江苏高考新题型-读写作文

Task-basedwriting

江苏高考英语新题型--读写作文考试大纲：要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文，情景的形式包括图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文等。考生应能：〔1〕根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法，选用适当的词汇；〔2〕使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地传递信息和表达思想。内容趋同广东省高考作文之读写任务2023年广东高考英语2023年广东高考英语2023年广东高考英语读写任务的写作内容一般分为两局部，即TASK1、SUMMARY;TASK2、OPINION。Summary存在的诸多问题Usethefirstpersoninsteadofthethirdperson没有使用第三人称Usetoomanyoriginalwordsorsentencesfromthepassage.直接或过多引用原文Expressopiniontooearly过早表达观点!lacktransitionalwordsorstatements缺乏过渡词句Usetoomanyspecificdetailsinsteadofgeneralwords.过多细节而非概括性语言〔1〕keypointsarenotcomplete概括要点不全〔2〕Usethefirstpersoninsteadofthethirdperson没有使用第三人称〔3〕Usetoomanyoriginalwordsorsentencesfromthepassage.过多引用原文〔4〕Usetoomanyspecificdetailsinsteadofgeneralwords.过多细节而非概括性语言〔5〕Expressopiniontooearly过早表达观点〔6〕lacktransitionalwordsorstatements缺乏过渡词句〔7〕toomanysimplesentences句式单调Commonmistakes如何写概括Canwemainlyuseourownwordsorthesentencesintheoriginalpassage?Whatshouldbeincludedinthesummary?3.Canwewriteitinthefirstpersonorthethirdperson?4.Canweexpressouropinion?FOCUS:Whatisasummary?

AshortenedversionofthetextMainpointsofthetextWritteninyourownwords

Asummaryisabriefaccountofthemainpointsofanarticleinyourownwords.

Stylesofpassageargumentation1narration2exposition3narrationThesixelementsofanarrativepassage:

Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills,suchasbalancingacheck-book,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveit—goodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andagoodlibrary.Thestudent’sUnionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek.Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts,andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs.OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway—itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground.thesixelementsofanarrativepassage

MikeHisfirstyearofcollegetoughest…adjustmentgotusedtoitlovethecollegelifeGethimselfactiveinthings

Mikesharedwithushisfirstyearofcollegelife.

Atfirsthe_______________________,butaftergettingactiveinthingsforonesemester,he____________and______________.didn’tadjusthimselfwelladaptedtoitenjoyedhimselfcongratulations!ArgumentationGettingupearlyhasbeenregardasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.1.Astrongstatementofopinion.(thekeyidea):Gettingupearly/agoodhabit/ofgreatimportance2.Supportfortheopinion(supportingsentences)

abettermemoryahealthierbodyabetterpreparationfortheday3.Conclusion/suggestions.agoodhabit/benefitalot

Thepassagesaysgettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitthatwillbenefitusalot.Itenablesustohaveabettermemory,healthierbodyandbetterpreparationfortheday.ExpositionThepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawakenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos.Theauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoanimals.Strategy3灵活变化表达，适度进行paraphrase,理清要点之间的逻辑关系之后，不能简单地照搬原句,即用自己的话进行改写，做到“雁过不留痕〞。Someusefulskills:1)Usewordsofsimilarmeanings同义替换法2)Adopttheoppositewaywhensayingasentence正话反说或反话正说法Youwillnotsucceed.=Youwillfail.Youcan’tbetoocarefulwhendriving.=Youshouldbecarefulwhendriving.Ican’tagreewithyoumore.=Iagreewithyou.3)Changethepartofspeech词性转换法Thephotoisofimportancetome.=Thephotoisimportanttome.

