2024届新高考英语冲刺热点复习读后续写

2024届新高考英语冲刺热点复习

读后续写读后续写Introduction01.02.03.04.ThemesProceduresofWritingUsefulStructuresCONTENTSObjectivesBytheendoftheclass,studentswillbeableto:1.knowwellabouttheContinuationWriting;2.analysethegivenmaterialsofContinuationWritingindependently;3.writeoutlinesoftwoparagraphsindependentlybasedonanalysisofreadingmaterials;4.usesimplesentencestofinishthewritingpart.PART01Introduction提供一段350词以内的语言材料（多为记叙文），要求考生依据该材料内容，以及所给段落开头语进行两段续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。共25分。2023年新高考Ⅰ卷PART02Themes主题语境阅读材料续写内容情节冲突人物情绪解决方法情感变化人与自然遇到危险的动物进入危险的环境人与自我遇到危险的人人与社会误解背叛观念/性格/兴趣不一伤害（自尊/信任等）人与自我贫困/残疾/孤独等失败/骄傲等害怕/紧张自救或他人及时救助由恐惧到镇静到欢喜失望/伤心/后悔/生气/困惑/害羞/尴尬自己反思/悔改或他人给予安慰/鼓励/陪伴由不悦到感动/感恩或充满希望/信心自卑/同情/伤心自己努力改变或他人给予安慰/关爱/跟鼓励，突出和谐/成长由伤心到自信/充满希望PART03ProceduresofWriting问题解决结果阅读文章所给内容：分析发生了什么问题或冲突第一段写作内容：如何解决问题或冲突，以及相关情感或情绪第二段写作内容：问题或冲突得到解决，以及相关情感或情绪（主题升华）ArticleAnalysis(5W+1H)第一段when时间（时态：一般过去时）where地点why事件起因全文whowho1who2who3who4whatwhat1what2what1what2what1what2what1what2how(feelings)难过、害怕、震惊、感动、生气、开心、激动...Structure:TDCStructureTopicThegivensentenceDetailsD1(around15words)D2(around15words)D3(around15words)D4(around15words)Conclusion(feelings)Conclusionsentence(around15words)AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeinto

apotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintothe

eggmixture.NextJeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohot

andthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesink

andputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcooked

nicely.PracticePracticeThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.The

nextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimput

hishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceof

breadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.PracticeAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PracticeWhenWhereWhoWhyWhat

How(feelings)onMother’sDayinthekitchen(athome)becausetheywantedtheirmothertobepleasedandproudofthemthetwins(JeffandJenna)MotherFatherThetwinstriedtomakebreakfastfortheirmother,butmadeamessofit.panicked&calmexciteddisappointedPracticeTopicAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Details(4^15)Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment

Whatdidtheydothen?Didtheymakeit?theirfatherappeared.

Whatdidhesayordo?Wouldhehelpthem?Conclusion(feel)(1^15)disappointed-nervous-happyPracticeTopicDetails(4^15)Conclusion(feelings)(1^15)Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.ThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsHowdidtheyfeel?Whatdidtheythinkoftheirmotherdidforthemeveryday?woketheirmotherupWhatwasherreaction?Whatdidshesayanddo?disappointed-nervous-happyExampleAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.He

hurriedtoJeffworriedlytocheckhisburn.Tohisrelief,therewasnothingserious.

Learningaboutthetwins’intention,hewasdeeplytouchedandmorethanhappyto

lendthemahand,whichdelightedthetwins.Theycleanedupthekitchenfirst,andthen

underfather'sinstruction,theyremadeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge,andfinally

theymadeit.Witheverythingready,theyjumpedwithjoy,sayingthankstotheirfather.

And

thentheyputMother'sbreakfastinabowlandplate.ExampleThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Shecould

hardlybelievehereyeswhenshesawherbreakfastwasalreadypreparedbyherdear

kids.“Itisamazing!Thankyou,mybabies!I'msoproudofyou!”Excitedtearswelled

upinhereyes.Shetastedherbreakfast.“It’sdelicious!”shesaid,huggingthehappy

twinsandkissingthemontheirforeheads.“Weshouldthankyou,Mom,forallthe

workyouhavebeendoingforuseveryday,”theysaidinchorus.PART04UsefulStructures简单句--无灵主语句1.情感（asense/waveof...）+

