高三第三次联考英语+应用文+拾瓶子老人捐钱+讲义

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一-篇完整的短文。Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwithtrashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled(

拖着脚走路)along.Occasionally,shewouldpauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonherway.几个星期以来，我注意到一位老妇人推着装满垃圾袋的购物车从我们家走过。当她拖着脚走路时，我忍不住为她感到难过拖着脚走路)。偶尔，她会停下来，从路边拿起一个罐子。她会小心地把它放进其中一个袋子里，然后继续前行。Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wastherenoonetolookafterher?我想知道是什么情况使她走到了人生的这一步。她没有家人吗？没有人照顾她吗？Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.“Madam,”Isaid.“CanIaskyousomething?"一天晚上，我再也受不了了。当她走过时，我走到街上拦住了她。“夫人，”我说。“我能问你点什么吗？”Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshewasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedtoaskhermyquestions,butIinsisted.她转过身来看着我，美丽的黑眼睛在她布满皱纹的脸上闪闪发光。那时我就知道她不是一个普通的无家可归的人。她有尊严，是的，甚至有快乐。突然，我不好意思问她我的问题，但我坚持了下来。“I'veseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,”Iexplained.“Doyousellthemtobuygroceries?”“No,”shesaidwithasmile.“Idothistohelpthechildren.”“我已经看到你几个星期在捡罐头了，”我解释道。“你卖它们是为了买杂货吗？”“不，”她笑着说。“我这样做是为了帮助孩子们。”Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.“Ihadcancer--twice--andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileIwasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andIpickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.”我看起来一定很困惑，因为她接着解释。“我患了癌症——两次——两次我都去了另一个城镇的大医院。他们治好了我。但当我在那里的时候，我遇到了孩子们，我从未忘记他们。我没有钱，但我还能走路，我拿起这些罐子卖给医院。”Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend’spickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywherethehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.她告诉我，她每周花很多时间收集罐头；至少有两家企业为她保存罐头。当她有足够的东西时，她把它们都装进朋友的皮卡车，然后他们两个把它们带到医院所在的城市。在那里他们被套现了。注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.文本分析：故事大意--我注意到一个老太太经常捡罐子。有一次我忍不住好奇，上前去问她捡这些罐子干嘛用。她告诉我，她曾两次患癌，有好心企业为她保存罐头瓶，加上搜集到的，攒到一定数目她就和朋友拿到为她治病的医院那里，换取现金，帮助孩子们，回馈社会。续写情节发展：-她说我知道你的感受。老奶奶解释说，我知道这不算多，但每一点点都很重要。当我看到孩子们微笑时，所有的努力都是值得的。听到这里，我把手伸进钱包，掏出一些钞票。第二段--“但我想让你接受，”我告诉她。她笑了笑，最后拿走了我拿出的纸币。然后她给了我一个拥抱。在那一刻，我意识到并不是所有的天使都有光明和翅膀。官方范文，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,”shesaid.“Iknowit'snotmuch,buteverylittlebitcounts.AndwhenIseethechildrensmile,itmakesallthehardworkworthit.I'vebeenblessedinmylife.Iwanttodosomething,andthisissomethingIcando.Apartfromthat,thereisnothingIcandotoensurepersonslikemeareblessed.Itdoesn'tcostmemuch-onlythecostofthegas--andithelpsthechildren.”Hearingthis,Ireachedintomypurseandpulledsomebillsout.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

“ButIwantyoutotakeit,”Itoldher.“Useitforgasorwhateveryouwant.”ShesmiledandfinallytookthebillsIheldout.Shethengavemeahug.Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stoppingoccasionallytopickuponeortwo.Atthecorner,sheturned,smiled,wavedandwasgone.AndIrealizedatthatmomentthatnotallangelshavelightandwings.Somehavegrocerycarts.参考范文一，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“IwasclosetodeathtwicebutIhadanarrowescapeeverytime.Thosekids,theyaresoyoungandpathetic.Theworldisclosingtothemandtheirfutureislimited.Ijustwanttodosomethingtomakethemalittlebetter,”sheexplained,hervoicetremblingwithcompassionandhereyesshiningwithlove.Myheartachedforthosekidswhosufferedandatthesametime,asurgeofrespectandadmirationforthisladywelledupinme.Ialsowantedtodomybittohelpthem,soIsuggestedcarefully,“canIgiveyousomemoneysothatyoucanspentonthem?”

“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

“Ihavemetalotofkindpeoplealongtheway,whohelpsthiswayorthatway.Ijustwanttosharethestory.Ifyouwanttohelp,youcandonatetothemdirectly.”Shesmilesinattemptationtocomfortme.Whenshesaidgoodbyeandshuffledagainalongthemoonlight-litstreet,Ijustfeltthatherlimpingfigure,herweatherface,aswellashercreakingcartonlyaddedtohercharmanddignity.Despiteallthesufferingandhardshipsshehadgonethrough,shesawthepaininothersandhadacompassionateloveforpeople.Wecouldn’tjudgeabookbyitscoverandshewasanoblewomanwithadignifiedsoul.

参考范文二，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

Theelderlywoman,whosenamewasMrs.Jenkins,sharedherstories.Somelittlechildren,whoshehadmetduringherownbattleswithcancer,criedbitterlywiththetreatmentbutalsofoughtstrongly.

Somerecoveredwhilesomeleftforever.Witnessingtheirresilienceandfateinspiredhertomakeadifferenceintheirlives.Despiteherownfinancialstruggles,

shewasincrediblyjoyfulwhenshehandedoverthemoneyfromtherecycledcans.Theactofcollectingcanswasmorethanjustawaytoraisefunds;itwasameaningfulwaytogivebackandbringaglimmerofhappinesstothechildrenundergoingtreatment.Hereyessparkledwithloveandkindnessasshespoke,leavingmeinaweandpropellingmetoofferhersomemoney.

“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

Mrs.Jenkinswasadamantaboutn