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continuationwritingActivate

and

sharePenname:O.HenryRealname:WillianSydneyPorterOccupation:ashortstorywriterNotableWorks:TheLastLeafTheGiftoftheMagiTheFurnishedRoomYouaregoingtowriteacontinuationofthestoryTheLastLeaf.WritingTask

ThestorywassetinNewYorkinthelate19thcenturywhenPneumonia(肺炎)wasadeadlydisease.AyounggirlbythenameofJohnsyhadfallenillandwasdyingofpneumonia.

Shewatchedtheleavesfallfromavineoutsidethewindowofherroom,anddecidedthatwhenthelastleafdropped,shetoowould"drop,"anddie.WhileSue,Johnsy`ssistertriedtotellhertostopthinkinglikethat,Johnsywasdeterminedtodiewhenthelastleaffell.

AnoldFrenchman,namedBehrman,wasanartist(andaverybadonetoo)wholivednearbyandwasSue'stutor,andwhohadbeenclaimingthathewouldpaintamasterpiece,eventhoughhehadneverevenattemptedtostart.

Suewenttohim,andtoldhimthathersisterwasdyingofpneumonia,andthatJohnsyclaimedthatwhenthelastleaffelloffofavineoutsideherwindow,shewoulddie.Behrmanlaughedatthisasfoolishness,butdecidedtoseeJohnsyandthevine(藤).Inthenight,averybadstormcameandwindwashowlingandrainwassplatteringagainstthewindow.SueclosedthecurtainsandtoldJohnsytogotosleep,eventhoughtherewerestillfourleavesleftonthevine.JohnsyprotestedbutSueinsistedondoingsobecauseshedidn`twantJohnsytoseethelastleaffall.

Inthemorning,Johnsywantedtoseethevine,tobesurethatalltheleavesweregone,buttotheirsurprise,therewasstilloneleafleft.WhileJohnsywassurprisedthatitisstillthere,sheinsisteditwouldfallthatday.Butitdidn`t,nordiditfallthroughthenightnorthenextday.Johnsybelievedthattheleafstayedtheretoshowhowwickedshewas,andthatshesinned(犯罪,犯过失)inwantingtodie.Sheregainedherwilltolive,andmadeafullrecoverythroughouttheday.

Intheafternoon,adoctorcameandtalkedtoSue.ThedoctorsaidthatMr.Behrmanhaddiedofpneumoniaanhourago,andthathewasillonly2days.Ajanitor(看门人)hadfoundhimhelplesswithpain,andhisshoesandclothingwerewetandicycold.Thejanitorcouldn'tfigureoutwherehehadbeenonthatstormynight,thoughshehadfoundalanternthatwasstilllit,aladderthathadbeenmoved,somescatteredbrushes,andapalette(调色板)withgreenandyellowcolorsmixedonit."LookoutthewindowSue,doyouseethatlastivy(常春藤)leaf?Darling,thatwasBehrman'smasterpiece-hepaintedittherethenightthatthelastleaffell."TearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher.________________________________________Tenyearslater,Johnsybecameafamouspainterduetoherdedicationandhardwork._______________________________continuationwriting

Readandexplore

Readthestoryquicklyandanswerthequestions.1.Whoarethemaincharacters?ThemaincharactersareSue,Johnsy,MrPneumonia(personified),thedoctor,andMrBehrman.2.Whenandwherewasthestoryset?ThestorywassetinNewYorkinthelate19thcenturywhenPneumoniawasadeadlydisease.3.WhathappenedtoJohnsy?ShegotPneumoniaandhadlittlechancetolive.Readandexplore4.Bydoingwhat,whosolvedtheproblem?MrBehrmanpaintedthelastleafonthewall.5.Wastheproblemsolved?Whathappenedtothemaincharacters?Yes,Johnsywasaliveaftershesawthelastleaf.MrBehrmandiesofpneumoniabecausehepaintedanivyleafforJohnsyintherain.Readandexplore6.WhydidMrBehrmangetpneumonia?MrBerhmangotpneumoniabecausehewasoutsideinthecoldrainpaintingtheleafonthewall.Readandexplore7.Ifthestorywerenotnamed“THELASTLEAF”,whichofthefollowingwouldbeitsbesttitleinyouropinion?Themasterpiece.Analysethecharacters

CharactersPersonalityExamples(Evidence)Johnsypessimisticstubbornwaitedtodie;mindwasmadeupSueconsideratekind,patient

encouragedJohnsyconstantlyandtookcare

of

JohnsycarefullyBehrmanambitiousselflessbraveForfortyyearshehadbeenabouttopaintamasterpiece.HesacrificedhislifetosaveJohnsy.ReadandexploreReadthestorymorecarefully.Completethetimeline

withwhathappenedinthestory.ReadandexploreInNovember,Johnsy______________________.Thedoctor____________________________.Johnsycountedtheleavesontheivyvineandthought______________________________________.BehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowandfound___________.Thenextmorning,Johnsy____________________________________________________.Thefollowingday,Johnsy________________________.Thedoctor______________________________.MrBehrman_____________.Thenextday,MrBehrman______.Thejanitorfound__________________________thedaybefore.gotsickwithpneumoniasaidshemightnotgetbetterthatshemustdiewhenthelastivyleaffallsoneleafleftaskedtolookoutthewindowandsawsawtheleafwasstilltheresaidshewouldliveandgetbetterwassickwithpneumoniadiedMrBehrmaninbedwithpaintheleafwasstilltherePrinciplesofcontinuationwriting1.Consistency

of

the

gist(主旨大意)2.Consistencyoftheplot(情节)3.Consistencyofthelogic(逻辑)4.Consistencyof

the

emotion(情感)5.Consistencyofthestyle(风格)2.Consistencyoftheplot(情节)Plot-relatedmistakes1.Notfollowingthegivenhintswhenorganizingtheplot(情节没有跟着文章提示走)Thenvividmemoriescamefloodingback.

