Unit1WheredidyougoonvacationSectionBWriting课件人教版八年级英语上册VIP

Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?SectionBWritingPresentation1.Learntoanalyzethemodelarticle.2.Writeatraveldiary.3.Learnthestructuresofwriting.4.Learntoworkingroupandgiveanevaluationafterwriting.5.Enjoythefunofwriting.LearningaimsThefirstdayofJane'stripRevisionWhoWeathermyfamilybeachWheresunnyandhotFoodInthemorningWhatFeelingsparaglidingGeorgetownrodebicyclesIntheafternoonsawWhereHowMalaysianyellownoodlesbuildings;thehousesofChinesetradersexciting,delicious,enjoyableRevisionTheseconddayofJane'stripWhoWheremyfatherandIrainingWeatherPenangHillHowFeelingstakethetrainclimbingFoodWhatonebowlofriceandsomefishterrible,sohungryWhatadifferenceadaymakes!TuesdayMondayDidJanehavethesamefeeling?TheywereallthefeelingsthatJanecouldn’tforget.Soshewrote2diariestokeeptheminmemory.OurHometown

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Monday,August5thDuringmysummervacation,IwenttoBaiyanglake（白洋淀）withmysister.Theweatherwassunnyandcool,andwehadagoodtime.First，wewentforawalkalongthelake.Theskywasbrightblue.Itisfullofbulrushandlotus.Thebeautifulsightmademehappyandrelaxed.Wetookmanyphotos.Thenwehadlunchinalocal（当地的）restaurant.Weatedonkeyburger（驴肉火烧）.Itwasreallydelicious.Next,Itriedgoingboating.Itwassoexciting.Intheevening,wehadaparty.Wesanganddancedtogether.Whatawonderfulday！AlthoughIfeltverytired,Iwashappy.IhopetogotoBaiyanglakeagain.ReadingFillintheblanks.Who_My______andI.when____________________whereWewentto______________foravacation.whatWewentfor_______and_________________.We

visited______________.weate

__________________________forlunch.Itried___________.Intheevening,wehadaparty.We______and_______.HowIfelt__________but__________.Ihopeto___________________________.sisterBaiyanglakewalkhappytookmanyphotos.tiredgotoBaiyanglakeagainMonday,August5thalocalfamilyDonkeyburgergoingboatingsangdanced三步五要素Step1.注意日记的整体格式。Howtokeep

atraveldiary?？Pre-writing:Haveastructure(结构）日期的位置：日期的英文格式：

首行右侧或左侧1.星期+月+日2.星期+日+月

Monday,August5thDuringmysummervacation,IwenttoBaiyanglake（白洋淀）withmysister.Theweatherwassunnyandcool,andwehadagoodtime.First，wewentforawalkalongthelake.Theskywasbrightblue.Itisfullofbulrushandlotus.Thebeautifulsightmademehappyandrelaxed.Wetookmanyphotos.Thenwehadlunchinalocal（当地的）restaurant.Weatedonkeyburger（驴肉火烧）.Itwasreallydelicious.Next,Itriedgoingboating.Itwassoexciting.Intheevening,wehadaparty.Wesanganddancedtogether.Whatawonderfulday！AlthoughIfeltverytired,Iwashappy.IhopetogotoBaiyanglakeagain.Step2.注意人称和时态。人称：一般过去时第一人称时态：注意：在表达自己的思想感情时，如Ithink…,Ilikethistrip,Iloveit,时态为一般现在时。

Monday,August5thDuringmysummervacation,IwenttoBaiyanglake（白洋淀）withmysister.Theweatherwassunnyandcool,andwehadagoodtime.First，wewentforawalkalongthelake.Theskywasbrightblue.Itisfullofbulrushandlotus.Thebeautifulsightmademehappyandrelaxed.Wetookmanyphotos.Thenwehadlunchinalocal（当地的）restaurant.Weatedonkeyburger（驴肉火烧）.Itwasreallydelicious.Next,Itriedgoingboating.Itwassoexciting.Intheevening,wehadaparty.Wesanganddancedtogether.Whatawonderfulday！AlthoughIfeltverytired,Iwashappy.IhopetogotoBaiyanglakeagain.Step3.描述清楚当天所发生的事情，要用到五要素。人物地点时间活动感受Part1Part2Part3beginningbodyendingWho_My______andI.whenwhereWewentto____________foravacation.whatWewentfor_______and_______We

visited___________________.weate

__________________________forlunch.Itried_________.Intheevening，wehadaparty.We______________and____________.HowIfelt__________but__________.Ihopeto_________________.sisterMonday,August5th,2023Baiyanglakewalktookmanyphotos.alocalrestursantDongkeyburgergoingboatingsangdancedtiredhappygotoBaiyanglakeagainPresentationLookatthepictures.Doyouknowtheseplaces?thePalaceMuseumtheGreatWallTian’anmenSquareNationalStadiumtheSummerPalaceaBeijinghutongtheoldSummerPalaceTheTempleofHeavenWritingTaskCompletethediaryaboutmytriptooneoftheseplaces.Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtohelpyou.

Wednesday,_______20thTodaytheweatherwas____________.Iwentto______________.Itwas_____________.We_________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause______________________________________.Fordinnerwehad____________________.Itwas_____________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally____.hotandsunnyBeijingducktakesomephotosbuysomethingspecialAugustlearnsomethingimportanttireddeliciousbeautifulinterestingWritingTaskAugusthotandsunnyaBeijinghutonginterestingtooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredbeginning?body?ending?

Imagineyouhadatriptooneoftheseplaces.WriteadiaryaboutthevacationTimeweatherplaceactivitiesFeelings？myvacationTask:Discussion

小组讨论，选定要写的内容。WritingTaskWhat’sthetype（类型）ofthepassagesinthisunit?wherewhowhatwhenelements(要素)narrativewritings(记叙文)traveldiary人称：第一人称时态：一般过去时howTips:Correctwritingformat(正确的书写格式）Thesimplepasttense（一般过去时）Clearstructure(清晰的结构）While-writing评价标准及分值得分Format/日记格式（2分）Tense/时态（2分）Content/内容要求：查看要求描述的信息是否完整。Who（1分）When（1分）Where（1分）What（3分）How(feeling)（2分）Writing/书写（2分）Goodwords/phases/sentences好词，短语结构，句式波浪线画出（1分）Evaluation(评价)Atraveldiarybeginningbodyending（总体概述）（活动描述）（