兴趣：_____________________________在……方面有天赋：_______________从某大学毕业：__________beborninhave/showapassionforbetalentedin...Whenhewasaboy,he

(对...的热情)maths.___________(出生于)Shanghai,onSeptember12th,1980,YaoMingisoneofthebestbasketballplayersinChina.Borningraduatefromshowedapassionfor归纳总结句型Bornin+地点+时间，人物graduatedfrom….Bornintoa….family,人物…1.BorninBeijingin1930,YuangraduatedfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege.2.Bornintoarichfamily,SongQinglinggotagoodeducationandwenttostudyinUSA.3.Bornintoamusicalfamily,heshowedhertalentformusicwhenshewasalittlegirl.练一练：袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。①可以先分解成两个句子。②

确定定语从句部分③

确定关系词Possibleanswer:YuanLongpingwasborninChongqingon7thSeptember1930,whostudiedhardandshowedapassionforagriculturalscience.袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆。他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。YuanLongpingwasborninChongqingon7thSeptember1930.Hestudiedhardandshowedapassionforagriculturalscience.再思考一下，有没有其它更好的方式：(1)(用分词做状语)(2)(用定语从句)BorninChongqingon7thSeptember1930,YuanLongpingstudiedhardandshowedapassionforagriculturalscience.YuanLongping,whowasborninChongqingon7thSeptember1930,studiedhardandshowedapassionforagriculturalscience.袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆。他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。更为关键重要的信息，适宜作为主句表示时间和地点的信息，适宜作为状语SampleTheManWhoFedtheWorldYuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestfiguresinmodernChina,iswidelyknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”.Hemadehugecontributionstotheproblemofworldhugerbypromotingriceproduction.Yuanisnotonlyanoutstandingscientist;heisalsoapersonwhohasawiderangeofhobbies,likelisteningtomusicandswimmingindailylife.YuanwasborninBeijingon7September1930.AftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hewenttoHunanprovinceanddevotedhimselftoagriculturaleducationandresearchallalong.Owingtoyearsofhard-working,thismansucceededincultivatinghybridricein1975andwasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublicin2019.On22May2021,itwasreportedthatYuanhadpassedaway,andourwholecountryfeltsorrowfuldeeply.“Iwasaseed,”heoncesaid.“Tobeagoodone,bothmybodyandspiritshouldbehealthy.”Yuanisapersonwholooksthinbuthasastrongmind.Yuanisamanwholivesinpovertybutownsspiritualrichness.[写作模板]__________，whowasbornin__________，wasoneofthegreatest__________.__________talentfor__________showedataearlyage.Helearned________.Bythetimehewas________，theyoung________hadbecomeawell-known_________.Thefollowingyear_________movedto_________，wherehespenttherestofhislife,__________asa__________.__________，whohasbeencalled__________，__________about__________orsothroughouthislife.Asagreat__________，hewillberememberedbypeopleforever.开头：ThepersonIadmiremostis_______(人）.Bornin_______(地点/时间）,_______（人），whoisoneofthegreatest_______(职业）,showedapassionfor___________(方面）ThepersonIadmiremostisYuanLongping.BorninBeijingin

1930,YuanLongping，whoisoneofthegreatestscientist,showedapassionforresearchingrice.Aftergraduatingfrom__________(学校）,he/shespentmostofhis/hertimeindoing/on___________.Despitemanydifficulties,he/shemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessin_________,whichmadehim_____________(成就）.中间：西南农学院：SouthwestAgriculturalCollege他从事农业教学和研究工作

agriculturalteachingresearch培育出了杂交水稻breedhybridrice杂交水稻之父thefatherofhybridriceAftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hespentmostofhistimeonagriculturalteachingandresearch.Despitemanydifficulties,hemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinbreedinghybridrice,whichimprovedthericeproductionandhelpedridtheworldofhunger.Soheisknownasthefatherofhybridrice.提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿improvethericeproductionandhelpridtheworldofhungerHavingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.ThepersonIadmiremostisYuanLongping.BorninBeijingin