SomeSsfailedtomentionwhatmemoriestheywere.2.Overuseofdialogues(过度使用对话)Toomanydialoguesbetweenthetwomaincharacters,Jennyandhermother.Asaresult,theirstoriesarelonganddull.3.Wronguseofperson(人称使用错误)

WhenIgotupat6o'clock,Ihaveseenmymotherbusycookinginthekitcheneveryweekday.Plot-relatedmistakesMistakesinexpressions1.Spellingmistakes(拼写错误)Clam(calm)Down!…hermotherturely(truly)lovesher..Hermotherpreparedalotofsnakes(snacks)forher.The

seller

smailed(smiled).Don’t

leave

me

along(alone).Jennychocked(choked)Mistakesinexpressions1.Spellingmistakes(拼写错误)Clam(calm)Down!…hermotherturely(truly)lovesher..Hermotherpreparedalotofsnakes(snacks)forher.The

seller

smailed(smiled).Don’t

leave

me

along(alone).Jennychocked(choked)2.Wronguseofcollocations(词组搭配介词乱用)Sheshared

happiness

to(with)

her

mother.Jenny

approached

to(/)

her

mother

and

hugged

her.She

thanked

to(/)

the

seller

and

left

quickly.Mistakesinexpressions3.Mistakesinpartofspeech,tenses,voices,etc.(词性、时态、语态)take

a

deep

breathe(breath)Iwanttomake

an

apologize(apology).Whatever

you

had

met,

I

will

always

standing(stand)

behind

you.

I

shouldn’t

shouted(shout)

to

you.Nobody

can

heard(hear).Thedoorwasn’tbeen(/)closed.

Shealwaysrememberedthesmellofthemealwhich(was)cookedbyhermother.MistakesinexpressionsMistakesinexpressions4.Mistakesinsentencestructures(句子结构)Notuntildidshehearwhatthesellertoldhershecametorealizethat…Sothankfulshewasthat…Whenhermotherseeingher,shejumpedtoherfeet.They

hugged

each

other,

understood

other’s

heart.Mistakesinexpressions5.Chinglish(中式英语)But

she

rushed

to

the

kitchen

with

no

words.You

are

OK

just

enough.Thinking

here,

Jenny

made

a

decision

to

apologize

to

her

mum.Mom

is

the

best

person

in

the

world,

a

man

is

like

a

treasure

who

has

mother.WonderfulexpressionsandbeautifulsentencesExpressions:1.Vividwords&variousexpressions(生动的词/多样的表达)2.Verbsinaction(表动作的词)3.Variedsentencepatterns(句式多样)4.Plotscorrespondingtothegivenpassage(情节紧扣)5.Properstatementofthetheme(主题升华恰当)TearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher._______________HowdidJohnsyfeel?

WhatdidJohnsydo?WhatdidJohnsysay?Shefeltmoved,heartbroken,grateful…

ShewenttoseeMr.Behrman.Shegavethanksandwasdeterminedtosucceed.PlotConstructionTenyearslater,Johnsybecameafamouspainterduetoherdedicationandhardwork.____________Howsuccessfulwasshe?WhatdidJohnsydotorememberMrBehrman?Whatdidthepaintingmean?Herworks…ShedrewthesamepaintingasMrBehrmandid.Hope.PlotConstructionVocabularyforcontinuationwriting动作:stareat(注视,盯着看),take…aside(把…叫到一旁),claim(声称),inanattempttodo(尝试做某事),raise/liftone’sspirits(振奋某人的精神),hearof(听说),makeupone’smindtodo(决心做某事),fetch(拿来;请来),longtodo(渴望做某事),slipaway(消亡,死去;溜走),holdon(在困境或危险中坚持住),wonder(好奇,想知道)情绪:betiredof(厌倦),withdisbelief(不可置信地),helplessly(无助地)状态:wetthrough(湿透的),icycold(冰凉的)时序:thenextmorning,thefollowingday,intheafternoon,thenextday时序表达补充:allofasudden突然earlyinthemorning一大早oneSundayafternoon一个星期天的下午theotherday=afewdaysago几天前thenext/followingday第二天justthen=justatthatmoment正在那时afterthat=lateron然后afterawhile一会儿以后intheend/atlast/finally/eventually最后fromthenon从那以后surprisingly令人惊讶的是withouthesitation毫不犹豫地Hearingthis,…听到这个,…Afterwhatseemedages,…在过了似乎几年的时间后,…(夸张)Afterseeminglyalongtime,…在过了似乎很长一段时间后,…VocabularyforcontinuationwritingVocabularytodescribepersonality

pessimistic悲观的optimistic乐观的

stubborn固执的flexible灵活的

considerate体贴的,考虑周到的kind宽容的,友好的patient有耐心的ambitious有抱负的selfless无私的brave勇敢的VocabularytodescribepersonalityTearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher.Lookingoutofthewindowandstaringatthelastivyleafthatnevermovedaninch,Johnsycouldn’

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