外研版九年级上作文指导

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Tired/relaxed/enjoyable/unforgettablePleasant/interesting/fun/dull/boring/excitingAlthoughIfelttired,Itwasafantastictrip.Whatanexcitingandunforgettabletrip!ItissuchanenjoyabletripthatIwillneverforgetit.Ihadagoodtimethere,andit’sreallyanunforgettabletripShandonghasleftmeawonderfulimpressionandI’mlookingforwardtogoingbackthereagain.Howtointroduceyourtrip1.starting2.body3.endingWhenWhereHowWeatherWhat(activities)feelings1234Yourtrip（ShandongisthemostbeautifulplacethatIhaveeverbeento,andIwon’tforgetthosedaysthatIspentthere.）时态：人称：（ItissuchanenjoyabletripthatIwillneverforgetit.）同学们,你一定欣赏过异乡的风景,品尝过异乡的美食,感受过异乡的风土人情…学校的语言天地要举办一次英语征文活动,内容为介绍你的一次难忘的旅行经历,现在请你根据下面的提示,写一篇短文。内容提示:1.Whereandwhendidyougo2.Howdidyougothere3.Whatwastheweatherlike4.Whatdidyoudothere5.Howdidyoufeel要求:(1)中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范,可适当发挥(2)词数80词左右Anunforgettabletripto___书面表达评分标准（一）评分原则1.共20分，按5个档次给分；2.采用整体评分的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内容是否符合题目要求，根据任务完成的情况初步确定所属档次；然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和调整档次，最后给分；3.评分的主要参考指标为：内容要点全面、语言得体、结构清晰、上下文语意连贯、符合逻辑，字数80词左右，其中内容要点可用不同方式表达，鼓励对紧扣主题的适当发挥。4.若书写较差，影响理解从所得分中减去2分；5.评分时对于拼写与标点符号错误，应视其对交际的影响程度酌情扣分。6.英语、美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。（三）各档次评分参考标准一档（17-20分）出色完成了试题规定的任务，有很好的能力用自己的话表述观点，围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，选词贴切，语言准确无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确。二档（13-16分）较好完成了试题规定的任务。有能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结