小升初英语最后一次课题-作文

学生姓名备课时间6月15日年级科目六年级教师姓名张欣课时课时授课时间6月17日课题阅读与作文教学目标重点难点考点教学根本内容、知识大纲作业布置教师反应知识掌握〔30%〕①②③④⑤⑥⑦⑧⑨⑩总得分总分值100教师签名能力培养〔40%〕①②③④⑤⑥⑦⑧⑨⑩分思想态度〔30%〕①②③④⑤⑥⑦⑧⑨⑩本次课总体评价学生自评本次课收获和自我感受〔对应分值上打ⅴ〕①②③④⑤⑥⑦⑧⑨⑩学生签名家长意见家长签名典范教育个性化教案教学步骤与详细内容附后教学主管日期：月日英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。通常英语写作有以下几个特点：紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求；以有指导的写作为主，便于考生在短时间内构思成文；突出试题的交际性，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力；增强试题的实用性，所选话题贴近学生学习生活，为学生所熟悉；看图作文主要考查考生运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。英语写作注意两点

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的根底。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多〞：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。最后一个星期如何训练英语写作

1.重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一。

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用〔ontheotherhand，however，furthermore〕、作者的表达方式〔词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用〕、作者是如何进行表达和议论的。

2.在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练。

练习写作应从根本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实〞起来。更重要的是经老师修改正的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。英文写作“四步走〞

由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：

1〕作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2〕考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。

3〕边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

4〕写完后一定要再细看一遍。主要体裁作文写作技巧

〔一〕写提示议论文应考虑的几点：1.文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句〔topic〕说明观点或看法。

