高考英语一轮复习读后续写精讲alife-savinggoose课件

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5verbphrasesormore）细节：时间、感受、表情、动作、思绪、对话、独白、环境...过渡：however,therefore,what’smore,unfortunately,suddenly…丰富的句子结构：with复合结构；非谓语动词“v-ing/v-ed/todo”作状语；三大从句；it形式主语/宾语；虚拟语气；倒装结构…无拼写错误；词汇、句型的升级；情感连贯，情节合理，符合逻辑，衔接自然，与原文融洽度高优秀写作：logical(符合逻辑)+vivid（生动）+coherent（连贯）+correct（正确）+reasonable(合理）In

late

December,

the

cow

path

near

our

house

in

Tennessee

was

still

covered

with

leaves,

but

I

knew

snow

would

be

falling

soon

enough.

My

younger

brother,

Buddy

Earl,

and

I

were

on

an

important

mission:

Go

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

place

and

get

a

goose

（鹅）.

The

hiking

over

Little

Mountain

and

getting

there

would

be

worth

it.

Uncle

Tommie

raised

the

best

geese

around,

and

he’d

offered

to

give

us

one

for

Christmas

dinner.

Uncle

Tommie

met

us

at

the

door.

“I’m

not

rushing

you

boys,”

he

said,

“but

as

light

snow

started,

you’d

better

get

the

goose

and

head

home.”

It

didn’t

take

me

longto

pick

up

a

goose

from

his

yard.

Buddy

and

I

said

a

quick

thank

you

and

goodbye.

The

snow

came

down

harder,

wind

blowing

every

way.

“I’m

as

cold

as

ice.

How

about

you?”

asked

Buddy.

I

tapped

the

goose’s

head.

“I

wish

we

had

feathers

to

keep

us

warm

like

you,”

I

said.

“Or

heavier

coats.”

“Doug,

I’m

freezing,”

Buddy

said.

I

could

hardly

hear

him

over

the

wind

and

my

own

chattering

teeth.

“I

think

we

should

go

back.”

The

idea

was

attractive,

but

we

were

closer

to

home

than

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

house.

We

had

to

push

on.

I

held

the

goose

closer

to

my

chest.

The

bird

was

the

only

warm

thing

about

me.

I

stepped

in

front

of

my

brother.

“Buddy,

open

your

coat!”

“Are

you

crazy?”

he

asked.

“I’ll

lose

the

little

warmth

I

have.”

When

he

saw

I

was

serious,

he

slowly

unzipped

（拉开……的拉链）

his

coat

and

opened

it.

I

placed

the

warm

goose

inside

his

coat

and

zipped

it

back

up.

“Make

sure

you

keep

the

goose’s

head

out

so

it

can

breathe.”

Buddy

sighed

happily.

My

plan

was

working.Writing注意：

150

左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”__________________________________________Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose._________________________________In

late

December,

the

cow

path

near

our

house

in

Tennessee

was

still

covered

with

leaves,

but

I

knew

snow

would

be

falling

soon

enough.

My

younger

brother,

Buddy

Earl,

and

I

were

on

an

important

mission:

Go

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

place

and

get

a

goose

（鹅）.

The

hiking

over

Little

Mountain

and

getting

there

would

be

worth

it.

Uncle

Tommie

raised

the

best

geese

around,

and

he’d

offered

to

give

us

one

for

Christmas

dinner.

Uncle

Tommie

met

us

at

the

door.

“I’m

not

rushing

you

boys,”

he

said,

“but

as

light

snow

started,

you’d

better

get

the

goose

and

head

home.”

It

didn’t

take

me

longto

pick

up

a

goose

from

his

yard.

Buddy

and

I

said

a

quick

thank

you

and

goodbye.

The

snow

came

down

harder,

wind

blowing

every

way.

“I’m

as

cold

as

ice.

How

about

you?”

asked

Buddy.

I

tapped

the

goose’s

head.

“I

wish

we

had

feathers

to

keep

us

warm

like

you,”

I

said.

“Or

heavier

coats.”

“Doug,

I’m

freezing,”

Buddy

said.

