unit4-Wildlife protection (writing) 写作-保护动物

写作专题突破【写作要求】假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议；请求该报帮着呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。要求：词数120左右。2021/5/91【审题谋篇】第一自然段为总写：写明写信目的，你的感受(应用一般现在时态)。第二段：反映你的所见所闻，应用一般过去时态。第三段：你的建议，应用一般现在时和将来时态。最后一段：请求该报帮助。本文应用第一人称；可以用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。2021/5/92【写作要点】1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园的经历。(1)____________________youaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.(2)HereIwritetotellyouabout________________inthezoolastSunday.答案：(1)I’mwritingtotell(2)whatIsaw2021/5/932．有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好的对待。(1)Thereweremanyanimals________________inthezooand________theywerenotbeingtreatedwell.(2)Manyanimals________________andthey________________treatedwell.(3)______________manyanimals______________werenotbeingtreatedwell.2021/5/94答案：(1)kept；itseemedthat(2)werekeptinthezoo；seemednottobe(3)Itseemedthat；keptinthezoo3．首先要教育人们：动物是我们的朋友。动物对人们生活的重要性。(1)Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowthat____________________and____________________.2021/5/95(2)__________，weshouldtellpeople_____________animalsandthattheyareourfriends.(3)_______________，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttopeople’slife.答案：(1)animalsareourfriends；importanttopeople’slife(2)Firstly；theimportanceof(3)Firstofal2021/5/964．任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。(1)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(2)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(3)____________________badlyshouldbefined.答案：(1)Anyonewhotreatsanimals(2)Whoevertreatsanimals(3)Thosewhotreatanimals2021/5/975．我建议把动物放回到自然界去。(1)Isuggestthat____________________innature.(2)________________isthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.(3)________________thattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.答案：(1)thoseanimalsshouldbesetfree(2)Mysuggestion(3)Itismysuggestion2021/5/98【连句成篇】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2021/5/99【佳作欣赏】DearEditor，HereIwritetotellyouaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear’shead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.2021/5/910Hereiswhatweshoulddo.Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttous.Secondanyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last，ifpeoplecan’tstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua2021/5/911【类文点津】写一封反映问题或提意见、征求意见的信1．一般书信体的组成：正式信件(多用于外交、商务、社交等场合)：开头(start)，一般用Dear或Dear＋姓/身份/职务等，如Deareditor，Dearmayor，orDearSmith.正文(body)：正式信件讲话要含蓄一点，用词要谨慎一些。结尾(ending)：Yourssincerely，Sincerely，Sincerelyyours，Yourstruly，Yoursfaithfully等较正式用语。2021/5/912非正式信件(多用于亲友、同学、同事之间)开头：Hi，Mydear；Dearest等。正文：因彼此情谊笃厚，讲话可以直率一点、开门见山，意见要中肯。结束语：Love，Cheers，Regards，Bestwishes，Yours等相对随便的词语。2．常用表达：反映现象的常用开头句式：I’mwritingtotellyouthat...Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...2021/5/913Manypeopleareworriedabout...Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...提出措施的常用句式：Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...We’drathernot...butdo...We’dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.2021/5/914征求对方支持的常用表达：Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople...Wouldyoupleasehelpusto...by...?We’llappreciateitifyoucan...Inorderto...，weneed......sothat...IhopethatIcangethelpfrom...Iexpectthatyoucan...2021/5/915Asweknow，thenumberofsome①wildplantsandanimalshasalready②decreasedandsomeanimalshavealready③diedout.Soitishightimeforusto④paymuch⑤attentiontowildlifeprotection.Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeing⑥indangerofdisappearing？Firstly，weshould⑦protectthem⑧frombeing⑨hunted.It’sof⑩importancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends.Thosewho词语串串练2021/5/916wanttogetlarge⑪incomefromhuntinganimalsfortheir⑫furshouldbepunished.Secondly，somenature⑬reservesand⑭zonesshouldbeset⑮sothatanimalscanlive⑯inpeace.Itisalsonecessaryto⑰employsomepeopletolookafterthem.Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbe⑱harmedmoreoften.Thirdly，thehabitofeatingthemeatofsome⑲endangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof.⑳Accordingtosomereports，somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow.Thegovernmentshould2021/5/9172021/5/918正如我们大家所知，野生动植物的数目已经减少，一些动物也已经灭绝了。所以是时候我们该密切注意保护野生动植物了。但是我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝的动物面临消失的危险呢？首先，我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀。教育人们把动物看作是我们的朋友很重要。那些想通过猎杀动物获取它们的毛皮而获得暴利(income收入)的人应该受到惩罚。第二，应该设立一些自然保护区和保护带，为20