英语基础写作-人物描写

WelcomeToOurClassWelcometoourEnglishwritingclass人物简介的一般步骤

therightorder(1)概况age,sex,birth-place,background(2)外貌／性格appearance,character(3)教育education(4)生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(intheorderoftime)(5)评价evaluation【Usefulwordsandexpressions】年龄、出生1）二十岁的时候_____________________2）于1987年5月生在北京__________________________________attheageof20wasborninBeijinginMay1987【Usefulwordsandexpressions】2.外貌、性格特征：1）漂亮__________________________________2）1.80米高_________________________3）勤奋的________________________beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking1.80meterstall/inheightdiligent/hardworking3.教育：1）努力学习_______________________2）获得硕士学位_________________________3）毕业_______________workhardathisstudiesreceive/gainamaster’sdegreegraduatefrom4.经历：1）致力于______________________2）有……天赋_____________________devoteoneselftohaveagift/talentfor5.评价：①做出了……贡献_________________________

②对…的评价很高_______________________makegreatcontributionstospeak/thinkhighlyof

Let'sdoafastreading:

Justguessthepersondescribedinthe

followingsentences.1.Bornonthe13thofDecember,1989inAmerica,shewasbroughtupasthefirstchildandonlydaughterofAudreaandScottSwift.2.Showinginterestinmusic,shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.3.Whenhersecondalbum(唱片)“Fearless”wasreleasedin2008,shegottheworld'sattention.4.Shebecomesverypopularwiththeyoung,whichallowedhertorecievemanyhonorsincludingthe52ndGrammyAwardin2010.

5.Heruniquecountrymusicstyleandrefreshingimageisunparalleled(无法匹敌的)byothersandshecontinuestomakebreakthroughsasshetakesachanceontryingnewthings.TaylorSwiftHowtodescribeapersonlet’sanalyzethesentencesinthepassage.

①Bornonthe13thofDecember,1989inAmerica,TaylorSwift,afamoussinger,wasbroughtupasthefirstchildandonlydaughterofAudreaandScottSwift.

分词结构

同位语身份与概况尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺②Showinginterestinmusic,shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.

③

When

Taylor’ssecondalbum(唱片）wasreleased（发行）in2008,shegottheworld’sattention.④

Shebecomesverypopularwiththeyoung,

whichallowedhertorecievemanyhonorsincludingthe52ndGrammyAwardin2010.经历分词结构状语从句定语从句注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼尽量用复合句,如定语从句等，润色文章⑤Heruniquecountrymusicstyleandrefreshingimageareunparalleled（无法匹敌的）byothersandshecontinuestomakebreakthroughs

（突破）asshetakesachance（冒险）on

tryingnewthings.评价evaluation注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组A.巧用同位语结构,使文章简洁，通顺Tom,themonitorofourclass,alwayshelpsotherclassmatestosolvetheirproblemsinstudy.1)钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一。ZhongNanshan,

,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.*语法，句法高分tipsoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina2）为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔,出生在1983年的上海.LiuXiang,___________________________,wasborninShanghaiin1983.3)莫言，当代著名作家，在2012年10月11日获得诺贝尔文学奖。MoYan,_____________________________,wontheNobelPrizeforLiteratureonOctober11th,2012.aconfidentandoptimisticboyafamouscontemporarywriter思考：什么时候可用同位语？职位头衔年龄性别B.巧用分词结构，使文章精炼eg.对音乐有浓厚的兴趣，泰勒在十岁就开始在卡拉OK比赛和节日活动演唱自编的歌曲。

Taylorshowedgreatinterestinmusic.Shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.

1）获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国深造。________________________________fromZhongshanUniversity,shewentabroadtofurtherherstudy.2）姚明1980年出生于上海，是世界著名篮球运动员。YaoMing,_______________________,isaworldfamousbasket