I

could

hardly

hear

him

over

the

wind

and

my

own

chattering

teeth.

“I

think

we

should

go

back.”

The

idea

was

attractive,

but

we

were

closer

to

home

than

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

house.

We

had

to

push

on.

I

held

the

goose

closer

to

my

chest.

The

bird

was

the

only

warm

thing

about

me.

I

stepped

in

front

of

my

brother.

“Buddy,

open

your

coat!”

“Are

you

crazy?”

he

asked.

“I’ll

lose

the

little

warmth

I

have.”

When

he

saw

I

was

serious,

he

slowly

unzipped

（拉开……的拉链）

his

coat

and

opened

it.

I

placed

the

warm

goose

inside

his

coat

and

zipped

it

back

up.

“Make

sure

you

keep

the

goose’s

head

out

so

it

can

breathe.”

Buddy

sighed

happily.

My

plan

was

working.Step1Who:_______________________________

When:________________Where:_______________What:________________________________How:__________________________________Myyoungerbrother

Buddy

EarlandIIn

late

DecemberOnthewayhomeEncounteredsnowfallandfeltfreezingcoldThebrothersreliedonagooseforwarmthelementsReadingIn

late

December,

the

cow

path

near

our

house

in

Tennessee

was

still

covered

with

leaves,

but

I

knew

snow

would

be

falling

soon

enough.

My

younger

brother,

Buddy

Earl,

and

I

were

on

an

important

mission:

Go

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

place

and

get

a

goose

（鹅）.

The

hiking

over

Little

Mountain

and

getting

there

would

be

worth

it.

Uncle

Tommie

raised

the

best

geese

around,

and

he’d

offered

to

give

us

one

for

Christmas

dinner.

Uncle

Tommie

met

us

at

the

door.

“I’m

not

rushing

you

boys,”

he

said,

“but

as

light

snow

started,

you’d

better

get

the

goose

and

head

home.”

It

didn’t

take

me

longto

pick

up

a

goose

from

his

yard.

Buddy

and

I

said

a

quick

thank

you

and

goodbye.

The

snow

came

down

harder,

wind

blowing

every

way.

“I’m

as

cold

as

ice.

How

about

you?”

asked

Buddy.

I

tapped

the

goose’s

head.

“I

wish

we

had

feathers

to

keep

us

warm

like

you,”

I

said.

“Or

heavier

coats.”

“Doug,

I’m

freezing,”

Buddy

said.

I

could

hardly

hear

him

over

the

wind

and

my

own

chattering

teeth.

“I

think

we

should

go

back.”

The

idea

was

attractive,

but

we

were

closer

to

home

than

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

house.

We

had

to

push

on.

I

held

the

goose

closer

to

my

chest.

The

bird

was

the

only

warm

thing

about

me.

I

stepped

in

front

of

my

brother.

“Buddy,

open

your

coat!”

“Are

you

crazy?”

he

asked.

“I’ll

lose

the

little

warmth

I

have.”

When

he

saw

I

was

serious,

he

slowly

unzipped

（拉开…的拉链）

his

coat

and

opened

it.

I

placed

the

warm

goose

inside

his

coat

and

zipped

it

back

up.

“Make

sure

you

keep

the

goose’s

head

out

so

it

can

breathe.”

Buddy

sighed

happily.

My

plan

was

working.Step2PredictingParagraph1:

“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”Paragraph2:Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose.

1.HowdidDougkeepwarm?2.WhyDougletBuddyopenhiscoat?3.What’stheresult?Byholdingthegoose.PlacethewarmgooseinsidehiscoatReturnedhomesafeandsoundQuestionsIn

late

December,

the

cow

path

near

our

house

in

Tennessee

was

still

covered

with

leaves,

but

I

knew

snow

would

be

falling

soon

enough.

My

younger

brother,

Buddy

Earl,

and

I

were

on

an

important

mission:

Go

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

place

and

get

a

goose

（鹅）.

The

hiking

over

Little

Mountain

and

getting

there

would

be

worth

it.