2.会使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由〔supportingsentences〕。

3.归纳总结，首尾照应。

〔二〕看图作文应考虑的几点：1.看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。

2.确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。

3.确定体裁〔说明文还是记叙文〕，接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。

4.根据图片或图表大意议论。写书信写日记的格式3rdApril2023〔日期写在右边〕DearMissLin,I’m…(抬头空三格)审题过程时态：主要考虑四种时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时，现在进行时。要根据题意判断正确的时态。注意：一篇作文可以不止一种时态。题目中，时态的提示包括：人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称。审题时根据题意用正确的人称写。1〕如使用第三人称，需注意三单在一般现在时的用法，动词后需加s或es。如：Shelikesplayingping-pong.2〕写作过程中注意代词的格式。如：He(主格)feelstired.Ilikehim.(宾格)Thisishis(形代)bike.That’snotyourbook,It’smine.(名代)复数形式：TheirEnglishteacherisveryfunny.Theyoftenplayfootballtogether.结构：使文章有条理的方法使用时间词语衔接：如写过去时的作文：LastSunday;LastWeekend;MyHoliday等作文题目例如时态时间结构衔接词LastSunday过去时inthemorning,intheafternoon,intheevening,LastWeekend过去时onSaturdaymorning(afternoon),onSundaymorning(afternoon), MyHoliday过去时onMonday,onTuesday,onWednesday…onthe1stday,onthe2nd,onthe3rd…lastdaySundayPlan将来时inthemorning,intheafternoon,intheevening2)总起句和结尾句前后照应。4.容易出错的句型：be动词和行为动词：同一个句子只能出现一种〔现在进行时除外〕错误：IwaswenttotheparklastSunday.(把was去掉)like+动词ing形式。Ilikegoingshopping.(注意like后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)三单句子：Shegoestoschoolonfooteveryday.动词后加s(或es)!Therebe句型Thereisabirdandtwomonkeysinthetree.(用thereis而不是thereare)时态范文：过去时：(动词用过去式)LastWeekendIwasbusylastweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,Iwenttotheparkwithmygrandparents.Wewentfishingthere.Intheafternoon,Iplayedping-pongwithmyfriends.Itwasfunny!OnSundaymorning,Ireadbooksanddidmyhomeworkathome.Intheafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Intheevening,Iplayedchesswithmyfather.Iwasveryhappylastweekend.将来时:〔begoingto+动词原形或will+动词原形〕begoingto=willSundayPlanIamgoingtohaveabusySunday.Inthemorning,Iamgoingtotheparkwithmygrandparents.Wewillgofishingthere.Intheafternoon,Iamgoingtoplayping-pongwithmyfriends.Thenwewillgotothecinema.Intheevening,Iamgoingtoreadbooksanddomyhomeworkathome.ThenIwillplaychesswithmyfather.Itwillbeafunnyday!一般现在时：〔第一人称：动词用原形〕MySundayIhaveabusySunday.Inthemorning,Ioftengotheparkwithmygrandparents.Sometimeswegofishingthere.Intheafternoon,Ioftenplayping-pongwithmyfriends.Thenwegotothecinema.Intheevening,Ioftenreadbooksanddomyhomeworkathome.ThenIoftenplaychesswithmyfather.Sundayisfun!一般现在时：〔三单：注意人称、动词+S〕MyfamilyTherearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisadoctor.Helikesplayingfootball.Heisverykind.Mymotherisateacher.Sheoftenreadsbooksintheevening.Iamastudent.Ilikeplayingcomputergamesanddosportswithmyfriends.Ioftengohikingwithmyparentsontheweekend.Ilovemyfamilyverymuch.介绍我的物品1〕我的书包MyBackpackIhaveabackpack.Itislargeanditisblue.Itisabirthdaygiftfrommyparents.Iloveitverymuch.Itisvery"hard-working",becauseIkeepallmyschoolthingsinit.Itisveryheavy.Itiswithallthetimeduringschooldays.Itisagoodfriendofmine.〔2〕我的房子MyHouseIhaveahouse.Itisbigandnew.Thereareeightroomsinit.Theyarealiving-room,akitchen,threebedroom,onestudyandtwobathrooms.IwatchTVintheliving-room.Idomyhomeworkinthestudy.Ihavedinnerinthekitchen.Thisismyhouse.Ilikeit.〔3〕IlovemybedroomIhaveabedroom.Itisnotbig,butitisnice.Thereisabedinmybedroom.Ayellowdogisonthebed.Everynight,Isleepwithit.Nexttothebed,thereisadesk.Abearlampisonthedesk.Ilikethebearlamp.It'scute.Iliketodohomeworkunderthelampeveryevening.Ihaveanewcomputerinmybedroom.Itismybestfriend.BecauseIstudyatit,playatit.Therearealsoseveralbeautifulpicturesonthewall.Ilikemybedroom.Doyoulikeit?(4)MyPencil-boxIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisPencil-box.Sheisaverybeautifulgirl.Look!Thereisapictureonherface.It’sapictureofflowers.Hercoatisblueandyellow.Therearesomepencils,apen,aruler,arubberandatapeinherstomach.FromMondaytoFriday,Igotoschoolwithher.WhenIwanttocopyorwritethenewwords,Iopenhermouthandtakeoutthepencilfromherstomach.Shehelpsmealot.AndIlikeherverymuch.(5)Myfavouritephoto我最喜爱照片ThereisanAoyuinthepicture.TheAoyuhasagreentail,twocolorfulhornsandthesilverskin.It’sasilverAoyu.Itlooksbeautifulandlively.AoyudanceisatraditionaldanceinShawanPiaose.Itmeansitcanalwaysgetthefirst.It’sagoodsymbol.Everyonelikesitverymuch.介绍假日〔1〕今年暑假(Thisvacations)InthisvacationsIgototravelinsomefamousplacesandigotovisitmygrandparentsinthevillage.ilearnsomethingdifenrent.likeexample:Iknowpeopleworkinthevillageitissohardandsotired,theyaregrowthevegetable,riceandsomethingelseitisverydificult.〔2〕小学的最后一个暑假(thelastsummerinmyelementaryschool)thelastsummerinmyelementaryschoolisveryunforgetable,irememberiwillgotoanotherschoolandhavetoleavemyfriendsandteachers,ifeelsad,butilearnedtogettogetherwiththemtorememberthefriendshipbetweenus,wehaveagoodtimeandsweartostudyhardinordertohaveabrightfuture.〔3〕MywinterholidayThiswinterholiday,IwenttoKunmingwithmyfamily.Kunmingisaverybeautifulcity,Ithink.Theskyisblueandtheairisclean.Youcanseemanykindsofniceflowerseverywhere.Theweatherthereisgreat.It′snevertoohotortoocoldalltheyearround,sopeoplealwayscallit"SpringCity".Kunmingissurroundedbybeautifulscenery.Andoneofthemostfamousviewsis"TheStoneForest".Itisreallyscenic.WejuststayedinKunmingforsixdays,butIfeltveryhappy,andIlikeKunmingverymuch.