【核心知识精讲+能力提升拓展】高考英语读后续写友情故事类+旅程中结下的深厚友谊课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习友情故事——旅程中结下的深厚友谊1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ItwasaJanuaryafternoon.Mywife,SavitriandIsatontheSahyadriExpress.Asthetrainpulledoutofthestation,wecouldbarelyhideourexcitement.WewerefinallyonthewaytoahoneymoontoMatheran!Thiswasthefirsttimewehadenoughsavingstogoonatriptogether.ThetrainstoppedatNeral,wherewewereforcedoutofourreverie(白日梦).Aswesteppedoutandstartedmakinginquiries,werealizeditwasunlikelythatwewouldfindatraintotakeustothemistyhillstationwehadbeendreamingofformonths.Theafternoongraduallysettledintoapinkduskaswesatinacorneratthestation,waitingfornewsofthetrainservicesasthecoldwinterbreezerattled(使紧张)ourbones.Weunwrappedsomebiscuitswhenalittlegirl,nomorethanfiveorsix,wentpastus,screaming,“ButIwantfood!Iamhungry!”Savitri'seyesturnedtothegirl’sfamily.Smiling,shecalledout-hernamewasMehrunisa，weoverheard-andaskedhertoseekherparent’spermissiontoacceptbiscuitsfromus.Leftwithnooption,herfamilyaccepted,Andwebeganchatting.4续写原文Afterseveralhours,thetrainfinallyarrived.Weenteredalongside.Astheshortuphilljourneyprogressed,SavitriandIsoftlydiscussedourtrouble.ItseemedunlikelythatourreservationatRagdiHotelwouldstillbeheld.Asthetrainarrivedandwerosetobidthefamilygoodbye,Mehrunisa’sfather,Viraaz,suggestedthathewouldaccompanyustomakesurethatwehadaplacetospendthenight.Hehadoverheardouranxiousexchange.HisfamilyheadedtotheirguesthouseandViraazcamewithustolookforahotel.Tonoone’ssurprise,RagdiHotelwaspackedwithpeople.Themanagerofferedassistancebyplacingafewbedsinthecoalstorageroombutthecoldmadeituninhabitable.Agradualdread(恐惧)startedtoappearinmymind.5段首句Para1:Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.Para2:Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以乘坐火车旅行为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子一起乘坐火车去度蜜月，在火车上因为让一个女孩吃饼干结识了Viraaz一家，到达目的地之后，由于当地宾馆已满，无处可住，作者和妻子在Viraaz家的客房度过一夜，并从此结下深厚的友谊的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.由第一段首句内容“察觉到我们的无助，Viraaz提出让我们在他们的住处过夜。”可知，第一段可描写Viraaz一家慷慨积极地为作者两口提供居住服务。10续写思路分析Para2:Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.由第二段首句内容“从那以后，我们的友谊延续了几十年。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Viraaz一家的友好往来。11续写思路分析续写线索积极不知疲倦地——干活准备——感谢——友谊发展——快乐——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.干活：work/labour②.聚会：gottogether/meeteachother情绪类①.积极不知疲倦地：positiveattitude/positively/tirelessly②.快乐：behappy/feeljoyful13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Uponourarrival,Viraaz’sfamilyworkedtirelesslywithsuppliestomakeusfeelathome—foodwasquicklyheatedandsharedandblanketsbroughtoutforus.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)[高分句型2].Itwasquiteawonderthatthisrichfriendshipbetweenfamiliesstartedwithjustahalf-eatenpacketofbiscuitsatatrainstation.(that引导的主语从句，it作形式主语)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Sensingourhelplessness,Viraazofferedtoputusupintheiraccommodationforthenight.“It’llbecrowdedandsmallbutIhopeyouwon’tmind,”hesaid.Iwassurprisedathisgenerosity.Necessityforcedustoagreeandwesetoffbyfoottowardstheguesthouse.Uponourarrival,Viraaz’sfamilyworkedtirelesslywithsuppliestomakeusfeelathome—foodwasquicklyheatedandsharedandblanketsbroughtoutforus.Theguesthousewasfilledtothreetimesitsusualcapacity,buteveryonemanaged.16范文呈现Ourfriendshiphassincecontinuedfordecades.Wephonedeachother,traveledtogetherseveraltimesandgottogetherregularly.ViraazevencametolivewithusinAhmedabadwhenheshiftedtothecity.Wefrequentlywentfishingtogetherontheweekend.Itwasquiteawonderthatthisrichfriendshipbetweenfamiliesstartedwithjustahalf-eatenpacketofbiscuitsatatrainstation.We’vebeenhappyaboutit.17范文译文维拉兹感觉到我们的无助，主动提出让我们在他们的住处过夜。他说：“这里会很拥挤，很小，但我希望你不要介意。”。我对他的慷慨感到惊讶。迫不得已，我们同意了，于是步行前往宾馆。我们抵达后，维拉兹的家人不知疲倦地为我们提供物资，让我们有宾至如归的感觉——食物很快就被加热和分享，毯子也被拿来给我们。宾馆的客流量是平时的三倍，但每个人都能应付。18范文译文