读后续写独自迎战后的收获讲义高三英语一轮复习写作专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusiness—asmallgrocerystoredownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstarttofitintothesophisticatedlife.Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.However,myselfdoubtheldmeback,"Idon'thaveanyspecialskillstoshare."Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewnear.Icouldn'tshaketheeupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthegrocerystoreafterclass."Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?"Shegrinned,"Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewayhome.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere."Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune."Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefoodbank?"Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup."Abigoccasion."Thenalightbulbseemedtogooninherhead."Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou'llbeaperfectmatch."Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafterschool.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.Paragraph2:

Finallycamethebigmoment.二、下水思路1.确定主题：“我”是一个害羞内向的女孩，在同班同学Emma以及妈妈的支持与鼓励下，准备参加支持当地食物银行的才艺表演。可在表演前一天，Emma因为严重的胃病不能参加。“我”经过思想斗争，克服恐惧与自我怀疑，最终独唱表演成功，为宣传当地食物银行作出贡献。2.时空变化：时空变化较大，阅读理解时(黄色标出部分为原文关键信息)，尤其要注意原文最后一段最后一句“But

thedaybeforetheperformance,Emma

called

thatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.”。可以确定地点在家里，时间是表演前的一天，注意时间地点与下文的衔接，否则容易离题。续写第一段情节在家里发生；续写第二段故事情节应该是第二天在市大厅发生。3.续写难点：没有具体内容，词数不足；主题不明确，上下衔接存在问题。建议：学会欣赏，在范文情景中积累相关续写素材。【表达积累】1.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadto

takeafreshstart

tofitintothe

sophisticated

citylife.2.StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschool

aseveryonebeganpreparingfor

thebigday.

Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.

However,

myselfdoubtheldmeback,“Idon’thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”3.Daysturnedintoweeks,

andthetalentshow

drewcloser.4.Emma,

withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittletalent.

SinceEmmahadtheworld’sprettiestvoice,

Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.5.Then

alightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.6.Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwe

werethinkingalike.7.Emmacalledthatshehad

anacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.1.作为一个害羞而内向的女孩，我不得不重新开始以适应复杂的城市生活。2.鼓励学生在国庆节当天在市政厅向公众展示自己的独特才能。兴奋的嗡嗡声充斥着学校，每个人都开始为重要的日子做准备。在内心深处，我内心充满着好奇心和参与欲望的火花。然而，我的自我怀疑阻止了我，“我没有任何特殊的技能可以分享。3.时间渐渐过去，才艺表演越来越近。4.艾玛，这个性极佳和人气爆棚的女孩，承认了我的小才华。由于艾玛拥有世界上最漂亮的声音，我觉得自己备受命运的青睐。5.然后她的脑袋里灵光一现。6.她朝我们眨眨眼，似乎知道我们在想什么。7.艾玛打说她突然肚子疼，无法完成表演。三、下水续写Paragraph1:

Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.

Gloomyanddesperate,Isatsilentlyintheroomforwhatseemedlikeages,unsureofwhattodonext.ThenIstartedtopaceupanddownlikeacagedanimal,debatingwithmyselfwhetherornottogoonstagealone.“Howcanthisbepossible?”Ithoughttomyself.Fearandanxietycoursedthroughmyveins,anditseemedthatallourhardworkwasinvain.ButthenthethoughtofthesupportandencouragementfromEmmaandmymomcamefloodingbacktome.ItwasatthemomentthatIrealizedthatIcouldn'tletselfdoubtholdmeback.Filledwithdetermination,Iresolvedtoproceedwiththeperformancebymyself.Paragraph2:

Finallycamethebigmoment.

AsIsteppedontothestage,Icouldfeelmyheartthumpingwildlyinmychest.Glancingaroundthehall,Itookadeepbreathandbegantosing.Surprisingly,allmyworriessuddenlydisappearedandawaveofconfidencewashedoverme.Iwaspletelyimmersedinthejoyofperformingandtheaudiencewasspellboundbythepassioninmyvoice.WhenIfinishedmysong,thewholehallburstintoapplause.TearsofjoywelledupinmyeyesasEmmapresentedabigbunchofflowerstome,andmymumstoodnear,winkingatus.Fromthatdayforward,Ilearnedthatbyoveringfearsandselfdoubts,wecanmakeadifference.【参考范文】Iwaspletelyknockedoutbythenews.

WithoutEmma’svoicetoguideme,Iwould

definitelymessup

andthiswasnothoweverything

wassupposedtogo!AsIstoodthere,feeling

ataloss,

agentletouchonmyshoulderbroughtmebacktoreality.

Itwasmymom,

wearingafortingsmile.

After

havingabriefideaofmystory,

shesaid

inafirmtone,"You’veworkedsohard.Youcanmakeitonyourown."Memoriesofcountlessrehearsalcamefloodingback,

drowningmyfearsandlosses.

Swingingintoaction,

Iadjustedmyperformancetoasolo,practicinginnotime.Finallycamethebigmoment.

Takingadeepbreath,Isteppedontothestage,

envelopedintheglowofthelights.

Atfirst,myvoice

trembledwithnervousness,

butasthesongprogressed,myconfidence

soared.

I

pouredmyemotionsintotheperformance,lettingmyvoicecarrymyfeeli