4)Changethestructureofasentence句式变化法语态变换：Parentsshouldgivechildrenmorepraise.→Childrenshouldbegivenmorepraise.简单句变复合句：Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore.Thiswillhelpthemlearnfaster.Childrenshouldbeencouragedmore,whichwillhelpthemlearnfaster..削“枝〞去“叶〞，实行精“兵〞裁“员〞。由于字数限制，又要涵盖所有要点，用词必须“能省那么省〞。Someusefulskills:1)

句式省略ifthey’recorrectedtoomuch=ifcorrectedtoomuch2)使用概括性的名词代替具体的词ShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels,afewcopiesofTimeandNewsweekandsometextbooks.Sheintendedtoreadallofthemduringthewintervacation.Shebroughthomealotofbookstoreadduringthevacation.Advertisingcanbeaservicetocustomers.Thisistruewhenadvertisementsgivereliableinformationaboutthegoodsadvertised.Suchinformationisneededifthecustomeristomakeasensiblechoicewhenhebuyssomething.Itisusefulinthatitletshimknowofthekindsofgoodsintheshops.Printedadvertisementsdothisjobbest.Customerscancollectthemandcomparethem.Theycanbetakenalongtotheshopsandtheirstatementscanbecheckedagainstandactualgoodsintheshops.Someadvertisementsarenotveryusefultothecustomers.Insteadofhelpingthecustomertosatisfyhisrealneeds,theysetouttomakehimwantthings.Theysetouttomakeusbelievethatwhattheyadvertisewillmakeuscleverer,prettier,morehandsome,ifonlyweuseit.ThevoiceonTVsays,“GetawaypeopleuseXYZpetrol.〞Thescreenshowsapictureofpetrolpumpforafastexpensivecarownedbyaboywithaprettygirlfriend.Theydriveofftothewonderfulcountryoralovelybeach.Somepeoplemayfeelthatclever,successfulpeopleuseXYZpetrol.Somemightchoosethatpetroleverytimetheyfilluptheircars.Advertisingcanbeusefulwhenitprovidescustomerswithreliableinformation，whilesomeadvertisementsarenotthecaseastheyareproducedonlytopersuadecustomerstobuywhattheydon’tneed.(31words)记叙文常见模板a.点明写作目的类：Thewritertellsus…〔主题〕byshowingusanexampleof…,who/which…〔故事情节〕.b.作者经历类：Inthepassage,thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceofdoingsth,which……c.他人经历类：Thispassageismainlyaboutsb’sexperienceofdoingsth….议论文常见模板Thearticlegivestheviewthat…should/shouldn’t…〔主题〕.…..〔补充论据〕.Thepassagehighlights(强调)theimportanceofsth…..Theauthorarguesthat…说明文常见模板a.现象揭示类：Thisarticlepointsoutthecommonphenomenon-----…〔主题),which…..〔补充解释〕.b.利弊比照类：Thearticlecomparesthedisadvantages/benefitsofAandB.Thepassagediscussestheimpact(影响)ofsth.c.研究显示类：Thestudyreveals(揭露)that…Thereportshowsthat…巧用过渡词句和关联词，提升作文档次。SUMMARY和OPINION之间要有过渡语句，才能给人“形合〞的感觉。而段落内部的关联词，可以反映出作者思路清晰，并增强文章的连贯性。过渡自然，明确了“读〞和“写〞之间的关联性记叙文的过渡语(1)Ihaveasimilarexperience.(2)Ialsowentthroughsuchanexperience.(3)Thisstoryremindsmeofanotherstorythathappenedto...(4)Thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceof...议论文的过渡语表示赞同/不赞同(1)Iagreewiththestatementthat...(2)Ido/quiteagreewiththeauthor...

(3)I’mforthewriter’sideathat...(4)Ifullysupportthestatement...(5)Ican’tagreemorewith...

