读后续写解析邻里关系类我沉默的邻居讲义 高三英语二轮复习

2023.12金十二校读后续写解析Forcourage,myfingersclungtotheharness(背带、保护带)onCho'sbroadbackaswepassedthefenceofmyneighborMr.Groll'syard.WalkingbyMr.Groll'syardisthebestpartofourmorningwalk,andalsotheworst.Itisthebestpartbecausetherosestalktous.“Goodmorning,Cho,”whispertherosescentstomyguidedog'snose.Otherrosesshouttome,“Hello,Mai!”Nowcomestheworstpart:Mr.Groll.Asusual,friendlyChthumpshertail.ButCh6isjustadog;howcansheknowthatthisneighbordoesnotlikemeatall?“Hello,Mr.Groll.”IgreetedhimasIdideverymorning.Andlikeeveryothermorning,hedidnotanswerme.ButIknewhewasthere,watching,behindhisfence.Healwayssoundsoutofbreath.andthecreakygateswingsnervouslyinhishand.Maybehe'safraidofmebecauseI'mblind.Disabilitiesdoscaregrown-upssometimes.ThenIremembered:theotherdayIheardhimplayingcheckers(西洋跳棋)withmyfriendJimmy,who'sinawheelchair.Ch6andImarchedon,andmythoughtskeptstep.WhydidMr.Grollignoreme?It'samysterytome.Papahastoldmethatsomefolksdonotlikepeoplefromfarawayplaces.Doesthissolvethemystery?MaybeMr.Grolldoesnotlikeneighborsfromfarawayplaces.No,thatcan'tbeit.EverySaturdayMr.Grollandmybigbrother,Lien,helpeachotherwithyardwork.Theyarefriends.Well,then,Iwondered,whywouldn’thetalktome?Thetoeofmyshoescuffedthesidewalk.andIthink,maybehedidn'tlikemebecauseI'magirl.Thesidewalkhummedbeneathmyfeet.Askateboardzoomedby.“Hello,MaiandCho!”myfriendJanayelled.“Hi,Mr.Groll”Iwaited.IfMr.GrollignoredJana,thenthemysterywassolved.Buthisvoicecalledout,“Hello,Jana!”Paragraph1:Thesoundofittwistedmyheart.Paragraph2:“ItisCh6thatscaresmywordsaway.”hereplied.【重难点讲解】划线第一句话表达了主人公Mai和她的导盲犬Chó在邻居Mr.Groll的花园旁边经过时，花朵仿佛与他们对话的意象。花的香气对Chó的鼻子轻声细语地说：“早上好，Chó”，而其他的花则向Mai大声喊：“你好，Mai！”Mai作为盲人，眼睛虽然看不见，但是听觉是很好的，这种描写通过赋予花朵生命和语言的特性，传达了一种温馨和友好的氛围，也表现了Mai的乐观，与其在邻里中感到的其他情感形成鲜明对比。划线第二句话描绘了主人公Mai行走在人行道上时的感觉。通过使用动词“hummed”，赋予了人行道一种生动的感觉，好像它在和

Mai

的脚步一同发出某种低沉而持续的声音。这样的描写可以传达出一种亲近自然、融入环境的感觉，同时强调了Mai与周围环境的联系。【情节梳理】人物：这篇文章主要出现了七个人物分别是Mai,Chó(theguidedog),Mr.Groll(theneighbor),Jimmy(Mai’sfriendinawheelchair),Jana(Mai’sfriend),Lien(Mai’sbigbrother),Papa(Mai’sfather)

主要还是围绕前三个来展开。Mai：一个盲人女孩，有一只导盲犬Chó，很友好，每天早上都和格罗尔先生打招呼，尽管他显然很冷漠。Chó：Mai的导盲犬，是她的忠实伙伴。Mr.Groll：Mai的邻居，看上去不太友好和冷漠，但实际上有原因。视角：Mai的第一人称视角叙述主题：误解和化解。Mai

试图理解为什么邻居Mr.Groll对她不友好，最后通过他们交流打破了障碍，结交了朋友，弥合两人之间的鸿沟。【段首句解读以及解题思路】段首句一：Thesoundofittwistedmyheart.