译文：这个寒假，我和我的家人去了昆明。我觉得，昆明是一座非常美丽的城市。昆明的天空蓝蓝的，空气是那么清新。到处都可以看到许多种类的美丽鲜花。那里的天气也非常棒。全年都不会太热或太冷，所以人们都称昆明为“春城〞。昆明周围有许多美丽的景观。最著名的风景就是“石林〞了。那可是真正的天然景观。我们虽然只在昆明待了六天，但是我觉得非常快乐，而且我非常喜欢昆明。〔4〕Mywinterholidaymywinterholidaywasveryinteresting.Asthatdayigotbacktomynativehometown,cousinsandcousinestookmetoski.Myskiingskillisn'twell,gotdownfor15times,theylaughedatmebehind,ican'thelpsmilingtoo.ThedayofSpringFestivalwasthemosthappinessday,wehadmealforthefirst,atableofdeliciousfood,thatmademesoglad.Thenweplayedthefireworks.Thechildrenswavingthelighteningticketwhilewatchingtheadultsplayingthefireworks.Thatwassobeautiful!Likethestarsrainningdowntheworld.Attheend,itwastimetogettheredbag.wewereveryexciting,andsatisfied.Sometimes,wealsogoshoppingandbuyingsomethingwelike.Winterholidaylifewasreallyabundant!我的寒假生活非常有趣.刚回老家那天,哥哥姐姐弟弟妹妹就拉着我去溜冰场溜冰.我技术不好,摔了15个跟头,他们都在那边笑我,我也情不自禁的笑了.大年三十那天最开心.先是吃团圆饭,一桌子的美食,让我大饱口服.然后就是放烟花.我们几个小孩一边拿着荧光棒甩,一边看大人们放烟花.好美啊!像降落在人间的星星.最后就是拿红包拉,我们都很兴奋,也很满足.有时,我们还会去逛街,买一些自己喜欢的东西.寒假生活真美好!介绍我的家人或者朋友〔1〕MyGoodFriendZhangYingismygoodfriend.She’sinClass1,Grade4ofTianjiaoPrimarySchool.She’samodelstudent.She’scleverandshe’shelpful,too.Sheoftenhelpsteachersandyoungstudentsatschool.SheisgoodatChinese,maths,English,artsandcrafts,musicandsoon.Shehasalotofhobbies.Shelikespaintinganddrawing.Andshelikeslisteningtomusic,havingpicnicswithherparents.Ohyeah,shelikesfishing,too.Butshedoesn’tlikeplayingbasketball,football,tabletennisorvolleyball.ZhangYingisthebestfriendofmine.Ilikeplayingwithher.Wealwaysworktogetherandhelpeachother.〔2〕MynewteacherMynewteacherisscienceteacher.He’sverystrong.Hehasabigmouth,twobigears,twobigeyesandanottoobigandnottoosmallnose.Heoftenwearsablacknewshirtandbrownpants,withtwobigshoes。Myscienceteacherisverykind.Andheisverysmart,isn’the?Today,wehavescienceclass.Weareveryhappy.Becauseheissofunny.Whoishe?He’saMr.Zhou.〔3〕MymotherMymotherisashopassistant.She’sthirty-sixyearsold.She’stallandthintoo.She’spretty.Herhairisshortandstraight.ShelikestosingandshelikesZhangXueyou’ssongsandEnglishsongs.Shelikestoeatcrabs.Shealwaysgoesshoppingwithme.She’sgoodatMaths.WhenIhaveproblemswithMathsshewillhelpme.Shedoesn’tlikepets;becauseshethinkstheyaredirty.Ilikemymotherverymuch.〔4〕MyfatherMyfatherisamanager.He’sforty-sixyearsold.Buthelookslikeveryyoungandhandsome.Healwaysgoestoparkwithme.Helikestosmoke.ButIthinksmokeisbadforhimself.HelikesEnglishsongs.He’sgoodatChinese.Hesometimeshelpsmetowriteacomposition.Myfatherlikespetsverymuch.Ilikemyfatherverymuch.〔5〕MygrandmotherMygrandmotherandmysisterlivetogether.Mygrandmaissixty-threeyearsold.She’sretiring.Mysisterisastudentoffourteenyearsold.Shehastwobigeyesandlongstraighthair.She’sasmallfamoussingerinhercity.Shelikestosinganddance.Shecansingverywell.Shejoinsinmanycompetitionsandshealwaysbechampion.(6)MyMother(我的妈妈)Mymotherisabeautifulwoman.Sheis38yearsold.Sheisanengineer.Shelikessingingandshecansingverywell.Shealsolikesreading,herfavouritebookisHARRYPOTTER.Althoughshehasn'tanymoney,Iloveherverymuch.Becausesheismymother.Andshelovesme,too.Thisismymother.〔7〕Ihaveabestfriend.Shehaslongstraightblackhairbigblackeyesandasmallnose.Sheisverythinandkind,sheiscutetoo.HerEnglishandChineseisverygood.Sheishard-working.Shefavoriteseasonissummer,becauseit'shot,shecaneatice-cream.Shelikeplayingthepiano,readingbooksandsingingsongs.Who'sshe?Sheismybestfriend---SunMengQi.ShehasaverygoodEnglishname,too---Angle.译：我有个最好的朋友。她有着长长的黑色直发，大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。她很瘦，对人非常和蔼，她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常好。她学习十分认真。她最喜欢的季节是夏季，因为夏天很热，她能吃冰淇凌。她喜欢弹琴，读书和唱歌。她是谁?她就是我最好的朋友——孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿)〔8〕MyFamilyThisismyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Mygrandmother,myfather,mymotherandme.Mygrandmotherhasshortwhitehair.Shelooksverynice.Myfatherhasshortblackhairandsmalleyes.Helooksveryfat,soIoftencallhim“fatman〞.Heworksatafactory.MymotherworksataL.D.T.Mymotherhaslongblackhair.Shelikessportsandtraveling,soIoftengoonsportswithmymother.Onholidaysmyfamilyoftengototravel.IstudyatGuiyuan译：家人这是我的家.有4人在家里.奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我.奶奶短白发.她看起来很漂亮.爸爸小眼睛,短黑发.他看起来很肥,所以我常常称呼他为"肥人".他在一家工厂工作.妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发.喜欢运动和旅游,所以经常去体育与妈妈.假日经常到我家旅行.我念小学的同志.我们感到非常快乐.自我介绍〔1〕DoyouknowmeIamstudentofSouthwest〔2〕Thisisme英文：Everybodyisgood,mynameiscalledHexuan,myEnglishnameiscalledAngle.EverybodyknewthatAngleistheangelmeaning,IhopedthatIforevercanlookliketheangelequallyhappily,joyful,iscarefreeallday!Iinthesixthgrade,facedwithrosethemiddleschoolnow,fatherandmother,grandfatherpaternalgrandmother,teacherschoolmatesplacetheverybigexpectationtome,Iwillcertainlynotdisappointtheirexpectation,willstudydiligently,passesanexaminationjuniormiddleschool'skeyclass!Inthefuturewillbecomesocialapersonofgreatabilityandtremendouspotential,willmakethecontributionforthemotherland!中文：

