读后续写+悄悄拆开圣诞礼物的惩罚+练习 高三英语二轮复习写作专项

高三上学期第一次诊断考试英语读后续写题目:阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasChristmasEve.AndmysisterandIdecidedtoopenourpresentsbeforeourmomgothomefromwork.Momusuallycamehomeaboutanhourafterwegothomefromschool.Sowethoughttherewasplentyoftimeforustohaveasecretlookatthegiftsunderthetree.Sincemysisterwasolder,shewasincharge.SheopenedthefirstgiftwhileIwasorderedtostandguardatthebigwindowofourfrontroom.Iwastoreportthepossiblecomingofourmother.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn'talwayskeepmyeyesonthewindow.Myheadmovedfromthewindowtomysisterandbacktothewindowagain.ItseemedthatIwaswatchingaping-pongmatch.“Allright!”mysistershouted.Shepulledoutajewelryboxandsaid,“Youknowwhatthatmeans,don'tyou?”Ishouted,jumpingupanddown,“Yeah,it'smyturn!”“No,”shesaid.“Itmeansthattheremustbesomejewelryhere.”Iwatchedmysistercheckingthepresentsunderthetree.Shewastryingtofindonesmallenoughtobenecklace.“Hey,that'snotfair!It'smyturn!”Isaid,feelingupset.However,shejustreplied,“AreyouwatchingforMom?”Icouldn'tdoanythingexceptstandingguardassheopenedpresentafterpresent.Finally,mysister'scuriositywassatisfied.Andwhenshehadfinishedwrappingherlastpresentbackup,wetradedplaces.MyheartpoundedsohardandIcouldfeelmypalmssweatandmythroattighten.MysisterremindedmetobecarefulsoIwouldn'ttearthewrapper.AndsheremindedmetowrapthepresentbackupthesamewaythatIhadfoundit.Afterunwrappingfewpresents,Ifounditmuchfastertoopenoneendofa

presentandlookinside.“It'scool!MomandDadgotmeheadphones!”Isaidandsmiled.AndIpulledtheheadphonesoutofthebox,wantingtoputthemon.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Justthen,mysistershouted,“Quick!Wrapitbackup!Mom'scominghome!”Mymothercameintothefrontroom,andIjumpedupandsaid,“Hi.Mom!”Mainidea:ItwasChristmasEve.MysisterandIwereeagertofindoutthepresentsundertheChristmastreebeforeMomcamebackfromwork.AfterSistersatisfiedhercuriosity,itwasmyturn.Iwasabouttoputontheheadphones.情节续写：第一段--

我正要戴上耳机，蒂娜大喊妈妈要来了。我把耳机塞进盒子里，把它塞进树下！我姐姐一边跑一边喊着要拖住我妈妈。我刚把盒子埋好，妈妈就走进了房间。

第二段--

第二天早上，蒂娜和我假装什么都没发生过，拆开了礼物。然而我们并没有玩得很开心。不管怎样，我们再也没有提前拆开圣诞礼物了。下水作文：语言风格与原文一致，从句与非谓语动词错落有致。故事情节与原文吻合。Justthen,mysistershouted,“Quick!Wrapitbackup!Mom’scominghome!”

Hearing

this,Ipromptlyslippedtheheadphonesintothebox

whilemyheartwasbeatingwildly

and

mypalmsweresweating.

Sincethereweretwomoreboxes

tobewrappedup,

mysisterdashed

tolend

meahand.

Withhustleandbustle,weputallthepresentsbackto

wheretheywere.Thenmysistertoldme

tohurry

tothefrontroom,

take

abookand

pretend

toread(三连动）.SoIdid,

sitting

onthecarpet,

listening

toMom’sfootsteps

drawing

near.84W.Mymothercameintothefrontroom,andIjumpedupandsaid,“Hi.Mom!”

“Hi,dear!Howistheday?”

“Fine.”

Toavoid

Mom

looking

intomyeyes,Ihurriedtothekitchen

tofetch

heraglassofwater.Meanwhile,Sisteroffered

toprepare

dinners.

Sensing

somethingunusual,Momsignaledusto

tositdownandasked

whatwasup.

Silenceenvelopedtheroomforawhile.

ThenwetoldMomthetruth.Insteadof

beingblamed,weweretoldthat

beingpatient

countedmorethan

knowing

theresultsinadvance

andthat

thejoyofChristmasshouldbesharedbyfamilymemberstogether.

90W学生作文修改：修改：...SoanxiouswasI

thatcouldhardlywrapthepresentsbackup.I

reluctantly/unwilling

putthe

fantastic

headphonesbacktothebox.

Seeing

me

hesitating,mysister

roared

again,

“Hurryup!Thereishardlyanytime

left

forus!”

Shocked

and

frightened,Iimmediatelytriedhard

towrap

uptheboxesand

put

them

wheretheywere.

Aseverythingwasdone,we

rushed

intothefrontroom

beforemymotheropeneditsdoor.73W(4个从句，4个高级词汇，7个非谓语动词)...Having

aglimpseattheChristmastree,motherjustgazedatme,

saying

nothing.

Ifeltthebutterfliesinmystomach.Thenmysister

brokethesilence.

“Hi,Mom.Areyou

tiredfrom

work?”

Mother

sighed.

“Haveyouunwrappedsomeofthegiftsunderthetree?”

Lowering

ourhead,weadmittedthetruthandapologizedtomomina

trembling

voice.Tooursurprise,motherforgaveusinsteadof

blaming

us.

Subsequently,westartedourChristmaspartyandhadawonderfulChristmaseve.Thenextday,wegotthepresents

thatwehadbeenhopingfor.96W

(1个从句，6个高级词语，5个非谓语动词)范文:Justthen,mysistershouted,"Quick!Wrapitbackup!Mom'scominghome!"PanicsurgedthroughmyveinsasIfumbledtogatherthetornwrappingpaperandhastilyconcealthegift.Myheartraced,theadrenalinepumpingasIdesperatelytriedtorestorethepackagetoitsoriginalstate.Thesecondstickedbylikeaneternity,eachpassingmomentintensifyingmyfearofbeingcaught.Withtremblinghands,Ismoothedoutthecreasesandcarefullysecuredtheends,prayingthatmyfranticeffortswouldgounnoticed.Mymothercameintothefrontroom,andIjumpedupandsaid,"Hi,Mom!"Itriedtoactnonchalant,myheartstillpoundingfromtheclosecall.Awaveofreliefwashedovermeashereyesdartedpastthehastilywrappedgift,oblivioustothechaosthathadunfoldedmomentsbefore.Iexhaledasilentbreathofgratitude,gratefulthatour