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和朋友骑车游玩--野外遇险目录CONTENTS1读原文

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填表格2读P1P2首句

定情节发展列大纲

两段12句法3写句式

招招升级45写句式

招招升级

水到渠成

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Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.

ThenMac

heard

quickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.

Mac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,he

firedthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,2017年浙江卷真题原文itwasbyhissideagain.Thenit

attackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,it

fellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase.

Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.

Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Mac

heardalargevehiclebehindhim.He

pulledinfrontofitasthewolf

wascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.n.特点

（adj./v./短语）（主要）角色1aprimaryschoolteacher（主要）角色2Mac’sfriendscyclepartners（主要）角色3PaulandBeekydriveacarpassingby背景事件Macwithhisfriendswascyclingwhenhemetawolf.微情节

动作(v.)/Macpedaledalongalone.(p1)Awolfwascatchingupwithhim.(p2-3)Mactriedtogetridofit.(p4)AcarwasdrivingtowardsMac.(p5)

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定情节发展Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim._______________________________________________________Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived._______________________________________________________2Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived.P1大意P1角色续写思路PaulandBeekyMacwolf

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定情节发展HowdidPaulandBeekyhelpMactofightagainstwolf.PaulandBeeky;Mac;wolf2②Howdidtheyfeel?①Stopingthecar,whatdidtheydo?

③HowdidMacfeel?orWhatdidMacdo?④Howdidthewolfreact?P2大意P2角色续写思路

动作(v.)

情绪(adj.)

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定情节发展Thetwocyclistsjoinedtheminfightingwiththewolf.twocyclistswolf

2①Seeingthescene,whatdidtheydo?Howdidtheyfeel?

③Howdidtheywonfinally?

Andhowdidtheyfeel?②Whatdidwolfdo?Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived.twocyclists;Mac;wolf列大纲：两段12句法3

列大纲：两段12句法

1）

2）3）4）5）6）7）

8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？

3Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived.

列大纲：两段12句法1）固定

2）3）4）5）6）固定

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）固定

结局/升华主旨续写首段首句续写二段首句承接首段首句3Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived.

列大纲：两段12句法1）

2）3）4）5）6）

7）固定

8）9）10）11）12）

Thewolfdisappeared.PaulandBeckyhelped.TheyfoundthedangeroussituationTheyallfoughtagainstwolf.PaulandBeckyfeltnervous.

Theyapproachedtothewolfbravely.Thewolfturneditsheadback.

Macjumpedoutofbike.Theyjoinedtofight.Moreandmorecarscame.Morepeoplehelped.Thewolfsteppedback.3Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwo

cyclists

arrived.Thewolfdisappeared.TheyfoundthedangeroussituationThewolfturneditsheadback.

Theyjoinedtofight.Morepeoplehelped.Thewolfsteppedback.写句式

招招升级4Step4.写句式

招招升级

e.g.:1）Withnothinginthehand,theyfeltnervousanddidn'tdaretofightagainstthewolf.招式1：

with复合结构

with复合结构：with+n.+doing/done/todo/介词短语/adj./adv.Step4.写句式

招招升级

e.g.:2）Atthesametime,thewolfalsosawthemandturneditsheadback,howlingangrilytowardsPaulandBecky.招式2：

非谓语动词常用句式：①...,doing②Doing...,.....③Havingdone...,...

写句式

招招升级

e.g.:3）

Theyfoundthedangeroussituation,wherethreemencircledthewolf.招式3：

定语从句“先行词n.+关系代词/关系副词+定语从句”

4

写句式

招招升级

e.g.:4）Macthenjumpedoffthebicycleandwasreadytofightagainstthewolf.5）Mac'sfriendsalsojumpedofftheirbicyclesandjoinedthefightwiththewolf.招式4：

动作链（V1,V2andV3）（V1andV2）

将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足

4

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范文赏析5Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.PaulandBeckygotoutofthecarimmediatelytogivethehelp.Withnothinginthehand,theyfeltnervousanddidn'tdaretofightagainstthewolf.However,theystillapproachedtothewolfbravely.Atthesametime,thewolfalsosawthemandturneditsheadback,howlingangrilytowardsPaulandBecky.Macthenjump