2022年中考英语(百色专用)复习精讲教学案-写作指导话题6　节假日活动

话题六节假日活动eq\x(单元链接)年级单元话题功能九年级Unit2Ithinkthatmoon­cakesaredelicious！节日给出个人反应eq\x(话题解读)《英语课程标准》中关于“节假日活动”的子话题有：1.节日与假日；2.庆祝活动。分析百色近八年(2014～2021)中考书面表达的命题方向可知，未曾涉及“节假日活动”这一话题。从全国来看，关于“节假日活动”的相关话题主要从以下角度进行考查：1．介绍某个节日的起源、人们的庆祝方式及具体活动等(2021常州，2020淮安，2020大庆，2020温州，2019眉山，2018兰州)；2．为了庆祝节日所做的准备工作或计划(2018江西，2018德阳)；3．比较节日之间的异同(2019通辽)；4．介绍假期或旅行(2020宁波，2020孝感，2020昆明，2018杭州)。eq\x(话题素材串联)一、常用话题词汇1．中国主要节日：NewYear'sDay，theSpringFestival，theLanternFestival，Women'sDay，theDragonBoatFestival，Children'sDay，theMid­AutumnFestival，Teachers'Day…2．西方主要节日：Easter，Mother'sDay，Father'sDay，ThanksgivingDay，Halloween，ChristmasDay…3．传统文化相关词汇：lantern，jiaozi/dumpling，zongzi，mooncake，sweetdumpling(汤圆)，noodles，chopsticks，Chinesecharacter(汉字)，papercutting/paper­cuts，Chineseknot(中国结)，traditionalopera(戏曲)，BeijingOpera…4．节假日庆祝活动：gettogether，visitrelativesandfriends，makeaspecialcardwithbestwishes，setofffireworks/crackers(放烟花/鞭炮)，haveabigdinner，cleanthehouse，admirethemoon，gosomewhereinteresting，takeavacation，giveredenvelopes(发红包)，watchdragon/liondances，doChinesekungfu，guessriddles(猜灯谜)…二、佳句欣赏与运用◆节日介绍类TheSpringFestivaliscelebratedinJanuaryorFebruary.TheDragonBoatFestivalfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar(农历)．ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.TheDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionwhichdatesbackmorethantwothousandyears.Thanksgivingisatimeforaspecialdinneramongfamilyandfriends.It'satimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebratetheharvest.【仿写】对孩子们来说，儿童节是尽情玩耍的时光。It's__a__time__for__children__to__have__fun__on__Children's__Day.TheMid­AutumnFestivalisadayforfamilyreunion.It'sfullofjoyandhappiness.◆活动安排类OntheeveoftheNewYear，thewholefamilygettogetherandhaveabigdinner.IthinkweshoulddosomethingspecialtoshowourlovetoourmothersonMother'sDay.Iboughtatieformyfatherasagiftbecauseit'sFather'sDaytoday.OnThanksgivingDay，Iwanttoexpressmythankstothosepeoplewhohaveeverhelpedme.Toshowtheirthanks，studentssendcardswithbestwishesorflowerstotheirteachers.Onthisday，wecleanourhouseandsweepawaybadluck.Mygrandmaoftendecoratesourhousewithpapercuttings.【仿写】在圣诞节这一天，我们用一棵圣诞树来装饰房子。_On__Christmas__Day，we__decorate__our__house__with__a__Christmas__tree.eq\x(典例剖析)在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日——春节，请你根据方框中所给的提示信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。theSpringFestivalTime：inJanuaryorFebruaryActivities：welcomethenewyear，visitrelatives，gettogether…Meaning：thebiggestdayofayear，anewstart…注意：1．发言稿中必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3．80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Ladiesandgentlemen，WelcometotheChineseculturetour.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.【审题指导】这是一篇关于节日介绍类的书面表达。全文时态以一般现在时为主。写作前，应读懂方框里的提示信息，理出写作思路(春节的时间、庆祝春节的活动、春节的意义)；写作时，注意提示信息的完整性，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。【写作导图】【作文失分点与句子升格】◎失分点节日类作文是学生熟悉的话题之一，学生写作时相对比较轻松。结合本篇作文来说，学生易失分的地方主要有：1．对春节的了解不多，仅局限于提示信息，无法展开来叙述；2．词汇和句式的储备不足，简单句运用太多，虽能避免错误，但会使整篇文章显得平庸，得不到高分。◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)1．NowallowmetointroduceanimportantfestivalinChina，theSpringFestival.(用“oneofthe＋形容词最高级＋名词复数”结构升格句子)________________________________________________________________________2．Peoplecomebackhomeandgettogether.(用“fromdifferentplaces”和“forabigdinner”扩句升格句子)________________________________________________________________________3．Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear.Theyhopetheywillhaveabrightnewstart.(用“v.­ing表伴随”结构改写句子)________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Ladies__and__gentlemen，Welcome__to__the__Chinese__culture__tour.NowallowmetointroduceoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina，theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.ItisChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestdayofayear.Onthisday，peoplecomebackhomefromdifferentplacesandgettogetherforabigdinner.Manypeoplestayuplatetowelcomethenewyear，hopingtheywillhaveabrightnewstart.Duringthefestival，peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriendsandwisheachothergoodluckforthenewyear.Childrencanoftengethongbaofromtheirelders.Doyouthinkitinteresting?That's__all.Thank__you__for__listening.【名师赏析】此篇作文无论是从结构上还是内容上都堪称是一篇佳作。首先，开篇点题，用一个祈使句直接引入要介绍的节日；其次，按照方框里的提示信息，依次介绍了春节的时间、庆祝春节的活动和春节的意义；最后，表达了对对方聆听的感谢。值得一提的是，文章介绍了大量与春节相关的文化习俗，如stayuplatetowelcomethenewyear，visitrelativesandfriends，gethongbaofromelders等。同时，句式结构多样，富有变化，充分体现了作者深厚的语言文化功底。eq\x(实战演练)假如你是李华，打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节，并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据下面的提示和要求，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。提示：1．WhendoChinesepeoplecelebratetheDragonBoatFestival?2．Whydotheycelebrateit?3．WhatwillyouandJackdoonthatday?要求：1．短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：lunarcalendar农历DearJack，TheDragonBoatFestivaliscominginafewdays.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutospendthefestivalwithmyfamily.ChinesepeoplehavebeencelebratingitonMay5thofthelunarcalendarforcenturiestorememberapoet—QuYuan.Onthatday，we'lltrytomakezongziwithmygrandma'shelp.Intheafternoon，wearegoingtowatchtheboatracesheldinDongpoLakeat2p．m.Dur