它的声音揪着我的心。段首句二：“ItisChóthatscaresmywordsaway.”hereplied.“是Chó吓得我说不出话来。”他回答说。上文讲到，Mai猜测邻居Mr.Groll对她不友好的原因，有残疾、远道而来抑或是女孩，但分别通过Jimmy(Mai’sfriendinawheelchair),Lien(Mai’sbigbrother),Jana(Mai’sfriend)三个人物分别排除。因此当最后Mr.Groll与Jana打招呼的时候，那个声音揪着Mai的心，百思不得其解。从段首句二我们可以得知原因在于Chó，Mr.Groll害怕这只导盲犬。这里其实从上文第四段“Andlikeeveryothermorning,hedidnotanswerme.ButIknewhewasthere,watching,behindhisfence.Healwayssoundsoutofbreath,andthecreakygateswingsnervouslyinhishand.”这句话也可以感知。并由这句话反推，第一段结尾Mai是去询问对其冷漠的原因。前面部分可以写Mai鼓起勇气去和邻居进行面对面交流，最后引入询问。第二段在得知真正的原因后，可以写Mai的反应，可以是安慰Mr.Groll也可以是部分歉疚，并表示Chó的友善并不会伤人。可以适当加入Chó的描写，可以从尾巴、舌头、脑袋等入手，表现人畜无害。最后可以写Mai和Mr.Groll化解了之前的误会，成为了朋友。【优秀习作】Thesoundofittwistedmyheart.

Iindeeddidn’tunderstandwhyMr.Grolltreatedmeinsuchaway.Standinginfrontofhishouse,Iwaslostinthoughtforalongtime.Finally,Istillscrewedupthecouragetoconfronttheenigma.HeadingtoMr.Groll’sgate,Iventured,“Mr.Groll,whydoyouneverrespondtomygreetings?IsitbecauseI’mblindormaybebecauseI’magirl…”Theunansweredquerieslingered,andmyfingersclungtightertoChó’sharnessaswestoodattheedgeoftheyard.“ItisChóthatscaresmywordsaway.”hereplied.

Upondiscoveringthetruth,shockcoursedthroughme.Butsoonhepressedon,“Ihaveafearofdogs,yousee.It’snotaboutyoubeingblindoragirl;it’smyowndiscomfort.”Atthis,withempathyinmyheart,Ireassuredhim,“Chóisgentleandwell-trained.Shewon’tharmanyone.”Then,IdirectedChótocomeforwardandgetdown.ChówaslickingMr.Groll’sshoesmildly.ThetensionintheairseemedtosubsidewithMr.GrollaffectionatelyrufflingChó’sfur.Finally,themisunderstandingunraveled,andaseedoffriendshipbetweenuswouldgraduallyblossominthatverygarden.【参考范文】Thesoundofittwistedmyheart.NowIunderstoodsomethingIdidn’tknowbefore:unfriendlyMr.GrolllikesJimmy.AndLien.AndJana.ButnotmeandChó...NotMeandChó!Anideabrightenedmymystery.ButIshouldknowwhyMr.Grolldidn’ttalktome!Repulsedbyconfusion,aswellasirritation,Ifeltmywayalongthefencetoapproachmyneighbour.Thegatesqueakedopen.“Mai!Becareful!”Mr.Groll’sstartledvoicesteadiedmycouragewhilehishandsteadiedmyelbow.“Youcanpleasesolvemymystery,”Istammered.“IsitbecauseI’mblindthatyoudon’tlikeme?OrbecauseIamagirlfromafarawayland?”“ItisChothatscaresmywordsaway.”hereplied.

“Ilikeyou,justasIlikeLien,andJana,”hesoundedbreathless,maybebecauseofanxietyoreagerness.“Butyouknow,Iamjustafraidofyourdog.”hecontinued.Hisearnestexplanationmadeeverythingcometolight.“Comewithme.”Itoldhim,“Makeacqu