第6课时　体裁类比突破(6)-新闻报道Vs通知

第6课时体裁类比突破(6)——新闻报道

通知一、“新闻报道”写作增分指导[写作题目](2023·浙江1月高考改编)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的

“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1．活动的过程；

2．收获与感想。注意：1.词数100左右；2．题目已为你写好，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUsLastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganizedbyourStudents'Union.Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.Alltheparticipantssanghighpraiseforit.学亮点写法1．学亮丽开头

开头运用事实陈述句开门见山报道了上周末的新闻事件，符合新闻报道的文体特征。2．学高级表达(1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：participatein，beginwith,characteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies,observeandcollectsamplesof,bestruckby,incredible,providefoodandshelterfor等。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：非谓语动词短语作定语organizedbyourStudents'Union；定语从句whotaughtusabout...thatexist...thatareusedfor等，这些也是文章的亮点之处。3．学精彩结尾

作者在结尾使用avaluableandenrichingexperience来总结“认识我们身边的植物”活动，用sanghighpraisefor说明参加者对这次活动评价很高，凸显了本报道的价值。4．学行文逻辑

本文第一段总体概括新闻报道事件，吸引读者了解详情。第二段描述了活动的过程及作者的收获，...beganwith...then...Throughouttheevent...also...使句与句之间紧密衔接。第三段总结活动反响与意义。

总之，本文写作高度契合新闻报道的要求，段落之间层次分明，全文逻辑连贯流畅。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：简明扼要地介绍报道的核心内容1．Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganized...2．LastSunday,somestudentstookpartinanactivityorganizedbytheStudents'Union.3．ChenLeiisaseniorteacherwhotakesphotosofoldbuildingsinthiscityinordertopreservethecity'sculturalheritage.4．At4：00amonthemorningofApril2nd,abigfirebrokeoutinZhongshanSupermarket.5．LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarymartialartsgymnasticscompetition,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.6．Withthepurpose/intentionof...,ourschoolheld...7．Recentlytheissue/problemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention/concern.8．LastSaturday,ourschoolheldtheEnglishClassicRecitationCompetitionatthelecturehalltoencourageusstudentstoappreciateEnglishculture.Ⅱ.主体部分：详细说明报道的过程和细节1．Everyday,ChenLeitakeshiscameraand...2．Ontheway，althoughsomestudentsfellbehind，theykeptrunninguntilthefinishingline.3．Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.4．Whatimpresseduswas...5．Uponourarrival,weweredividedintoseparategroupswithdifferentjobs/assignments...wewereassigneddifferenttasks.6．Theactivitykickedoffwithathoroughclean-up,whichbroughtanewlooktothecommunity.7．Whatfollowedwasa...campaignwherewe...8．Thosestudentsblessedwithbrilliantlearningcapacityassistedpupilswith...9．Asscheduled,theactivitystartedat8o'clockonSaturdaymorninganditlastedforthreehours.10．Aftertheheatedcompetition,thestudentwhogavesuperbperformancewaspresentedanawardbyourheadteacher.Ⅲ.结尾部分：对报道的认识和评价(个人感受、总结或概括)1．Theactivitybenefitedusalot/enabledusto.../Theactivitywasofgreatbenefittous./Theactivitywasbeneficialtous./Allofusthoughthighlyoftheactivity.2．Undoubtedly,notonlycanthisevent...butitcanalsoofferus...!3．Notonlydiditgetusclosetonature,butitalsogaveusrelaxationfromstudy.4．Theactivitypromoted/strengthenedthefriendshipamongus.5．Ithelpedtoraisethepublicawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.6．Apartfromknowledge,wealsolearnedtocooperatewitheachotherandcametorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.7．Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.8．Theysaiditwassuchabeautifuldaythattheywouldrememberitforever.9．Thesmilesontheelderly'sfacesconfirmedthatitwasworthwhiletodosuchajob.10．Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovideachanceforustoexercise,butitalsomakesusmorecohesive.[建写作模型·展规范形体](标题)Inorderto

(组织活动的目的),ourschoolisorganizing

(活动).Theexhibitionisheld

(时间、地点).Whatmattersmostisthat

(细节1).Mostofthestudents

(细节2),whichprovides

(细节3)．Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyou

，butalso

____________(总结).Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,andeverystudent

(推荐)．二、“书面通知”写作增分指导[写作题目](2018·全国卷Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing

Together，内容包括：1．短片内容：学校的发展；2.放映时间、地点；3．欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Notice__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]NoticeTomakestudentshaveafullunderstandingofourschool,anoutstandingEnglishshortmovie,Growing

Together,willbescreenedinthelecturehallat2：00pmonSeptember28th.Themovie,whichintroducesthehistoryofourschool,iscertaintobeinstructiveandfullofemotion.It'sagoodwayforustoknowwhenourschoolwascreated,whatithasexperiencedandhowithasachievedsuccess.Moreover,youarewelcometohaveadiscussionandwritedownyourowncommentsafterwatchingtheshortmovie.Don'tmissthispreciousopportunitytowitnessthegloryofourschool.TheStudents'Union学亮点写法1．学亮丽开头

本通知首段运用被动语态，凸显了被告知的活动，语言简洁明了，清楚告知了活动的目的、时间和地点，符合书面通知的语言风格。2．学高级表达(1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：haveafullunderstandingof,outstanding,instructiveandfullofemotion,bewelcometo,witnessthegloryof等。(2)准确运用高级句式，如：非限制性定语从句whichintroduces...；It作形式主语It'sagoodwayforusto...；并列宾语从句whenourschool...,whatithasexperiencedandhowit...；祈使句Don'tmiss...；不定式短语作定语towitnessthegloryofourschool...等，使文章语法结构灵活丰富，恰当合理。3．学精彩结尾

本通知结尾选用祈使句Don'tmissthispreciousopportunity...，语言简洁有力，号召力强。4．学语言风格

本文语言平实、准确，易于理解。内容简约，没用大量的笔墨去添加细节或渲染感情，完全契合书面通知对语言的要求。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]Ⅰ.开头部分：介绍活动目的、时间和地点1．Inordertoenrichourafter-schoollife,weshallholdaparty/giveaconcert/organizeanactivityat...(time)on...(date)in...(place)．2．Withtheaimofsatisfyingstudents'thirstfortheknowledge,ourschoolisgoingtohold...3．Anexcitingevent...isaroundthecorner.4．Themeeting/lecturewillbeheldinthelibrary/stadium/auditoriumat...(time)．Ⅱ.主体部分：介绍活动内容1．Thelecturewilllastabout...andalltheteachersandstudentsareexpectedtoattend.Noaskingforleavewithoutspecialreasons.2．Comehereontimeandbringapenandanotebookwithyou.Youarerequiredtotakenotesduringthelecture.3．It'sagoodwayforustoknowwhen...,what...andhow...4．Anyonewhowouldliketotakepartshouldcometo...5．Thecontentsmayrangefrom...to...Meanwhile,participantsmustseetoitthat...Ⅲ.结尾部分：号召参加活动1．Ifyouareinterestedin.../arefree/wouldliketotakepartin...,pleasecomeandsignupforit.2．Don'tmissthispreciousopportunitytowitness...3．Lookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipation!4．Takeanactivepartinit,andwishyougoodluck![建写作模型·展规范形体]NoticeInorderto

(目的),

(活动)willbeheld

(时间、地点).Eachclassisencouraged

(详情1).Thosewhowouldliketotakepartinthecompetitionaresupposedto

(详情2).Allthestudentsofourschool

(详情3).Thetopsixwinnersofeachgrade

(详情4)．Lookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipation.TheStudents'Union三、“口头通知”写作增分指导[写作题目]你校学生会将为来访的英国朋友举办一个晚会活动，请你代表学生会写一份学校广播通知，欢迎大家参加。要点如下：1．欢迎来访的英国朋友；2．晚会活动的时间、地点；3．晚会活动的内容。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]Boysandgirls,Attention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.TheStudents'UnionisgoingtoholdapartyonSaturdayevening,August15,towelcomeourfriendsfromEngland.ThepartywillbeheldintheroofgardenoftheMainBuilding.Itwillbeginat7：30pm.Therewillbemusic,dancing,singing,gamesandexchangeofgifts.Pleasebringasmallgift.Remembertowrapitup,signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgoodwishes.Don'tforget:7：30,Saturdayevening,roofgarden,MainBuilding.There'ssuretobealotoffun.Everybodyiswelcome.That'sall.Thankyou.学亮点写法1．学亮丽开头

本通知开头用Attention,please？引起同学们的注意，语言简洁具有互动性。2．学高级表达

本文多处运用不定式形式表将来，表达清楚明了，如：Ihaveanannouncementtomake...towelcomeourfriends...towrapitup...tobealotoffun.3．学精彩结尾

本通知结尾运用了祈使句Don'tforget:7：30...对通知重点内容再次强调，凸显了此口头通知的应用性。4．学语言风格

此通知为口头形式传达的内容，开头和结尾用了固定的套语，主体段落语言口语化，句式结构较简单。[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]常见口头通知的称呼：Ladiesandgentlemen!/Boysandgirls！/Hello,everyone!/Goodmorning,everyone!Ⅰ.开头部分：提醒听众注意1．MayIhave/callyourattention,please？/Pleasebequiet,everyone.2．Attention,please,everybody!3．Ihaveanannouncementtomake./Ihavesomethingtoannounce.4．Iamgladtotellyousomethingimportant.5．Ihavegoodnewsforyouall.Ⅱ.主体部分：具体详情1．Therewillbeatalkthisafternoon.2．TheStudents'Unionhasdecidedthat...3．Weshallhavealectureon...4．Alecturewillbegivenat7：00thiseveningin...5．Ithasbeendecidedthatwe'llpayavisitto...6．Pleasebepresentontime./Everyoneisrequiredtobepresentontime.7．Makesurethatyou.../Besureto...8．Thosewhoareinterestedinitarewarmlywelcome.9．Allthestudentsarewelcome.10．Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventahugesuccess.Ⅲ.结尾部分：期望与号召1．Lookingforwardtoyouract