【课件】读后续写The+Story+of+Atlanta课件-人教版（2019）必修第二册

1Readthewordsbeforeclass:Greek希腊的

princess公主prince王子

allow允许

marry结婚runagainst与...跑步比赛

pardon原谅

promise

允诺runpast超过pickup捡起

makeabargainwithsb.与某人讨价还价

2ContinuationWriting（四）3考察方式

满分25分。

提供一段350词左右的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。4材料特点

故事性强，主题有一定的背景，材料有趣味性，内容能延伸，能激发学生的想象力和续写冲动。阅读材料难度适当，易于理解和模仿。56如何写好续写中的4个关键句？3个衔接句1个主题句---Howtocontinuewritingastory阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The

Story

of

AtlantaAtlantawasaGreekprincess.ShewasverybeautifulandcouldrunfasterthananymaninGreece.ButshewasnotallowedtorunorwingloryforherselfintheOlympicGames.Shewassoangrythatshesaidtoherfatherthatshewouldnotmarryanyonewhocouldnotrunfasterthanher.Herfathersaidthatshemustmarry,soAtlantamadeabargainwithhim.Shesaidtohim,“Thesearemyrules.Whenamansayshewantstomarryme,Iwillrunagainsthim.Ifhecannotrunasfastasme,hewillbekilled.Noonewillbepardoned.”ManykingsandprinceswantedtomarryAtlanta,butwhentheyheardofherrulestheyknewitwashopeless.Somanyofthemsadlywenthome,butothersstayedtoruntherace.TherewasamancalledHippomeneswhowasamazedwhenheheardofAtlanta’srules.“Whyarethesemensofoolish?”hethought.“Whywilltheyletthemselvesbekilledbecausetheycannotrunasfastasthisprincess?”However,whenhesawAtlantacomeoutofherhousetorun,Hippomeneschangedhismind.“IwillmarryAtlanta—ordie!”hesaid.Theracestartedandalthoughthemenranveryfast,Atlantaranfaster.AsHippomeneswatched,hethought,“HowcanIrunasfastasAtlanta?”HewenttoasktheGreekGoddessofLoveforhelp.Shepromisedtohelphimandgavehimthreegoldenapples.Shesaid,“ThrowanappleinfrontofAtlantawhensheisrunningpast.Whenshestopstopickitup,youwillbeabletorunpastherandwin.”

注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式作答。Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.7解题思路？读---续---写AtlantaHippomenesGoddessofLove1.ReadforCharactersandtheplotWhathappenedtothem?theKing8读

SkimmingRead

thetextandtrytoanswerthefollowingquestions:(1)WhowasAtlanta?(2)WhatwereAtlanta’s

rules?(3)WhatwereHippomenes'attitudes(态度)towardstherace?(4)WhodidHippomenesaskforhelp?(5)WhatdidtheGreekGoddessofLoveadviseHippomenestodo?9(1)Who

wasAtlanta?AtlantawasabeautifulGreekprincess.(2)WhatwereAtlanta’s

rules?Whenamansayshewantsto_______her,shewillrun_________him.Ifhecannotrun____fast____her,hewillbe______.Noonewillbe__________.marryagainstasaskilledpardoned10(3)WhatwereHippomenes'attitudes(态度)towardstherace?Whyarethesemenso

foolish?Whywilltheyletthemselvesbekilled

becausetheycannotrunasfastasthisprincess?IwillmarryAtlanta---ordie!AtfirstAfterhesawAtlanta11AncientGreekprincessWealthy,pretty，goodatrunning…Shewasbeautiful;herbeautymadeThewholeworlddim.她是如此美丽，她的美使整个世界黯然失色。12(4)Who

didHippomenesaskforhelp?(5)WhatdidtheGreekGoddessofLove

advise

Hippomenestodo?Throwan______infrontofAtlantawhensheisrunning______.Whenshestopsto______itup,hewillbeabletorunpastherandwin.applepastpickGoddessofLove132.ReadfortheelementsSetting(time&place)CharactersMaincharacters:Othercharacters:Plot(Story)ConflictClimaxEndingAtlanta,

Hippomenestheking,GoddessofloveAncientGreecemarryAtlantabekilled14读Hippomeneswantedto____________.Heaskedforhelp

_______________________.runfaster,or_______;marryheror___diefromtheGreekGoddessofLove3.PredictthedevelopmentHippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheKing.?15续Hesaid,“___wantto______Atlanta.”__________werereadyto___.ImarryBothofthemrunWhat’stheendofthestory?________stoppedto____________onebyone.16续Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.__________threwthegolden_____oneafteranotherinfrontof______.gotmarriedPairdisscussion:Whatmayhappenlater?HippomenesapplesAtlantaAtlantapickthemup第一步：写好三个_______第1句：第一段________的衔接句。第2句：第一段______（须与第二段首句衔接）。第3句：第二段________的衔接句。◆策略：Rule1:

让提示句的____继续成为续写的第一句的___.Rule2:

让提示句的某个关键词成为一个新的____。Rule3：让续写1尾句的____和续写2首句____一致，使得段落连贯一致。第二步：写好一个______。即第二段的尾句，即文尾句.（能体现故事圆满结局，或故事给我们的启示）重难点衔接句首句后尾句首句后主语主语主语17主语主语主题句写4个关键句18七三四法则一、七个“不”1、不增加人物2、不增加旁支情节3、不用过多对话4、不用负能量结局5、不在文末设置悬念6、不偏离原文主题7、不违背逻辑常理二、三个原则1、原文一致原则2、正能量原则3、曲折性原则三、四个步骤1、读懂大意，理清文章脉络2、细度句首，构思框架3、增加细节，开始写作4、修改润色，整齐誊写Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.He

said,“I

want

to

marry

Atlanta.”HippomenesandAtlantawerereadytorun.Hippomenes

threw

the

golden

apples

one

after

another

in

front

of

her.第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）As

a

result,

Atlanta

married

him

and

they

lived

happily

ever

after.194.Writethelist

续写情节内容大纲Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.Whentheracebegan,Atlantaranpasthim.He

said,“I

want

to

marry

Atlanta.”HippomenesandAtlantawerereadytorun.Hippomenes

threw

the

golden

apples

one

after

another

in

front

of

her.As

a

result,

Atlanta

married

him

and

they

lived

happily

ever

after.5.Expandtheplot拓展情节theking或Atlanta听后的反应Atlanta看到金苹果的反应和比赛结果ThekingadvisedhimtogiveupandAtlantaalsosaid,“theraceiscancelledtoday.”

Atlantastoppedtopickeduptheapples,andHippomenes

ranpastherandwontherace.206.PolishtheWriting

(1)续写词数应为150左右;(2)请按如下格式作答。Hippomenestooktheapplesandwenttotheking.___________________________________________________________________