学案1：Writing-Write a letter of advice 新人教版高中英语必修第一册

新人教版高中英语必修第一册PAGEPAGE3Writing—Writealetterofadvice写作指导第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。话题词汇feedbackn． 反馈suggestionn. 建议proposaln. 建议venturev. 冒昧做某事beneficialadj. 有益的advisev. 建议suggestv. 建议recommendv. 推荐，劝告wiseadj. 明智的话题句式1．段首常用语(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表达“建议”常用语(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用语(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数100个左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern．脾气，情绪StepOne审题谋篇体裁建议信话题对生活和学习的建议时态一般现在时人称第二人称StepTwo词汇运用1．控制你的脾气 _________________________2．体育锻炼 _________________________3．有效的 _____________4．去除 _____________5．保持乐观 _________________________6．积极的生活态度_________________________StepThree句式表达1．完成句子①最重要的是学会控制你的脾气Themostimportantthingis.②你不可能做或者说出你会后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay.③事实情况是人人都会有这样的一段时期，在这期间事事不顺，因此你不必担心过多。isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.2．句式升级④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper_________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.⑤把句③用it改写成主语从句。everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.StepFour连句成篇(注意使用first，second，and等关联词)HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie

▁▃▅▇█参*考*答*案█▇▅▃▁StepTwo词汇运用1．controlyourtemper2．physicalexercise3．effective4．getridof5．remainoptimisticabout6．apositiveattitudetowardslifeStepThree句式表达1．完成句子①tolearntocontrolyourtemper②anythingyou’llregret③Thetruth；whenthingsseemtobegoingwrong2．句式升级④sothat/inorderthat⑤ItistruethatStepFour连句成篇Onepossibleversion：HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips：First，talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second，gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird，remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours，JamieWriting—Writealetterofadvice写作指导第一段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。话题词汇feedbackn． 反馈suggestionn. 建议proposaln. 建议venturev. 冒昧做某事beneficialadj. 有益的advisev. 建议suggestv. 建议recommendv. 推荐，劝告wiseadj. 明智的话题句式1．段首常用语(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表达“建议”常用语(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用语(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数100个左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern．脾气，情绪StepOne审题谋篇体裁建议信话题对生活和学习的建议时态一般现在时人称第二人称StepTwo词汇运用1．控制你的脾气 _________________________2．体育锻炼 _________________________3．有效的 _____________4．去除 _____________5．保持乐观 _________________________6．积极的生活态度_________________________StepThree句式表达1．完成句子①最重要的是学会控制你的脾气Themostimportantthingis.②你不可能做或者说出你会后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay.③事实情况是人人都会有这样的一段时期，在这期间事事不顺，因此你不必担心过多。isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.2．句式升级④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper_________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.⑤把句③用it改写成主语从句。everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.StepFour连句成篇(注意使用first，second，and等关联词)HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie

▁▃▅▇█参*考*答*案█▇▅▃▁StepTwo词汇运用1．controlyourtemper2．physicalexercise3．effective4．getridof5．remainoptimisticabout6．apositiveattitudetowardslifeStepThree句式表达1．完成句子①tolearntocontrolyourtemper②anythingyou’llregret③Thetruth；whenthingsseemtobegoingwrong2．句式升级④sothat/inorderthat⑤ItistruethatStepFour连句成篇Onepossibleversion：HiWorried，I’msorryto