特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第10练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第10练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·眉山一模)TheLanternFestival(alsocalledYuanxiaoFestival)is__1__the15thdayofthefirstChineselunarmonth.Itisclosely__2__(relate)totheSpringFestival.Intheolddays,peoplebegan__3__(prepare)fortheSpringFestivalabout20daysbefore.However,aftertheLanternFestival,everything__4__(return)tonormal.Yuanliterallymeansfirst,whileXiaoreferstonight.Yuanxiaoisthefirsttime__5__weseethefullmooninthenewyear.Itis__6__(tradition)atimeforfamilyreunion.Today,thedisplayingoflanternsisstillabigeventonthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonththroughoutChina.Peopleenjoythebrightlylitnight.ChengduinSouthwestChina'sSichuanProvince,forexample，__7__(hold)alanternfaireachyearintheCulturalPark.DuringtheLanternFestival,theparkisliterallyanoceanof__8__(lantern)!Manynewdesignsattractcountlessvisitors.Themosteye-catchinglanternistheDragonPole.Thisisalanternin__9__shapeofagoldendragon,spiralingupa27-meter-highpole,spewingfireworksfromitsmouth.Itisquitean__10__(impress)sight!锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第6题考查的是副词。根据副词的考查特点可知，副词可以修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。本题易错点是由于该词位于系动词is后面，部分考生易填形容词。微点：针对副词类的题目，一定要考虑该副词修饰的是哪类词还是整个句子，不要被表象所迷惑。

二、短文改错Ispentmyholidaystakecareofplants,asapartoftheschoolproject.Ichosetogrowsometomatoandplantedtheseedsinanuniquepot.Iexaminedthepoteachdayseesignsoftheplantscomingupwith.Muchtomydelight,Inoticedgreenshootsonawarmmorningandobserveditforanhour.Thepleasureofgrowingplantswassimpleindescribable.ThefactthatIwaspavingtheexistencefornewbeingsbyplantingseedswereamazing.Undoubtedly,itwasnotonlythebestschoolprojectIhaveeverdoneandanunforgettableexperience.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少冠词错用是短文改错中最难发现的一种错误，除了要分析是泛指还是特指以外，有时，还需要分析其后面单词的首字母发音是元音还是辅音。尝试找出第二句中的冠词错误。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：建议信)假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom想在他的学校以“ChinesePoetry”为主题举办一系列活动，他写信向你求助，请给他回信，提供至少两条建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升DearTom，Iamthrilledtoreceiveyourletterseekingassistance①fororganizingaseriesofactivitieswiththethemeof“ChinesePoetry”atyourschool.Hereareacoupleofsuggestionsforyou.Firstly,Irecommendorganizingapoetryrecitationcompetition.YoucaninviteChinesestudentstorecitefamousChinesepoems,whichwillgivestudentsachancetoappreciateandunderstandthebeautyofChinesepoetry②.Secondly,IsuggesthostingaworkshoponChinesepoeticforms.YoucaninviteaChinesepoetryexperttointroducedifferentformsofChinesepoetry,andguidestudentsincreatingtheirownpoems.Thisexperiencewillallowstudentstoexploretheircreativitywhilelearning③abouttheuniquecharacteristicsofChinesepoetry.Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpfulforyourevents④.Yours，LiHua学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙本文共分为三段。第一段开门见山地表明了写信的目的；第二段给出具体的建议，并且简要说明理由；第三段向对方表达自己的希望。本文思路清晰，层次分明。段落过渡自然，合理使用过渡词，句子衔接顺畅。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文以一般现在时态为主，兼用情态动词，使表达的语气更加委婉。2．文章使用了一些高级词汇，增强了表达的准确性，如thrilled,seekingassistancefor,recommend,appreciate,hosting,introduce,explore等。3．多种句式结构的使用，提升了表达的美和层次感，体现了作者良好的语言驾驭能力。如分词作定语(如①句)，定语从句(如②句)，状语从句的省略(如③句)，宾语从句(如④句)。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)DearTom，I'msogladtohearthatyouareplanningtoholdactivitiesaboutChinesepoetry.Tomakeitmoremeaningfulandunforgettable,hereissomeadvice.[First,you'dbettertointroducethehistoryofChinesepoetrybriefly.①][Itdatesfromancienttimes.②]Thenyoucouldsharethedifferentformsofpoemswithstudents.TakeTangpoetryandCiintheSongDynastyforexample,theywereverypopularamongEnglishspeakers.Last，sincepoemscanconveycertainfeelings,[toletthestudentsfeelthembyreadingsomepoemsisagoodidea③].[Irecommendthatstudentswritesomepoemsofthemown.④]Ihopeyou'llfindthesesuggestionshelpfulandwishyousuccess!Yours，LiHua(一)3个错误要避免1．固定短语错误：第三句中betterto→better2．动词时态错误：第六句中were→are3．代词错误：第八句中them→their(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．First→To_begin/start_with2．Last→Eventually3．feelings→emotions(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用定语从句合并①②句To_begin_with,_you'd_better_introduce_the_history_of_Chinese_poetry_which_dates_from_ancient_times_briefly.2．用it作形式主语改写③句It's_a_good_idea_to_let_the_students_feel_them_by_reading_some_poems.3．用主语从句改写④句It's_recommended_that_students_write_some_poems_of_their_own.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了中国传统农历节日——元宵节。1．on考查介词。由空后的the15thdayofthefirstChineselunarmonth为具体的某一天可知，此处应用介词on。2．related考查固定搭配。分析句子可知，此处考查短语berelatedto。故填related。3．preparing考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知，此处为begindoingsth.“开始做某事”(此处表示一种习惯)，应用动名词形式。故填preparing。4．returns考查动词时态和主谓一致。分析句子可知，此处为谓语动词。everything为不定代词，作主语时，谓语动词为单数形式；结合句意可知，该句陈述客观事实，为一般现在时。故填returns。5．when考查定语从句。分析句子可知，此处为关系词引导的限制性定语从句，修饰先行词thefirsttime，且关系词在从句中作时间状语，应用关系副词when引导定语从句。6．traditionally考查副词。应用副词修饰整个句子，故填traditionally。7．holds考查动词时态和主谓一致。分析句子可知，此处为谓语动词。由句意可知，该句陈述常态化事情，应用一般现在时；主语Chengdu为单数名词，故填holds。8．lanterns考查名词复数。anoceanof固定搭