大家好，我的名字叫何璇，我的英文名字叫Angle。大家知道吗，Angle是天使的意思，我希望我永远都会像天使一样开开心心，快快乐乐，整天无忧无虑的！我现在上六年级了，面临升中学了，爸爸妈妈，爷爷奶奶，老师同学都给我寄予很大的期望。我一定不会辜负他们的期望，努力学习，考上初中的重点班！将来成为社会的栋梁之才，为祖国做出奉献！〔3〕MygoodhabitsInthemorning.First,Igetup.Next,Ibrushmyteeth.Then,Iwashmyface.Afterthat,Ihavebreakfast.Atlast,Igotoschool.Intheevening.First,Ifinishmyhomework.Next,Ihavedinner.Then,Ipackmyschoolbag.Afterthat,hangupmyclothes.Atlast,Igotobed.Animals〔1〕MyDogIhaveadog.MydognameisDuDu.DuDuis9years.DuDuisfat.Itwearsawhitecoat.DuDuhastwobigeyesandtwosmallears.Ithasoneshortmouth.Mydogissmart.Ilikemydog.Doyoulikeit?(2)AnimalsIlikeanimalsverymuch.Ihaveadog,It’smyfavouriteanimal.It’swhite,Itlookslikeasnowball.Ithastwobigeyesandears.Butitsnoseandmouthareverysmall.It’sverynaughty.ItoftenstaresatmyfoodwhenIhaveameal.WhenI’mhomeitfollowsmeallthetime.WhenIdomyhomework,itoftensitsbesidequietly,butsometimesrunsaroundmeandshouts:womwom.Ilikemydogverymuch.(3)Doyoulikeme?Hello!Everyone.I’malittlerabbit.MynameisHanhan.Look!I’mverylovely.Myeyesarered.Myearsarelong.Myhairiswhite.Mytailisshort.Ilikecarrotsverymuch.Ihaveagoodfriend.She’smylittlemaster.HernameisZhouXun.Wealwaysplaygamestogether.Ilikeherverymuchandshelikesme,too.(4)WhoamI?Hello!MynameisFeifei.Mymotherisverybeautiful.Myfatherisveryhandsome.SoI’mverylovely.Look!Mycoatiswhite.Myeyesareblue.Ihavealongtail.Fishismyfavoritefood.Ilikemicetoo.Guess!WhoamI?特别的一天〔1〕PlantingTrees植树Springiscoming.Itistheseasonforplantingtrees.OnSunday,ourteacherledustothesuburbtoplanttrees.Webroughtsomespades,pailsandsaplingswithus.Onarrivingthere,everybodywentintoactioninnotime.Wedugsquarepitsfirst.Thentwopersonswereneededtoplantatree.Oneheldthesaplingcarefullyandtheotherputthesoilin.Iwishthesaplingswouldgrowupquickly.【译文】春天来了，又是一个植树的季节。星期天，老师带着我们去郊区植树。同学们拿着铁锨、水桶和小树苗上路了。到了目的地后，大家不由分说，争先恐后地干起来。我们先挖坑，然后两个人合作，一个扶着小树苗，一个培土。小树啊，你快快长大吧。〔2〕今天的经历(Today'sexperience)Itwasafinedaytodayandthesunwasbright.IvisitedBeijingZoowithmyclassmate，ZhangHong.Theanimalsthereweresointerestingthatallthepeoplelovedthem.WhenIsawavisitorthrowingfoodtothemonkeys，Iwentrantostophimandsaid，“Animalsareourgoodfriendsandwemusttakegoodcareofthem.〞〔3〕BirthdayMybirthdayisonSunday.Myparentsaregoingtohaveabirthdaypartyathome.Iinvitemyfriendstocometotheparty.Attheparty.Theygivememanysmallpresents.Suchascards,picturebooks,pens.TheysingHappyBirthdaytome.Mymothermakesabigcakeforme.Icutthecakeintosmallpiecesandgivethemout.wesinganddance.Wehaveagoodtimeattheparty.MyFavouriteFestival我喜欢的节日

