初中英语外研社课标版八年级上册(2013)-pets写作课-公开课

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IsaySuri,yousaycool!SuriCool!SuriCool!Ihavemanyhobbies.Keepingpetsisoneofthese.Dogscute,catssmartParrotsarethebest.Isitagoodideatokeeppetdogs?EmmaMattWhataretheiropinions?Tip1:Usually,thefirstparagraphtellsthe

writers’opinions.Whichistherightstructure结构ofthetwopassages?Introduction总起Body主体Conclusion总结Canyoufindthetopicsentence(主题句)ofeachparagraph?Tip2:Thefirstsentenceisusuallythe

topicsentence.EmmaandMattuse_____________________tosupportthetopicsentences支撑主题句.feelingsa____________e__________e________f________dvantagesxperiencesxamplesactse_________xperiencesTip3:Supportingdetailscanbefeelings,advantages,experiences,examples,factsetc.A:Dogsbringuswarmththoughtheycan’tspeak.B:Dogscan’tspeak.Theybringuswarmth.A:Welearnresponsibilityfromdogs.B:It’sresponsibilitythatwelearnfromdogs.A:Thelovefromdogsisimportant.B:Whatreallymattersisthelovefromdogs.A:Onlywhenyouhavepetdogscanyoutastethejoy.B:Petdogsmakeyouhappy.Dogsbringuswarmththoughtheycan’tspeak.It’sresponsibilitythatwelearnfromdogs.Whatreallymattersisthelovefromdogs.Onlywhenyouhavepetdogscanyoutastethejoy.Let’slearn从句强调句倒装句Tip4:Trytoimitate模仿thegoodsentenceswhilewriting.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Firstofall,..Also,…Finally,…Fromwhat’sabove,…Readontofindmore.Tostartwith,..What’smore,…Worsestill,..Lastbutnotleast,…Allinall,…Underlinethelinkingwords连接词.使用连接词\过渡句，使文章流畅。Whatmakesagoodbody?Enoughlinkingwords语篇连贯Excellentsentences句式多样TREERichsupportingdetails丰富的支撑句Topicsentence清晰的主题句WorkingroupsandhelpSurifinishthesupportingdetails(支撑句).It’s____________thatmakethemajoytolife.Whatreallymattersis______________________.Onlywhenyou________canyoufeelthefun._________________though___________________.Parrotsareinteresting._________________________________________________________________Inyouropinion,whatkindofanimalsarethebestpets?Writedownyourideas._______makethebestpets…snailturtlehamsterparrotgoldfishPeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatmakesthebestpets.Inmyopinion,_______arethebestpets.

Herearemyreasons.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Use“TREE”pattern.1.Imitate(模仿)thesentencesyoulike.Fromwhat’sabove,Idobelieve_______arethebestchoiceforpets.LevelAPolishyourwritingaccord