读后续写亲情类我的妈妈是个英雄讲义高考英语作文复习专项

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的短文Mymomhatestocook,She'drathertinkerwith(=)hermotorcycleorpracticeknottyingforrockclimbing.ShealsospendsalotoftimewithmeEverymorningMomtakesmetoschool.lputonmypurplehelmetandclimbonto.TheBeast.Mom'spassion,aftermeandhermotorcycle,isclimbing.lwouldsay"rockclimbing",butwedon'thaveanylargerocksormountainsnearby.lusedtofeelembarrassedthatmymomwassodifferent.NowI'veetoappreciateMomforwhosheisandnotjustbecauseshe'sahero.ltallstartedwithacookingproject.EverystudentinMrsMaitlandt'shomeeconomicsclasswassupposedtocreateanoriginaldish,andthenpresentitatschoolthefollowingTuesdaymorning.lbeggedMomtohelpme.Shegavein,butnotuntillpromisedtohelphercleanTheBeast.Wespenthoursinthekitchen.Wepreparedhotdogsandhardboiledeggsrolledincoconut.Iwassatisfied.Thebigdaycame.Ourparentsweresupposedtobringourfoodtotheclassroomateleveno’clock.AsMomdroppedmeoffthatmorning,lmadeherrepeat,Iwillnotforgetthecake.Iwilnotforgetthecake.”lwatchedherrepeatingitasshewentaway.Aftermathclass,weallfileduptothethirdfloor.IlookedaroundforMom.Shewasn'tthere.SammyPingle'sfatherhadbroughtsomesortofchickendish.PamelaBeanandheraunthadapitcherofliquidwithlemonsfloatinginit.JanetGreelyandhermomproudlystoodnearanenormousfruitsaladtoppedwithsomemarshmallowsWhereareyou,Mom?Iwondered.Theminutestickedbyandmoregrownupsappeared,bringingmoretastydishes.FinallyheardthedistantroaroftheBeast.Iracedtothewindow.lwasastonished.Momwasemptyhanded!lmetheratthedoor.Youforgotit,didn'tyou?”Mom’seyeswideopen.“I'msor_"Shecouldn'tfinishherapology;aclangingalarmcutheroff.注意:1续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。MrsMaitlandshouted,Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!"AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.材料分析:这篇读后续写以人物为线索展开，作者的母亲是一位与众不同的母亲，她讨厌做饭，却爱捣鼓她的摩托车和攀岩，这一度让作者感到非常尴尬。但是现在作者却开始欣赏自己的妈妈不仅仅因为她是一个英雄，这一改变的起因在于一个烹饪活动。然后作者描述了在MrsMaitland的家政课上，老师要求每个学生准备一道原创菜看，作者与妈妈精心准备好菜肴，并反复提醒妈妈记得带上他们的菜肴，结果妈妈还是空着手出现了。就当妈妈想对此表示道歉时，火警警报器响了。故事容易读懂，但是可能会因为对两端首句理解上的困难，造成跑题。故事线：Momhatestocookbutlovesmeandhermotorcycleandrockclimbing.Ibeggedmymomtocreateanoriginaldishandsaladandwespenthoursinthekitchenmakingthedish.Mom'droppedmeoffthatmorningandImademompromisethatshewillnotforgetthecake.Otherstudents’parentsbroughttheirdishesbutmomemptyhanded.感情线：Embarrasseddelighted/satisfiedworriedeagerdisappointed研读两段的给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索,确定续写方向Para1:MrsMaitlandshouted,“Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!Whywasthereafire?Howdidwefeel?Whatdidmymom,myclassmatesandIdo?Para2:AsMsayaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.Whosescreamwasit?Whydidhe/shescream?Whatdidmymomdo?续写方向：第一段：可知，第一段会记叙为什么会着火再结合文章内容以及第二段首句MrsMaitland在点名可判断，第一段还应描写大家是怎样跑出那栋楼的，大家的感受应该是恐惧和害怕的。第二段：根据第二段首句AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance.weheardascreamfromthebuilding.本段可能描写这是谁的尖叫声，他身上发生了什么事，根据上文我变得开始欣赏妈妈不仅是因为她是一个英雄，得知这一段应描写妈妈做了什么事情，根据正能量原则，妈妈应该是去救了这个.语言积累：befearful/afraid/scaredof害怕goblank(大脑)突然一片空白go/turnpale脸色惨白afloodoffearwellsup/springsupins.心里涌起一阵恐惧tremble/shakewithfear/terror吓得发抖chokewithfear因为害怕而哽咽heartbeatsviolently心跳的得厉害standopenmouthedwithhorror吓得目瞪口呆范文：MrsMaitlandshouted,"Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!”Weallheadedforthestairs.WefoundoutlaterthatJackhadbeenheatingoilforpopcorn.He'dstartedtalkingtohisclassmateandhadforgottenaboutthehotoil.Whenhecametoputsugaronthecorn,therewereflamesleapingfromthepan.Everyonepiledintotheparkinglot.Smokestartedtoeoutofoneofthethirdfloorwindows.Momheldmyhandtightly.Iforgotaboutmycake.AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.WelookedupandsawJenny,Help!"shecriedout,“I'mtrapped!"Momdisappeared.ShegrabbedherclimbingropefromTheBeastandrantowardthebuilding.Momclimbedtothewindowandsecuredoneendofherrope,thenloweredashakyJennysafelytotheground.Assoonasshewasfree,everyonecheered.Whocaresifmymomhatestocook?升级范文：MrsMaitlandshouted,"Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!”HardlyhadweheardMrsMaitland’swordswhenallofuscrowdedforthestairslikeaflood,screamingandstaggering.Asenseofhorrorcreptuponmerippingacrossmywholebody,mybloodrunningcoldandmyeverysinglehairstandingonend.WefoundoutlaterthatJackhadbeenheatingoilforpopcornbutheforgotaboutit,whichresultedinflamesleapingfromthepan.Everyonepiledintotheparkinglot.Wesawflameswiththickblacksmokeingoutfromthethirdfloor.Andwealsoheardtheexplosionofthegastankmixedwiththenoisysoundsfromshatteringwindows.Momheldmyhandtightlyforforgettingaboutmycake.AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.WelookedupandsawJennyHelp!"shecriedout’I'mtrapped!"Unfortunately,theflamesalreadycoveredonesideofthebuilding,longskinnytonguesoforangeslitheringoutthewindow,tryingtoreachtheroof.Whenallofusfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch,Momdisappeared.Grabbi