谓语情感：sadness,happiness,sorrow,grief,depression,joy,excitement谓语：seize,takecontrolof(侵袭;突然控制),choke(使哽咽),

flood(使大受感动;充满),creep(不知不觉地产生),

grip(强烈地影响),givewayto(被....·代替),desert(背离),

fail(使失望),possess(攫住;支配),tear(撕裂:撕扯)等。Griefandpaintoreherintopieces.悲伤和痛苦把她撕成了碎片。Adrearydepressionseizedhimthosedays.那些日子里一种沉闷的沮丧攫住了。Panicsuddenlygrippedmewhenitwasmyturntospeak.轮到我发言时我突然感到一阵恐慌。Angerchokedhiswords.他气得说不出话来。Asenseofsadnesscloudedher.一种悲伤感笼罩着她。Awaveofdisappointmentstuckme.失望如潮水般涌向我。Ifeltawaveofrelieffloodingintomyheart.我感到一阵宽慰涌上心头。Delightfloodedtheroominaninstant.房间里顿时充满了喜悦。简单句--无灵主语句2.时间/地点+谓语时间：yesterday,Mondaymorning,lastSunday,lastnight地点：China,thevillage,theforest谓语：witness,see,boast（引以为荣）Recentyearshavewitnessedagrowingsocialmobility.近年来人们的社会流动性越来越大。Beijingfirstsawtheraisingofthefive-starredflaginTiananmenSquare.五星红旗首次在北京天安门广场上升起。Thetownboastsabeautifullake.镇上有个美丽的湖,人人以此为傲。简单句--无灵主语句3.自然现象+谓语自然现象：fog,rain,snow,wind,sun谓语：blanket(覆盖),bring(引起/带来),prevent(阻止),strike(照射),

hit(袭击),threaten(有危险、威胁),come(发生)Thethickfogblanketedtheground.浓雾笼罩着大地。Therainscametoolatetodoanygood.雨季来得太晚，什么用也没有。Therainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoon.下雨使得游客无法欣赏满月简单句--无灵主语句4.身体部位或声音、容貌+谓语身体部位：face,eyes,tears,appearance,outlook谓语：lightup(喜色),brighten(变得开心),linger(持续看或思考),

wellup(涌出),fail(出故障),flash(突然显露)HerfacelitupwhenIgaveherthepresent.我给她礼物时,她的脸上露出了喜色。Hiseyeslingeredonthediamondringonherfinger.他的目光滞留在她手指上钻戒上。Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tearswelledupinhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字迹,便热泪盈眶。简单句--无灵主语句5.思想、行为动作+谓语思想/行为动作：thought,idea,inspiration谓语：strike/hit(突到),arouse(激起),remind(提醒),delight(使高兴),

frighten(使害怕),stun(惊),fill(使充满)Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.我突然有一个可怕的想法。Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧简单句--无灵主语句6.原因、方式、目标+谓语动词原因/方式/目标：cause,method,goal,mistake,test,capacity谓语：使失去(deprive,cost，rob),使增加(addto，brighten),使无能(disable,disqualify),使能够(enable,empower,qualify),使免除(save)Thenewtestshouldenabledoctorstodetectthediseaseearly.新的检验将使医生及早发现该种疾病。Mycapacityforhardworksavedmefromearlydismissal.我要不是能干重活早就被解雇了。Thatonemistakealmostcosthimhislife.那一个差错几乎使他丧命简单句--非谓语动词（-ing/-ed/todo）主语Dancingmakesmehappy.TospeakfluentEnglishismydream.宾语HelikestowatchTV.Weenjoyreadinginthelibrary.补语Heaskedmetohelphim.Hekeptmewaitingforalongtime.Igotmyhaircut.表语Mygoalistokeepfit.Mydreamisgoingtoagooduniversity.定语TheboywearingglassesmadeinChinaknowsthewaytolearnEnglish.状语Togetgoodgrades,hestudieshard.Standingonthetopofthemountain,Icanseethewholecity.Praisedbytheteacher,thestudentfelthappy.并列句（连词）Thinkitover,andyou’llfindawayout.再想想，然后你就能找到方法了。Hurryup,oryouwillbelate.快一点，不然你就要迟到了。Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butI’dbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.我知道你的日程很繁忙，但是如果你能花一点时间看看它们并且做出必要的改变，我会非常感谢。Iknowlittleaboutit,soIcan’tgiveyouanyadvice.我不太了解，所以我不能给你任何建议。定语从句Thisisthetimethatsawhisgrowth.这就是见到他成长的时候。ThisisthetimewhenImethim.这就是见到他的时候。ThisistheplacewhereIsawhim.这就是我见到他的地方ThisistheplacethatIvisited.这就是我参观的地方。ThisisthereasonthatIused.这就是我用的理由。ThisisthereasonwhyIhelpedhim.这就是我帮他的理由。Thisisthehousewhosewind