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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OurGarfieldbecameamostlyindoorcat.Heusedtowanderoutsidebutwediscoveredhehadaterriblesenseofdirection,sonowhehastostayinside.Hedoesnotenjoybeingontheinsidelookingout,butit’ssaferforhimsothat’showithastobe.WhenGarfieldisn’tsleeping,he’seithersittingonawindowsill(窗台)orsittingwithhiswetnosepressedagainstourglassdooroverlookingthedeck(木质平台),likeaprisonerbehind
bars.Asheages,heearnsbackhisoutsiderightsanhourperdaybecauseheshowsusthathe
willstayclosetothebackdeck.Whenwelethimoutlastweek,athunderstormaroseoutofnowhere.BythetimeweheardthecrackoflightningandrememberedGarfieldwasoutside,weopenedthedoortoseenothingbutstrongwindandheavyrain.MydaughterJanetteputonherrubberbootsandraincoattocheckaroundthehouse,butGarfieldwasnowheretobefound.Thethunderstormobviouslyhadscaredhimintoaruninthewrongdirection.Whoknewwherehewouldendup?Ittookmeforevertofallasleepthatnight.Iprayed(祈祷)someonewouldprotecthimandhelphimfindhiswayhome.AsIcontinuedpraying,Irealizedthatinmydailyprayersformyfamily,IrarelyincludedGarfield.Nowthathewasgone,maybeforever,Irealizedwhatanimportantpartofourfamilyhewas.Iprayedforhissafereturn.
MyhusbandPeterwasthefirstoneupat6:00a.m.Hecheckedthedoorstep,butnoGarfieldwasinsight.IsawmyneighborHeiditakingherdogoutforawalk,andIaskedhertopleasekeephereyesopenforourcat.Janetteandherthreebrothersallwalkedaroundthehousethatdaylookingliketheyhadlosttheirbestfriend.PeterdecidedtolookforGarfieldaroundtheneighborhood.注意:1.
续写词数应为150左右;2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
PeterandIdrovearoundtosearchtheneighborhood.Iwassayingtomyself
“Neversaynever”whenIheardsomethingscratchingthedoorat10:00p.m.Analysisoftestquestions:Theselectionofmaterialsforthefinalexamofthefirstyearofhighschoolisdifficult,andthecontentinvolvestheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenpeopleandpets.Althoughstudentscanroughlyunderstandthestoryandanalyzethedirectionofthecontinuation,duetothedifficultyoftheprevioustestquestions,thereisnotenoughspaceforseriousthinkingandreasonableimaginationforthisquestion.Itisnoteasyforstudentstopleteanarticlewithdetailedcontent,orderlyconnection,beautifullanguage,andbeautifulfontinashortperiodoftime.Thedifficultyofthetextisalsoreflectedinthefollowingaspects:1.AlthoughthemaincontentofthestoryisaboutthewholefamilysearchingforthelostGarfieldcat,duetotheinvolvementofmanycharacters,itbringscertaindifficultiestotheintegrationofthecharactersinthesequel;2.ThefirsttwoparagraphshavelaidtoomuchgroundworkforGarfield'spoorsenseofdirectionandinabilitytogoout,leavingstudentsfeelingconfusedandunsureofhowtoconnectwiththecontinuationsection;Designtheplotofthecontinuationwriting:Tocontinuewritingthefirstparagraph,itisnecessarytowriteabouthowthewholefamilyfailedtofindthecat,andtohaverichimaginationabouttheprocessofsearchingandtheanxiousandlostpsychologyofthewholefamily;Continuingthesecondparagraphmainlydepictstheexcitementandexcitementofthewholefamilyafterthecatreturns,butthereisnotmuchroomforsublimationattheendofthestory,makingitdifficulttowriteawonderfulending.Leavestudentswithspacetoimprovetheendingofthestoryandunleashtheirpotential.Mainideaofthearticle:ThetextmainlydepictsthestoryofthewholefamilysearchingforthelostGarfieldcatcausedbylightning,depictingtheharmoniouscoexistenceandwarmaffectionbetweenhumansandanimals.Paragraphsmeaning:ThefirstparagraphdescribesthatGarfieldhasapoorsenseofdirection,andforsafetyreasons,hisfamilyhasnochoicebuttolethimstayindoors.ThesecondparagraphdescribesGarfield'sdailylife,whichismonotonousandboring,butasheages,hisfamilyallowshimtogooutforanhoureveryday.ThethirdparagraphdescribesGarfield'scatgoingoutandencounteringathunderstorm.Sheisfrightenedandrunsaway,butherdaughter'ssearchisunsuccessful.ThefourthparagraghdescribesthatafterlosingtheGarfieldcat,theauthorblameshimselffornotsleepingandconstantlypraysforthecat.Thefifthgenerationdescribesthewholefamilysearchingforthelostcatinvariouswayswithanxiousemotions.Continuationanalysis:Whenstudentsfinishreadingthearticle,theyneedtoclarifyseveralkeypoints:①Familymembersreallylikethiscat②Mostofthetime,thecatstaysathome,butthereisonehouroftimetorelaxaroundthehouseeveryday③Familymembersfeelanxiousandselfblamewhentheyfailtofindthecat④Familymemberstryeverymeanstofindthecat.第一段续写要点:ContinuingtowritetheopeningsentenceofthefirstparagraphasPeterandIdroparoundtosearchtheneighborhood,binedwiththelastsentenceofthelastparagraphofthetext,PeterdecidedtolookforGarfieldaroundtheneighborhood.ItcanbeseenthatthemaincontentofthiscontinuationisthatPeterandIaredoingeverythingpossibletofindthecat.Ofcourse,therearemanywaystosearch:askingpassersby,postingcatsearchsigns,searchingforpetshelters,parks,andsoon.Intheprocessofcontinuingthisparagraph,itispossibletoaddpsychologicaldescriptionsandactiondescriptionsoffamilymemberseagerlyseekingandfeelinghopelessanddisappointed,toenrichthecontentoftheparagraph.第二段续写要点:Accordingtotheopeningsentenceofthesecondparagraph,Iwassayingtomyself"Neversaynever"whenIheardsomethingscratchingthedoorat10:00p.m.,itcanbeinferredthatthecathasreturned.Thereisanewwordscratchhere,whichmeansthecatscratchesthedoor,implyingthatthecatcamebackalone.Therefore,thedescriptionofsomeonebringingthecatbackinthisparagraphisoutofcontext.Thecontinuationofthisparagraphshouldrevolvearoundtheauthorandtheirfamily'spleasantlysurprisedandexcitedmoodafterseeingthecatreturn,aswellasthecat'scurrentstate.Becausethetextdoesnotinvolvetheconventionalsublimationendingofhelpingothersandpublicwelfare,theconcludingpartofthisparagraphcanadopta"headtotailecho"approach,focusingonthefirstparagraph"OurGarfieldbecauseamostindoorcat",andretellingthatthecatwillhavemoretimetostayindoorsthereafter.Inaddition,theauthorcanalsoaddGarfieldtothelistofprayers,prayingforthesafetyandjoyofthecat,andincreasingthecontinuitybetweenthecontinuationparagraphsandtheoriginaltext.
下水文:
PeterandIdrovearoundtosearchtheneighborhood.
Webedeveryareawherecatscouldpossiblyappear,butinvain.Weaskedeverystrangerwecameacrossforourcat’sclues,butonly
“sorry”and
“shrug”werereceivedeventually.Wehuntednonstopalthoughthechancesoffindingthecatseemedtobeslimmerandourpatiencewasrunningout.Withtimeflying,nightfellandwehadtoreturnhome.Havingknownwehadnogoodluck,mydaughter
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