(1)Ipartly/don’tagreewithwhatthewritersaid/thewriter’sview.(2)I’mstronglyagainstthewriter’sidea.(3)Thisopinionsoundsright/reasonable,butishardlypractical.(4)Somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththat...Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththem.常见关联词1)先后次序关系：lastbutnotleast;tobegin/start/endwith;finally;firstofall;afterwards;followingthis;2)因果关系：since;as;for;inthat...;owingto;dueto;inviewof;asaresultofthis;therefore;...andso...;consequently;asaresult;thus;sothat...;inconsequence;asaconsequence;3)转折关系：but;evenso;however;though;eventhough;despitethat;inspiteofthat;regardlessof;yet...;andyet;4)并列关系：and;also;too;aswellas;either...，or...;both...and...5)(补充)递进关系：furthermore;moreover;further;inthisway;still;notonly...butalso...;not...but...;inaddition(to);additionally,6)比较关系：similarly;incomparisonwith;whencomparedwith;comparedwith;like...;similarlyimportant;apartfrom(doing)...;...ratherthan...;both…and...;inthesameway;notonly...but(also).7)对照(不同点)：yet;still;forallofthat;rather;neither...nor;although;though;but;however;somethingisjusttheotherwayaround;yet;unlike;opposedto;asopposedto;incontrast(to);onthecontrary;differentfromthis;asopposedtothis;contraryto;whereas;while;butontheotherhand.8)举例关系:forexample;forinstance;inthiscase;namely;asyouknow;youmaysay;like;suchas;inparticular;including...;foronething...,foranother...;putitsimply;Itisinterestingtonotethat...9)强调关系：infact;especially;particularly;moreover;naturally;whatismoreimportant;inreality;certainly;ofcourse;indeed;inparticular;itiscertain／surethat...;tobestrict;tobetrue;intruth10)条件关系:if;unless;lest;providedthat;ifitisthecase;inthissense;once...;ifpossible;ifnecessary;ifso;ifnotall;ifanything.11)归纳总结类：generallyspeaking,generally,asageneralrule,ingeneral,inasense,intermsof,inconclusion,inshort,inbrief,insummary,inaword,onthewhole,tosumup,toconclude

12)目的关系：withthisobject;forthispurpose;inorderthat;inthisway,since;sothat;onthataccount(由于那个缘故);incase13)重申关系：inotherwords;thatistosay;asIhavesaid;again;onceagain.运用较为丰富的句式和高级词汇，为作文锦上添花。适时使用非谓语动词结构、with短语结构、定语从句、倒装句型、短语动词等。各种从句非谓语强调句倒装虚拟省略句

运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。表达自己观点(1)Asforme,...(2)Inmyopinion,...(3)AsfarasIamconcerned,...(4)Frommypointofview...(5)Iholdtheview/beliefthat...(6)Personally,Ibelievethat...(7)Accordingtomyexperience,Ithinkthat...提供论据或原因分析总述原因(1)Thereareseveralreasonsthatcontributeto...(2)Myviewsarebasedonthefollowingreasons.分层论述(1)Ontheonehand,...Ontheother,...一方面……另一方面……(2)Foronething,...Foranother...一那么…二那么……(3)Tobeginwith/Firstofall/First(ly),...Second(ly),...Besides/Furthermore/What’smore,...Finally/Lastbutnotleast...首先……其次……此外/而且……最后……列举例子(1)Take...forexample.以……为例吧(2)Forexample/instance,...例如，……(3)suchas比方说，诸如……之类的引出经历Whatimpressesmemostisthat...我印象最为深的是……分析因果Thanksto/Owingto/Becauseof...由于/因为……Consequently/Therefore/Thus/Asaresult,...因此/结果……引出话题(1)Thereisnodoubtthat...毫无疑问……(2)Itcannotbedeniedthat...不可否认……(3)Noonecanignorethefactthat...谁也不可无视……(4)Fromwhatismentionedabove,weknow...依上所述，我们知道……(1)Tosumup/Inshort/Inconclusion/Inaword/Allinall,...总之，……(2)Takingallthefactorsintoaccount,wecandrawaconclusionthat...考虑到以上因素，我们可以得出这样的结论：……(3)Fromthediscussionabove,itcanbesafelyconcludedthat...根据以上讨论，可以得出如下结论：……(4)Tobebrief,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof...总之，我们应当明白……的重要性。(5)Therefore,itisnecessaryforusto...因此，我们有必要……(6)Only/inthisway/whenwe...canwe...只有用这种方法/当……时，我们才能……总结句开头语[写作内容]1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;3.根据你的分析,从社会标准(rulesandregulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。[写作要求]1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;摇2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。[评分标准]内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当。Thetrafficissueisahardnuttocrack.Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.Thethreeselectionspresentedabovearetypicalexamples.Quiteafewthingsgiverisetothetrafficproblem.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.

Infact,trafficrulesarepartoftherulesandregulationscloselyrelatedtopublicorder.Withoutthem,peoplecouldnotenjoyharmonyorthecountrywouldbeinchaos.Butrulesalonedon’tsecureanorderlysociety.Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.Itiseverybody’sdutytoobservethemtokeepoursocietyinorderandgoingontherighttrack.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Inrecentyears,internetvotinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves,butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher〞andthe“CutestBaby〞.LiJiang,ahighschoolstudent,isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficercompetition,organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythin