Unit2Let'stalkteens主题写作指导应用文建议信讲义高考英语一轮复习牛津译林版（2020）高中英语

Let’stalkteens主题写作指导GrowingpainsLanguageBankmonsymptomsofgrowingpains(parents)don’tunderstandthem/valuetheireffort(parents)havetoomuchcontrolovertheirlife(parents)expecttoomuchofthem(期望过高)Haveunrealistic(不切实际的)expectationsoftheirchildrenFailtomeet/liveuptotheirparents’expectationsStruggletokeepupwiththeirclassmatesinstudiesStruggletogetalongwithclassmates/friendsFeelleftout/isolated(孤立)byclassmatesStruggletobalancetheiracademicworkloadwithextracurricular(课外的)activitiesHavedifficultystayingawayfromdigitaldistractions(数字干扰)Finditchallengingtomaintaininterestandenthusiasm(热情)intheirstudiesBefaced/confronted(面临)withgreatstressandanxietyfromstudy/examsSuggestionsforaddressingparentchildtensionsForparents:Showconstant(持续的)concern/loveandsupportforteensShowrespectforteenagers’privacy(隐私)/opinionsandideasListentoteenagersactivelywithoutjudgmentSetclearboundaries(界限)andruleswhileallowingroomfornegotiation(协商)AvoidconstantcriticismandfocusonpraisingtheireffortsandachievementsCreateopportunitiesforqualityfamilytimesuchregularmealsandsharedactivitiesDon’tmakeallthedecisionsforteenagersDon’tcontroleverything/allowteenagerstohavecontrolovertheirownlivesDon’tignorechildren’sinnerthoughtsDon’tattachtoomuchimportanceto(过分重视)scoresDon’tpushthemtoohard(逼迫太紧)instudiesDon’texpecttoomuchofteensForteenagers:keepabalancebetweenrelaxationandstudyexpressgratitude(感恩)toparents/showappreciationforparents’effortsandguidanceExpressyourthoughtsandfeelingscalmlyandrespectfullymunicatewithparentslikefriendsTrytounderstandyourparents’pointofviewbyputtingyourselfintheirshoes(设身处地)Takepartinsharedactivitiesofthewholefamily/ofclassmatesDon’tblame/quarrelwithourparentsforoverprotecting/misunderstandingyouDon’tturnadeafearto(充耳不闻)parents’suggestionsDon’tlosetemper(发脾气)easilyMakescientificplansfordailytasksandsticktothemTurntoteachersforhelpwhenfacedwithlearningdifficultiesBeopentoothers’criticismBefriendlyandhelpfultoclassmateswhenTakeresponsibilityforyourownactionsandmistakesAboutLettersofAdvice(建议信)OutlinePara.1:写信原因（题干背景信息介绍）+写信目的Para.2:建议的具体内容+建议原因（切忌假大空，要具体、可行、有针对性和说服力）Para.3:希望采纳建议+表达美好祝愿Usefulsentences[Thebeginningpart]呈现问题，表明写作目的：1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.../conveymyconcernabout...2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.3)Inresponsetoyourlettertellingmeyouhopeto...,Ihavesomeideasforyou.4)I’msorrytohearyou'rehavingdifficulty/troublein...;I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows…[Themainbody]建议内容并说明建议好处：1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...,sothat...2)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...Inthatway,...3)Whynotdo...?/Whataboutdoing...?/It’sstronglyadvised/suggestedthatyoushould...Thus,...4)IfIwereyou,Iwould.../Itwouldbeagoodchoiceto...Bydoingthat,...[Theendingpart]希望建议有用或被接受。1)Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.2)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.3)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.4)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Sample假定你是李华，你的朋友Rebecca写信告诉你，她的母亲过度关注她的学习，希望她把时间都用在学习上，她感到压力很大，心情低落。请给她写一封信，给出你的建议，帮助她摆脱困境。要点如下：

安慰对方；2.

提出建议(注意：1.

词数100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数）；2.

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。)DearRebecca,Iamsorrytohearthat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Warmregards,LiHua【写作点拨】一、审题定调本写作任务要求给朋友写一封建议信，属于应用文。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议，并说明理由，以便让对方接受自己的想法或主张。建议信要给出写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。语气要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。谋篇布局主题就如何解决和父母矛盾给朋友建议体裁应用文人称以第一、第二人称为主时态以一般现在时为主布局第一部分：进行安慰，表明写作意图；第二部分：根据提示，给出解决朋友与父母矛盾的建议及理由；第三部分：表达希望和祝愿（希望朋友考虑建议）。SampleappreciationDearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelinganxiousaboutthepressurefromyourmother.I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Youshouldletherknowthatyouappreciatehersupportandconcern,butrelaxationandleisurearealsoanessentialpartofahealthyandfulfilled（充实的）life.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Inaddition,ifpossible,youcouldinvolveyourteachersorschoolcounselorsintheconversation.Theycanprovideinsightsintoyourprogressandreassureyourmotheraboutyourdedicationtoyourstudies.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyouaddresstheproblemswithyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Yourssincerely,

LiHua[plus]DearRebecca,I'msorrytohearthatyou'refeelingoverwhelmed(不堪重负的)bythepressureofyourmother’sexcessive（过度的）caresaboutyoureducation,butIcanunderstandhowitmightfeelstiflingattimes.Firstandforemost,knowthatyourwellbeingisofutmost(最大的)importance.It'spletelynaturaltoindulgeinhobbies,listentomusic,orspendtimewithfriends.Balancingacademicswithpersonaltimeisnottoomuchtoaskfor,andit'sanessentialpartofnurturing(培养)ahealthyandfulfilled(充实的)life.Moreover,Iwouldsuggesthavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourmotheraboutyourfeelings.Letherknowthatyouappreciatehersupport,butalsoexpresstheimportanceoffindingmomentsforrelaxationandleisure.municationiskey,anditwillhelpherunderstandyourperspective.Ihopethesesuggestionshelpyouinnavigatingthissituation（应对处境）withyourmother.Wishingyoustrengthandunderstandinginthisjourney.Warmregards,LiHuaWritingpractice[Practice1]假定你是李华，你的朋友Laura写信告诉你，她的父母总是不让她和朋友出去玩，过分控制她的生活，她对此很苦恼。请你按照一下要点给她回一封信。1.

安慰对方2.

提出建议注意：1.

词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数);2.

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLaura,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua[Practice2]假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter因迷恋游戏而被父母批评，他为此写信向你抱怨。请给他写一封回信，要点包括：DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaWritingpractice参考范文[Practice1]DearLaura,I’msorrytohearthatyoufeelstressedaboutyourparents’strongdesireforcontrol.Icanunderstandhowyoumightbefeeling,soIwouldliketogiveyousomesuggestionsfrommyperspective.Tobeginwith,yourparents'intentionsarerootedinloveandadesiretokeepyousafe,sooneapproach（方法）couldbetohaveanopenandhonestconversationwiththemaboutyourfeelings.Whatyoushoulddoistopursue（追求）morefreedomwhileassuringthemthatyoucanshouldertheresponsibilityandmakesafechoices.Additionally,youcanconsiderinvolvingyourparentsinyourplans.Forexample,youcantellthemwhereyou'regoing,whoyou'llbewith,andwhatactivitiesyou'llbeengagingin（参与）.Thisnotonlyreassures（使安心）thembu