Uncle

Tommie

raised

the

best

geese

around,

and

he’d

offered

to

give

us

one

for

Christmas

dinner.

Uncle

Tommie

met

us

at

the

door.

“I’m

not

rushing

you

boys,”

he

said,

“but

as

light

snow

started,

you’d

better

get

the

goose

and

head

home.”

It

didn’t

take

me

longto

pick

up

a

goose

from

his

yard.

Buddy

and

I

said

a

quick

thank

you

and

goodbye.

The

snow

came

down

harder,

wind

blowing

every

way.

“I’m

as

cold

as

ice.

How

about

you?”

asked

Buddy.

I

tapped

the

goose’s

head.

“I

wish

we

had

feathers

to

keep

us

warm

like

you,”

I

said.

“Or

heavier

coats.”

“Doug,

I’m

freezing,”

Buddy

said.

I

could

hardly

hear

him

over

the

wind

and

my

own

chattering

teeth.

“I

think

we

should

go

back.”

The

idea

was

attractive,

but

we

were

closer

to

home

than

to

Uncle

Tommie’s

house.

We

had

to

push

on.

I

held

the

goose

closer

to

my

chest.

The

bird

was

the

only

warm

thing

about

me.

I

stepped

in

front

of

my

brother.

“Buddy,

open

your

coat!”

“Are

you

crazy?”

he

asked.

“I’ll

lose

the

little

warmth

I

have.”

When

he

saw

I

was

serious,

he

slowly

unzipped

（拉开……的拉链）

his

coat

and

opened

it.

I

placed

the

warm

goose

inside

his

coat

and

zipped

it

back

up.

“Make

sure

you

keep

the

goose’s

head

out

so

it

can

breathe.”

Buddy

sighed

happily.

My

plan

was

working.注意：

150

左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”__________________________________________Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose._________________________________PredictingStep2TheStorylineofparagraph1:Thetwobrotherstookturnstoholdthegoosetokeepwarmandreturnedhomesafely.handedthegoosetomeIfeltwarmpassedthegoosebackandforthreturnedhomesafeandsoundtogethertelltheexperiencetomyparentsfightedagainstfreezingcoldjointlyStep2PredictingParagraph2:Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose.

Whydidtheirparentshesitateaboutwhattodowiththegoose?Howdidtheysolvetheproblem?What’stheirdecision?QuestionsHowdidthebrothersfeelaftersolvingtheproblem?Didn’tknowhowtodealwiththegoosewhichsavedtheirsonsTheyhadashorttalkaboutwhethertokillthegooseforChristmasdinner.TheydecidednottokillthegoosefordinnerandhadaChristmasdinnerwithoutgoose.Theyweresatisfiedwiththeresultandfelthappy.Step2PredictingParagraph2:Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose.

Thestorylineofparagraph2theparentsaskedaquestionthebrothers’ideasthedecision

thebrothers’feelingthegoose’sideaTheparentsdidn’tknowhowtodealwiththegoosewhichsavedtheirsons,sothefamilyhadashorttalkaboutwhethertokillthegooseforChristmasdinner.Finally,theydecidedtohaveaChristmasdinnerwithoutgoose.Thebrothersweresatisfiedwiththeresultandfelthappy.WhatshouldwehaveforChristmasdinner？Thegoosesavedusandcouldn’tbekilledThegooseseemstobeprayingnottobekilled.tohaveadinnerwithoutgoose

felthappywiththeirparentsdecisionWriting:UsingvividlanguageandmoredetailsStep31.Buddyquickly/rapidlypassedthegoosetomeBuddyputthegooseintomycoatswiftly.2.AssoonasIheldthegoose,afloodofwarmthsweptoverme.3.Thesoftgoosefeatherspressedagainstmychest,offeringmemuchwarmth.handedthegoosetomefeltwarmpassedthegoosebackandforthtofightagainstfreezingcoldjointly4.Holdingthisbiggooseisjustlikeholdingastove.5.Wetookturnstoholdthegoosetokeepwarmallthewayhome.6.Wepassedthegoosebackandforthseveraltimesallthewayhome,fightingagainstfreezingcold.returnedhomesafeandsoundtogether7.Afteralongtime,tiredandcold,wefinallyarrivedhomesafeandsound.8.Timeseemedtopassslowly,afteralongstrugglingwefinallyarrivedhomesafely.9.Uponarrival,Ihardlywaittotellmyparentseverythingaboutthegoose10.Assoonaswegothome,wecouldn’twaittotellmyparentshowthegoosekeptusfromcold.Paragraph1“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”toldtheexperiencetomyparentsWriting:UsingvividlanguageandmoredetailsStep31.WhatshouldwehaveforChristmasdinnerwithoutkillingthegoose?Theylookedatuswithconcern.2.“WhatcouldaChristmasdinnerbelikewithoutgoose?”Theyaskedusinacaringtone.3.Wewouldhaveanythingbutthegoose.Anythingisokbutthegoose.thebrothers’ideas4.AChristmasdinnerwithoutgooseisstillagrandbanquet,butwecannotdowithoutthegoose.thedecision7.Well,we’llhaveadinnerwithoutgoose.8.Fine/Alright.Thenwe’lldowithoutit.9.Uponhearingthis,wejumpedwithexcitement.Whenweheardthis,awaveofexcitementfloodedoverus.10.Themomentweheardourparentsannouncement,wesprangtoourfeetwithjoy.thebrothers’feelingParagraph2Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

thegoose.

theparentsaskedaquestion:thegoose’sidea5.Thegoosewhichwashonkingseemedtobeprayingnottobekilled.6.Honkingcontinually,thegooseseemedtobepleadingtoo.

“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearing

our

surviving

experience,

my

parents

hesitated

about

what

to

do

with

the

goose._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Buddy

quicklystuffedthegooseintomycoat.

Its

feathered

body

was

as

warm

as

aheatingstove.

Aflushofwarmthsweptoverme.We

passed

the

goose

back

and

forthseveraltimes

between

us

all

the

way

home,

fightingagainst

biting

cold.

After

what

seemed

like

ages,

tiredandcold,we

got

homesoundandsafe.

Upon

arrival,

we

couldn’t

wait

to

explain

to

our

parents

how

the

goose

had

kept

us

from

freezing.

“WhatcouldaChristmasdinnerbelikewithoutgoose?”They

looked

at

us

with

a

concerned

look.“AChristmasdinnerwithoutgooseisstillagreatone,butwecannotdowithoutthegoose.Itishethathas

saved

our

lives.”

Buddy

and

I

spokewithonevoice.

The

goose

which

was

honkingcontinuallyseemed

as

if

he

were

prayingtoo.

“Well,we’llhaveadinnerwithoutgoose.”

my

parents

announced.

Whenhearingthis,sothrilledwere

we

thatwesprang

to

our

feet.

That

Christmas,

thoughwe

didn’t

have

a

grand

feast,

wehadanewfamilymember,bringingusendlessjoyinourfuturelives,whichismorevaluablethanameal.Step4Polishin非谓语:v-ing作状语

定语从句无灵主语虚拟语气强调句倒装SummaryReading

togetasmuchinformationaspossible

Predictingareasonableending

Writingexpressionsandsentences

Polishing

logical+vivid+coherent+correct+reasonable主题语境：人与自我话题分类：做人与做事Fourstepsstep1step2step3step4语篇解读Bekindtothosewhohavehelpedyoubefore.Begrateful!Expressgratitudetoyourfriends\yourparents\ourcountryoranythingthathavegivenyouahand.Cultivationofcorevalues

“Doug,

it

is

time

for

you

to

open

your

coat.”

Buddy

handed

the

goose

to

me.

Its

feathered

body

was

as

warm

as

angel

feathers

inside

my

coat.

Putting

my

freezing

hands

on

its

body,

I

felt

a

rush

of

warmth

sweeping

over

me.

We

passed

the

goose

back

and

forth

between

us

all

the

way

home,

battling

biting

cold.

After

what

seemed

like

ages,

we

got

home.

Upon

arrival,

we

couldn’t

wait

to

explain

to

our

parents

how

the

goose

had

kept

u