1930,YuanLongping,whoisoneofthegreatestscientist,showedapassionforresearchingrice.AftergraduatingfromSouthwestAgriculturalCollege,hespentmostofhistimeonagriculturalteachingandresearch.Despitemanydifficulties,hemanagedtoovercomethem.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievedthegreatsuccessinbreedinghybridrice,whichimprovedthericeproductionandhelpedridtheworldofhunger.Soheisknownasthefatherofhybridrice.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.结尾：全文：110更多例句A．ThepersonIadmiremostisQianXuesen,afamousscientistknownas“theFatherofChina’sspaceprogram”.（用同位语）B.ThepersonIadmiremostisZhongNanshan,whohelpeddefeatSARSin2003andisonceagainleadinganexpertteamtodealwiththeCOVID-19.(用定语从句)C.Ofalltheoutstandingpeople,IadmireTuYouyouthemost,whoisthefirstChinesescientistawardedtheNobelPrizeinmedicinein2015forhergreatachievementsincuringmalaria.2.介绍人物主要经历---重要词汇做…工作：____________把…奉献给…：___________________

起关键性作用：_______________坚定的决心：___________________在…获得巨大的成功：___________________使某人能够做某事：_____________________下定决心做某事：_____________________workasdevoteoneself/entirelifeto...playacrucialroleinstrongwillanddeterminationachievegreatsuccessin...enablesbtodostheg._______________(从……毕业)PekingUniversityin1993,he__________(做……工作)ateacherinWuhanUniversity.Graduatingfromworkedas/takeupapositionasmakeupone’smindtodo/bedeterminedtodosth2.介绍人物主要经历---重要句型1.Aftergraduationfrom….,he/shespendmostofhis/hertimeindoing/on…2.Inorderto...,hemadeuphismindtodo...3.Withstrongwillandgreatdetermination,heachievethegreatsuccessin...4.Despitemanydifficulties,he/shemanagedtoovercomethem.5.He/Sheputhis/herheartinto…andmadegreatcontributionsto…练一练：1.毕业后他决定从事农业方面的研究工作。2.他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。__________________________________________________________3.___________________________________(有着很强的意志力和坚定的决心),MadameCurie______________________(在……获得巨大的成功)discoveringradium,which_____________________(使她能够赢得)theNobelPrize.Hehasdevotedallhislifetoresearchingonrice.WithstrongwillandgreatdeterminationobtainedgreatsuccessinenabledhertowinAftergraduation,hedecidedtodotheresearchonagriculture.3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇为某人赢得好名声：_______________

高度评价__________________做出巨大贡献：________________________被授予……：________________作为……而闻名：__________________被尊称为________________________树立好榜样：_________________

值得我们崇拜和尊重：_________________________________earnsbagoodreputationthinkhighlyofmakegreatcontributionstobeawarded...beknown/famousasbehonoredassetagoodexampledeserveouradmirationandrespect3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要句型1.Asagreat...，he/shewillberememberedbyusforever.2.ItishisdeterminationthatinspiresmetogoonwhenIhavedifficultyinlearning.3.Havingsetagreatexampleforus,heisanexcellentpersonwhofullydeservesouradmirationandrespect.练一练：1.她为科研献出了一切,对国家作出了巨大贡献。2.因此，他被尊称为“计算机科学之父”并闻名，因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。3.他给我们树立了好的榜样，他真的是一位出色的科学家，值得我们崇拜和尊重。Shedevotedherselftoscientificresearchandmadegreatcontributionstohercountry.Asaresult,

heishonoredandknownas

“Fatherofcomputerscience”,rewardedwithmanyprizesforhisgreatcontributionstotheworld.Havingsetagreatexampletous,heisreallyanexcellentscientistwhodeservesouradmirationandrespect.写作训练你校英语报的TheAdmirable栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你崇拜的人物——钟南山，并投稿。1.1936年出生于南京市一个医学世家；2.2002年非典疫情发生后提出了有效的治疗方法；3.2020年以来，为抗击新冠肺炎（COVID-19）作出巨大贡献；4.2020年8月被授予共和国勋章（theMedaloftheRepublic）。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。BorninNanjingin1936,ZhongNanshanisknownasanexperiencedepidemiologistand

physician.ZhongNanshangrewupinafamilyofmedicalprofessionals,withhisparentsbeing

world-famousmedicalexperts.DuringtheSARSoutbreakin2002and2003,heputforwarda

newtreatment,whichwaslaterusedasthestandardtreatmentforallSARSpatientsinChina,

finallyhelpingthecountrycontroltheepidemic.Around17yearslater,heagainledthecountry’s

fightagainsttheoutbreakofCOVID-19.InAugust2020,ZhongNanshanwasawardedtheMedal

oftheRepublic,thehigheststatehonor,forhisgreatcontributionstoChina’sfightagainstthe

epidemic.Zhong