Unit+2+Integrated+Skills+建议信 高中英语牛津译林版（2020）必修第一册

英语应用文写作英语应用文日记演讲稿通知推荐信感谢信求职信慰问信求助信投诉信建议信道歉信邀请信誊写查单词拼写、时态主谓一致等①用过渡词(句)连接句子和段落②首尾段审体裁、人称、时态抓住要点扩展要点应用文写作Aletterofadvice高考应用文写作之建议信

写作步骤:1.审怎么审题？

建议信特点及写作步骤题型特点：建议信是针对某事或某个问题向收信人提出建议和忠告的信件，建议信通常简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服性。写作思路与框架：“三段式”第一段：陈述事由+写信目的第二段：提出具体建议及理由第三段：表达本人愿望【篇首句】①KnowingthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningEnglish,Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.②

YouaregoingtouniversityinBeijing,soI’d

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choosinguniversityandpreparationsforit.1.You’dbetterdo/Youaresupposedtodo/Youshoulddo…2.Youneedtodo…3.Youcando…4.It’sagoodwayto…【篇中句】【篇尾句】Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.①Thinking(审题）②Outlining（列提纲,写要点）③Expanding（扩词成句）④Linking（连句成篇）⑤Polishing（润色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提示，请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。1.认真计划好自己的时间；2.不要放弃自己的爱好，也不要忘记学习；3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1Para.1开头Para.2正文Para.3结尾Outlining（列出提纲，写要点）Step2要点二要点一表示理解并给予安慰+写信目的建议及原因表达愿望

正文：建议及原因Outlining（列出提纲，写要点）Step22.Don’tgiveyourhobbies.Don’tforgettostudy;1.Planyourtimecarefully;

3.Keepabalancebetweenstudyandhobbies.

Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.=Thefollowingaremysuggestions.=Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(扩词成句）Step3You’dbetterdo/Youaresupposedtodo…,whichwillhelpyou…Itwouldbeagoodideatodo…,bydoingthisyouwillIhighlyrecommendthat…IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…,Whynotdo…?Inthisway,youwillnotonly…butalso….1.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.2.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.3.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Para2：建议及原因Expanding(扩词成句）Step3

Para.3（Ending）Expanding(扩词成句）Step3Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardingtoyourreply.首先，……Tobeginwith,…Firstly…其次，……Secondly/ThirdlyWhat’smore,…Inaddition,…最后，……Finally/Lastbutnotleast,…Linking(连句成篇）Step4添加合适的过渡词：DearSimon,Knowingthat

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.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

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.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearSimon,

Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step5表示理解，给予安慰建议及原因Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendmuchtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.写信目的表达愿望假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眠问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2条建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromy