【读后续写】购物与健康-2021年高考英语一轮复习能力拓展之读后续写

2021年高考英语能力拓展之读后续写11

购物与健康

1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswere

limited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.

Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,

thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined（谢绝）.Butshekepturgingustohavealookat

last.

Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.Itwasourhome,smallandcharming,

overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderly

couple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,

thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouse

anddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadeanoffer-farbelowthe

askingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalso

muchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.

Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigher

price.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstill

wasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid（出价）.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.

Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.

注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Wewenttotheownershomeafterwemacleourfinaloffer.

Paragraph2:

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,

2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopperandhavingagoodnoseforbargains.So

whenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale”,Imarched

intothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfand

enjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofasale.

Allofasudden,there,atthebackofthestoresatacanoe（轻舟）exactlylikemyhusband's

dreamSupremoNumero-Uno,whosepicturehadbeenstuckonthebathroommirrorforyears.My

heartbeatwildly.Ipushedmywaythroughthecrowds,andnearlyfellintothecanoelookingfor

thepricetag.Thereitwas,withthemanufacturer^suggestedpriceat$6,750plustaxcrossedout

andahandwrittenTOCLEAR$750ASIS.Mustbeamistake.$6000off?Salesman.Ihadtotalk

toasalesman.Ispottedayoungfellowwitha"Hi.I'mMathew"."Mathew.TellmeaboutthisEl

Supremocanoe.What'swrongwithit?Whyisitonly$750?^^

“Oh.There'snothingwrongwithit.It'sbrandnew.We'reclosingthestore.It9sonclearance

likeeverythingelse.Tilgocheck.^^Afewminuteslaterhecamebackandsaid,'Tmsorryma'am.

Someonemadeamistakeonthesaletag.Itshouldbe$4,750forthewholepackage.^^

Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes."Ohwell",Isaidsadly."Ofcourse,itwastoogoodtobetrue.

Thisisexactlylikemyhusband'sdreamboat.IguessIstartedtodreammyselfwhenIsawthat

pricetag.He'sgoingtobe62yearsoldFriday.Hadtoretireearlyforhishealth.It'sbeenhardon

justthepensionbutthestubbornoldfoolhasbeensaving$10everyweekforyearstobuyonejust

likethis.IpromiseIwon'tbuyanything,butit'sjustanoldman'ssillydream,youknow.Always

saidhewantedtofishinacanoeafterheretired,“myvoiceloweredandIturnedandwalked

away.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fbrdelivery,ma,am?^^

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"Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpa'sandthecanoe

hadbeenorderedbyhim.

3.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

SallywasonlyeightyearsoldwhensheheardMommyandDaddytalkingaboutherlittle

brother,Georgy.Hewasverysickandthedoctorstoldthemthatonlyaveryexpensiveoperation

couldsavehislife.However,hisfamilycouldnotaffordit.SallyheardDaddysaysadly,"Onlya

miracle（奇迹）cansavehimnow.^^

Sallywenttoherbedroomandfoundherpiggybank.Sheshookallthemoneyoutonthe

floorandcounteditcarefully.Thensheputallthemoneyinherpocketandmadeherwaytoa

drugstore（药店）.Shewaitedpatientlyfbrthestorekeepertogiveherattention,buthewasbusy

talkingtoanotherwell-dreoedman.Sallyclearedherthroat.Nogood.Thenshetookoutacoin

fromherpocketandthrewitontotheglasscounter（柜台）.Thatdidit!

“Whatdoyouwant?”thestorekeeperaskedangrily."Can'tyouseeI'mtalkingtomy

brother?”“Well,Iwanttotalktoyouaboutmybrother,Sallyansweredbackbravely."He'ssick,

andIwanttobuyamiracle.”“Ibegyourpardon,“saidthestorekeeper.

“MyDaddysaysonlyamiraclecansavehimnow,sohowmuchdoesamiraclecost?”

“Wedon'tsellmiracleshere,littlegirl.Ican9thelpyou.”

“Listen,Ihavethemoneytopayfbrit.Justtellmehowmuchitcosts.^^

Thenthatwell-dressedmanasked,6€Whatkindofmiracledoesyourbrotherneed?,,"Idon't

know,^^Sallyanswered.Tearsstartedtorushintohereyes."Ijustknowhe'sreallysickand

Mommysaysheneedsanoperation.Butmyfamilydoesn'thaveenoughmoney,soIhave

broughtallmymoney.Ilovemylittlebrother.”"Howmuchdoyouhave?”askedthewell-dressed

man."Adollarandelevencents,“Sallyanswered.44Andthat'sallthemoneyIhave.^^

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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"'Well,Icanhelpyou,saidthewell-dressedman.

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Itwasn1longuntilGeorgiwashomeagain.

4.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写

的词数应为120左右。

In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Iwasfacedwithadifficultchoiceofacareerpathbefore

collegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan（巴基斯坦），therewerelimitedchoices:

becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.I

wasn*tinterestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.

MyunclesuggestedthatIdoaworkplacement（实习工作）toexperienceitforamonthinan

internationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.It

seemedlikeagoodidea.

Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowthe

worldoffinanceworked,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingwork

environment.

Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.The

experiencewasquitedifferent.Thehospitaldaysstartedearly（at7am,comparedwith9amatthe

bank）,andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,

throughthenight,andagaininthenextday.

Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxing

atmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalhadanintense（严肃紧张的）

environment,andthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatbusinesswasabetter

choice.

Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteraverybusynightcall.In

frontofmewasapublicbus,withsomeboyssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough（穿

梭）traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.

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Suddenly,aboyfelloffthebackofthebus._

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Thenextday,whenIwenttohospitaltoseetheboy,allhisfamilygotup,withgrateful

smilesontheirfaces.

5.阅读下面材料•，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写

的词数应为150左右。

OnthemorningofJan25,theverydayoftheChineseLunarNewYear,Iwasunpleasantly

wokenupbyaphonecall.Itwasformyfather.Hepickeditup,andIsensedfromhisshakyvoice

thatsomethingwentwrong.

Assoonashehungup,myfatherturnedtomymotherandthenme,saying,“Itwasthe

secretary.Hecalledeveryonetomeetintheofficerightnowbecauseoftheoutbreakofthe

COVID-19.^^

“Butdad,it'stheSpringFestival!^^HowIwishedmyfathercouldchangehismindandstay

withus.Wasn'tthedaymeantfbrfamiliestobetogether?Myfather,anofficialworkingin

anothertown,seldomcamebackhome.Andwasthevirusseriousenoughtokeepusapart?Iwas

upset.Tomygreatdisappointment,fatherlefthomewithouthesitation,comfortingmebysaying

thathewouldbebacksoon.

Inthefollowingdays,newsloadedwiththefastspreadofCOVID-19andtheastonishing

deathtollscaredeveryoneinthecountry.Fatherneverreturnedhome,onlyoccasionallytalking

ontheWeChat,overwhichhetoldushowhewentfromdoortodoor,checkingeveryfamilyand

persuadingpeopletostayathome.Irealizedthatmyfatherwasworkingindangerousconditions

underincrediblygreatburden.Healwayslookedtiredbutdetermined.EverytimeItoldhimto

takecareofhimself,hewouldsmileandsay,"Don'tworry,son.Yourfatherisasstrongasabull.^^

Atthosemoments,tearswouldwellupinmyeyes,andallmycomplaintswouldgoawaybeforeI

couldsayanything.Thetalkwasbriefbutmeantalottome.

Ilearnedfromthemediathatthemedicalstaff,governmentofficials,andalmosteveryone

involvedwereworkinginthebattleagainsttheCOVID-19.Itwastheseguardianangels（守护天

使）who,despitethepossibilityofgettinginfectedthemselves,wereriskingtheirlifesothatthe

restofuscouldbesafe.Amongthemwasmyfather.He'sprotectingthepeople,meincluded.

Para1:Thencamebadnewsthatmyfatherwasillathospital.

Para2:Weekslater,myfathercamebackhomehealthy.

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写

的词数应为150左右。

Thedoctorssentmymotherhometodie.Asafifteen-yearsurvivorofbreastcancer,shehad

sufferedtwoheartattackswhenadvancedcancerwasfoundinherlung.Thedoctortoldmesadly,

"Shehasafewdays,maybeaweek.Herheartisweakandunstable."Momhadstruggledtoraise

threedaughterswhileholdingafull-timejob,yetworkedhardtomaintainawarmhomeforher

family.MyplanforMom'sfinaldayswassimple:shewouldlivewithlove,anddiewithgrace.

Itookmothertomyhome,smallbutcomfortable,whichwasaheaventofourcatsandadog.

Theanimalshadtherunofmyhouse.Weequippedthebedroomwithanelectrichospitalbedand

anoxygenmachine,whichfrightenedthecats.I'dmovedtheirfurnitureandthecatswere

annoyed.Thedog,ontheotherhand,animmaturedogwithbadhabits,wasexcitedbyallthe

changesinthehouse.Hejumpedup,barking.HeisOttowhowasnotafraidofthehospitalbed,

theoxygenmachineorthemedicalsmells.Norwasheafraidoftheweakwomanwhohadscolded

him.OttojumpedontothefootofMom'shospitalbed,andstayed.Withtheexceptionofeating

andusingthelitterbox,OttoneverleftMom'sroom.

DayspassedandMomstartedtorally."Notunusual,Iwastold,“arallyisoftenasignof

imminentdeath（回光返照）"Iwasheart-broken.ButOttowouldnotgiveherupsoeasily.Heused

herimprovedconditiontorepositionhimselffromthefootofherbedtoherside.Herthinfingers

foundhissoftcoat.Heleanedintoherbody,asifholdingtightthestringsofherwilltolive.

Thoughweak,shepettedthedogandwouldnotallowedmetotakehim.Daysturnedintoweeks

andMomcontinuedtofight.

Paragraph1

Once,afterthenurseshadgonefortheday,IheardthesoundofMom'svoicecomingfrom

herroom.

Paragraph2

Threeyearslater,MomtogetherwithOttoisstillhere,medicinesandnurseslonggone.

7.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Awomanwhohadastroke（中风）whileonaFaceTimovideocallwithhersister,saidthe

technologysavedherlife.EsmeeRussell,headoftheStrokeAssociation,said,"Astrokecan

happentoanyone,atanyage,atanytime.That'swhyit'ssoimportantthatpeopleknowhowto

actfast:itcouldsavealife."Strokeshappenwhenthebloodsupplytopartofthybrainiscutoff

byaclot（凝块）,ordamagedbybleedingthatcausesbraincellsintheaffectedareatodie.

OpokuaKwapong,wholivesaloneinNewYork,wasonacallwithhersister,Adumea

Sapong,inManchester,whenMrsSapongnoticedthathereldersister"didn'tlookright”.Andshe

alsonoticedhersister'svoicewasslurred（口齿不清）.MsKwapongsaidshehadnotrealisedhow

seriousthesituationwas.

The58-year-oldKwaponghadwokenfromanafternoonsleepwhenMrsSapongcalledher

onFaceTime.MsKwapongsaid“Mysisterlookedatmeandsaidshecouldseethatmyface

didn'tlookright.ShealsosaidthatIwasslurringmywords,butIthoughtshewasmakingafuss

（大惊小怪）andIdidn'tbelieveher.^^

MrsSapongsaidWhenIcalledKwapong,shesaidthatshednotbeenfeelingwellandhad

beenfeelingtiredandwasalsohavingsomedifficultywalking.Isaid,'Perhapsyouneedtotake

somemedicine/Shetriedtopickupaglassofwaterandwasn'tableto.ThenInoticedonthe

FaceTimevideocallthatherfacewasdrooping.Itoldhersheneededtohangupandimmediately

seeadoctor.ShethoughtIwasmakingafusssoIthencalledoneofmyothersisters,whoisa

doctor,andshecouldhearherspeakingandcouldalsotellthatherspeechwasslurred.Weboth

toldhertocallforhelpatonce.^^

注意：1.所叙写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

MsKuaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.

Paragraph2:

MsKwapongsaid:"Thereisnodoubtthattheinternetandtechnologysavedmylife.

8.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Mymotheralwaystoldmeitwasbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful."Ifyouaresmart,

finallyyouwillaffordtobebeautiftiL“AllIneededwerethebrains,andsomeday,Iwouldbea

reallybeautifullawyer.

MymotherworkedataTVstationandIwouldcomealongandwatchthemagicoffilming

TVshows.Butallthesame,Iwaslearning.

Whenmyfather^businessfailed,Iwasabletocontinuetoattendoneofthebest

bilingual（双语的）schoolsinMexicoCitythankstoscholarship.Scholarshipfollowedmeinto

middleschoolandhighschool.

However,duringmysenioryearinhighschoolmyfamilymovedtomydad'scountry,the

UnitedStates.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,IhadoptionaS可选择的）classes.SoIdecidedtotake

psychologyclass.WhileIfoundthepublicschoolsystemtobeajoke,Ididfindmypsychology

classattractive.Mymother,inherdreamsformylife,didnotseepsychologyasagoodchoice,

butIwaslikeher,strong-willedtothesubject.

Imarriedyoung,evenbeforeIhadadegreeundermybelt.Worstofall,Imarriedakidwho

wantedtobeposter（牧师）.MymotherlovedAndydearlybutshewouldaskhimoccasionally.

“Whenwillyouhavearealjob?,,IdidfinishmydegreeandIbecameasocialworker,butwhenI

hadmyfirstchildatage24,Iquitmyjob.Thenat26,anotherbabygirljoinedourfamily.

Unfortunately,thisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome（唐氏综合症）.

HowwouldIbeabletobreakthenewstomymother?”Itisbettertobesmartthantobe

beautifUL“Iknewwhat“smart"meantinthestatement,andIdoubtedifmywithanextra

chromosome（染色体）wouldmeetthoseexpectations.Mymomwascomingtothehospitalto

meethernewgraed-baby.Iwouldtellherthen.Ineededtimetogathermythoughts.Iwasafraid,

afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmart...orbeautiful.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头己为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para1:

Mymotheramvedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.

Para2:

Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.

9.阅读下面短文，根据所绐悄节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事.

Mydadwasthegentlest,mostlovingandcaringdadintheworld-untilwehadanargument.

Duringthosemoments,mywordssurelyneverreachedhis"openmind"becausehisearswere

closed.Therewasnopointtryingtoarguewithmydad.Healwayshadthelastword.Icould

neverwin.

Atonetime,whenmyfatherrefusedtounderstandthatIneededtheprivacyofaphonein

myroom,myfrustrationturnedtotears.Heendedour"discussion",leavingmesilently

defeatedandmiserable.Withthehopethathiseyeswouldbemoreopenthanhisears,Ibeganto

writeanotethatbeganwith"DearDaddy".Inamosttouchingtone,ItoldhimhowmuchI

respectedhisopinion,andhowmuchIhatedtotalkbacktohim.1stressedthatIcherishedour

relalionshipand,abovealbIlovedhimdeeply.ItwasonlyminutesbeforeIheardaknockat

mydoor.WhenIsawthelookonmyfather'sface,Iknewthatmynotehadmeltedhistemper

andtouchedhisheart.Thevictoryofwinningmydad'spermissionwassweet.

ThismorningIwokeupatatextmessagefromoneofmybestfriends,whichsaid"Who's

excitedforasnowday?”Myinitialreactionwaswhyonearthwewouldhaveasnowday.Itwas

notsupposedtosnowlastnight.Mysecondreactionwasthatthatwasnottrue.SoIcalledmydad

tomakesurewhetherwhatIheardwascorrect.Sureenoughitwas.Afterfindingthisnewsout,I

fellbackasleepalmostimmediately.MydadhadsaidtocallhimwhenIwokeup.Abouttwo

hourspassed,andIwokeup,callinghimasplanned.Noanswer.Ifiguredhewasjustoutfbr

business,soIleftamessage.Icalledhimmultipletimesonhiswork,house,andcellphones.

Still,noanswer.AroundnoonIgotworried.Heshouldhaveansweredsomethingbynow.

Thinkingofhissufferingastomachflutwoweeksago,IdecidedIwouldgotomakesurehewas

okay.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.

AfterIgotoverthere,Iwasworried.

Atonce,Icalledmymomandtoldherwhathadhappened.

10.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Mymotheralwaystoldmeitwasbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful."Ifyouaresmart,

finallyyouwillaffordtobebeautifUl."AllIneededwerethebrains,andsomeday,Iwouldbea

reallybeautifullawyer.

MymotherworkedataTVstationandIwouldcomealongandwatchthemagicoffilming

TVshows.Butallthesame,Iwaslearning.

WhenmyOther'sbusinessfailed,Iwasabletocontinuetoattendoneofthebest

bilingual（双语的）schoolsinMexicoCitythankstoscholarship.Scholarshipfollowedmeinto

middleschoolandhighschool.

However,duringmysenioryearinhighschoolmyfamilymovedtomydad'scountry,the

UnitedStates.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,IhadoptionaS可选择的）classes.SoIdecidedtotake

psychologyclass.WhileIfoundthepublicschoolsystemtobeajoke,Ididfindmypsychology

classattractive.Mymother,inherdreamsformylife,didnotseepsychologyasagoodchoice,

butIwaslikeher,strong-willedtothesubject.

Imarriedyoung,evenbeforeIhadadegreeundermybelt.Worstofall,Imarriedakidwho

wantedtobeposter（牧师）.MymotherlovedAndydearlybutshewouldaskhimoccasionally,

“Whenwillyouhavearealjob?,JIdidfinishmydegreeandIbecameasocialworker,butwhenI

hadmyfirstchildatage24,Iquitmyjob.Thenat26,anotherbabygirljoinedourfamily.

Unfortunately,thisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome（唐氏综合症）.

HowwouldIbeabletobreakthenewstomymother?”Itisbettertobesmartthantobe

beautiful.^^Iknewwhat"smart”meantinthestatement,andIdoubtedifmywithanextra

chromosome（染色体）wouldmeetthoseexpectations.Mymomwascomingtothehospitalto

meethernewgraed-baby.Iwouldtellherthen.Ineededtimetogathermythoughts.Iwasafraid,

afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmart...orbeautiful.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para1:

Mymotherarrivedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.

Para2:

Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.

2021年高考英语能力拓展之读后续写11

购物与健康

1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswere

limited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.

Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,

thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined（谢绝）.Butshekepturgingustohavealookat

last.

Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.Itwasourhome,smallandcharming,

overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderly

couple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,

thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouse

anddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadeanoffer-farbelowthe

askingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalso

muchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.

Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigher

price.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstill

wasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid（出价）.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.

Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.

注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Wewenttotheownershomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.

Paragraph2:

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,

【答案】

Paragrph1：

Wewenttotheowner'shomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.Theotherpotentialbuyercame

withconfidence.Theownersmiled,saying,"Tellmethereasonwhyyouneedthishouse.Theone

whoseanswersatisfiesmewilltakethepossessionofit.”"Formybusiness.,,Thebuyeranswered

withoutanyhesitation.Afterthinkingforawhile,Ireplied,UIcanfeelwarmthandloveofthe

marriageinthehouse,whichIhavebeenlongingfbr.”

Paragraph2：

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,“Iwanttosellmyhousetoyou!^^Asurge（大量，汹涌）of

shockhitme."Why?HeofferedahigherpricethanIcouldafford."Iasked,surprised."Iwantto

giveittothosewhocanfillitwithloveinsteadofmoney.,,Weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseof

warmth,deeplymoved.Irealizedthatasincereheartwasmoresignificantthanmoney.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇续写类书面表达，对考生的要求极高，首先是语篇构思能力，其次是运用语言的

能力。要求考生根据原文的脉络继续搭建故事的细节内容。这对夫妻非常喜欢这座房子，但

是他们囊怀羞涩根本付不起高昂的价格，但是他们对房子的喜爱会让他们最终得到这座心爱

的家。文章最终必然是一个出人意料的结尾。全文使用一般过去时，同时根据实际情况灵活

运用时态。

【详解】

第1步：审题。本文是一篇续写类书面表达，续写第一段中介绍他们最后一次出价并与竞争

对手陈述购房的理由。第二段是房屋主人对两家陈述的评价以及最终的决定。

第2步：组织要点.第一段：这对夫妻购房的原因在于喜爱这栋房子，让他们有家的感觉;

另外一对夫妻购房是想做生意。适当运用心里描写。第二段：房屋主人对两家的陈述进行评

价，并给出最终的决定：把房子卖给我们。此类文章必然有出人意料的结尾，

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行语篇构思，文章中出现的间接引语和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，

且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文章

里使用了较多的高级词汇，如takethepossessionof,longfor,appreciate等；尽量运用了丰

富的句式，如非谓语动词用法Theownersmiled,saying....；定语从句Tellmethereasonwhy

youneedthishouse；同时文章里还使用了一些串联成分,这些串联成分让各个要点更为紧密

地结合在一起。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。

2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopperandhavingagoodnoseforbargains.So

whenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale",Imarched

intothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfand

enjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofasale.

Allofasudden,there,atthebackofthestoresatacanoe（轻舟）exactlylikemyhusband's

dreamSupremoNumero-Uno,whosepicturehadbeenstuckonthebathroommirrorforyears.My

heartbeatwildly.Ipushedmywaythroughthecrowds,andnearlyfellintothecanoelookingfor

thepricetag.Thereitwas,withthemanufacturer^suggestedpriceat$6,750plustaxcrossedout

andahandwrittenTOCLEAR$750ASIS.Mustbeamistake.$6000off?Salesman.Ihadtotalk

toasalesman.Ispottedayoungfellowwitha"Hi.I'mMathew","Mathew.TellmeaboutthisEl

Supremocanoe.What'swrongwithit?Whyisitonly$750?^^

“Oh.There'snothingwrongwithit.It'sbrandnew.We'reclosingthestore.It?sonclearance

likeeverythingelse.Tilgocheck.^^AfewminuteslaterhecamebackandsaidJTmsorryma'am.

Someonemadeamistakeonthesaletag.Itshouldbe$4,750forthewholepackage.^^

Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes."Ohwell",Isaidsadly.<6Ofcourse,itwastoogoodtobetrue.

Thisisexactlylikemyhusband'sdreamboat.IguessIstartedtodreammyselfwhenIsawthat

pricetag.He'sgoingtobe62yearsoldFriday.Hadtoretireearlyforhishealth.It'sbeenhardon

justthepensionbutthestubbornoldfoolhasbeensaving$10everyweekforyearstobuyonejust

likethis.IpromiseIwon'tbuyanything,butit'sjustanoldman'ssillydream,youknow.Always

saidhewantedtofishinacanoeafterheretired,myvoiceloweredandIturnedandwalked

away.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fordelivery,ma'am?”

Paragraph2:

“Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpa'sandthecanoe

hadbeenorderedbyhim.

【答案】

IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fordelivery,ma'am?”"Yes.Yes.That'saboutallIhave,”"Wellthen,youjusthaveyourhusband

sittingatthefrontgateonFiidaymorningaround10o9clocksohecanbetherewhenmyDadand

Icometounloadhisnewcanoe.We'llevenputabowonitforhisbirthday.”Istartedtocry.My

oldhandshookasIwroteoutmycheque.

"Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpasandthecanoehad

beenorderedbyhim.Healwayspromisedtoretireoneday.Saidhewantedtospendtimerelaxing

andoutfishingin