(1)ChineseNewYearChineseNewYearismyfavouritefestival.ItusuallycomesinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisthemostimportantfestivalforusChinese.BeforetheChineseNewYear,wearebusyshoppingandcleaningourhouses.Myparentsalwaysbuymesomenewclothes.OnChineseNewYear'sEve,wehaveabigfamilydinner.WeusuallyeatsometraditionalChinesefood.Ittastesdelicious.Afterdinner,weoftenwatchNewYearTVprogrammestillmidnight.Wealsosetoffbeautifulfireworks.Icangetsomeredpocketswithmoneyinthemfrommyparents,grandparents,unclesandaunts.IcanbuywhatIwantwiththemoney.

WealwayshaveagoodtimeatChineseNewYear.

过新年是我最喜欢的节日，一般是在一月或是二月到来。对于我们中国人来说新年是最重要的节日。在过年前，我们都要忙于购置年货和清扫我们的房间，我的爸爸妈妈经常会给我买一些新衣服。在除夕的那天晚上，我们都会有全家的聚餐，年夜饭。经常吃些中国的传统美食，非常好吃。晚饭过后，就开始看春节联欢晚会，一直到午夜，然后放鞭炮。我还能从爸爸妈妈，爷爷奶奶，叔叔和阿姨那里收到红包，我就能用这些钱买我想要的东西。

每年过年的时候我们都非常的快乐。(2)儿童节ChildrensDayTheChildren'sDaythisyearisthemostunforgettableoneformebeacausei'llsoongraduate.Eventhoughitdoesn'tcomeyet,ibelieveitmustbethemostunforgettable.Iwillnolonegerbeachildoncegoingtomiddleschool.WhataunforgettableChildren'sDay!这年的六一儿童节是我最难忘的，因为我快要毕业了，虽然它还没来，但我知道这年的六一儿童节是最难忘的。升上了初中就不再是“儿童〞了。难忘的六一儿童节！(3)Mother’sDayTodayisMother’sDay.Iknowsomeofmyclassmatesaregoingtohelptheirmotherswiththehousework,others.aregoingtobuyso