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Unit2
MoralsandVirtues
SectionⅦ
ReadingforWriting——故事评论本单元的写作项目是阅读一篇关于道德品质的故事,写一篇有关道德品质故事的评论。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningafablebeforewritingTHESTONEINTHEROADOnceuponatimetherewasakingwhooftenthought,“Nothinggoodcancometoanationwhosepeopleonlycomplainandexpectotherstosolvetheirproblems.”Oneday,hehadanidea.Earlyonemorning,thekingdisguisedhimselfandwenttoalocalvillage.Heplacedalargestoneinthemiddleofthemainstreetandhidgoldcoinsunderthestone.Thenhehidbehindahugemapletreeandwatched.Thefirstpersondownthestreetwasamilkmanwithhiscart.Hecrashedintothestone,spillingthemilkeverywhere.“Whatfoolputthisstonehere?”heshouted.Hepickedhimselfupandangrilywentaway.Afterawhile,agroupofwomencamealong,eachbalancingapotofwateronherhead.Onewomantrippedoverthestoneandherwaterpotwentcrashingtotheground.Shepickedherselfupandlimpedawayintears.Neithershenorherfriendsthoughtaboutmovingthestoneoutoftheroad.Thekingwatchedalldayasmanypeoplecomplainedaboutthestonebuthefoundnobodymakinganattempttomoveit.Thekingwasindespair.“Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighboursfromharm?”Justthen,thekingsawayounggirlcomingalong.Shewasthedaughterofalocalfarmer.Shehadbeenworkingalldayandwasverytired.Butwhenshesawthestone,shesaidtoherself,“Thisstoneisadangertoanyonewhocomesdownthestreetafterdark.I’llmoveitoutoftheway.”Thegirlpushedthestonewithallhermight.Afteragreatdealofeffort,shefinallysucceededinmovingittothesideofthestreet.Imaginehersurprisewhenshesawthegoldcoinswherethestonehadbeen!Justthen,thekingsteppedoutfrombehindthetree.“Ohsir,”thegirlsaid,“doesthisgoldbelongtoyou?Ifnot,wesurelymustfindtheowner,forhewillcertainlymissit.”Thekingsaid,“Mydear,thegoldismine.Iputitintheroadandmovedthestoneoverit.Nowthegoldisyours,becauseyouaretheonlypersonwhohaslearntthelessonIwantedtoteachmypeople.”文章要点Person:milkmanExperience:crashedintothestoneEmotion:angryResponse:wentawayPerson:womanwithwaterExperience:trippedoverthestoneEmotion:intearsResponse:limpedawayPerson:othervillagersExperience:justcomplainedaboutthestoneTheking’semotion:indespairPerson:younggirlEmotion:worriedResponse:movethestoneoutofthewayExperience:sawthegoldcoinsEmotion:surprisedPerson:kingandgirlExperience:thekinggavethegoldtothegirlPurpose:teachvillagersalesson(Ⅱ)Preparation—Answerthefollowingquestionsbeforewriting.1.Whatisthetitleofthestory?2.Whatkindofstoryisit?3.Whatisthemainideaofthestory?4.Whatistheauthor’spurpose?5.Werethedetailsofthestoryclear?6.Doyouthinkthestoryachieveditspurpose?7.Whatdidyoulikeaboutthestory?8.Whatdidyounotlikeaboutthestory?9.Wouldyourecommendthisstorytoothers?Ⅱ.While-writingStep1
Listtheoutlineforwritingareviewofthefable.Paragraph1:________________________________Paragraph2:________________________________Paragraph3:________________________________BasicinformationaboutthestoryYouranalysisofthestoryYouropinionaboutthestoryStep2
Listthewords,phrasesandsentences1.Wordsandphrases①____________v.加标题;给……取名②____________n.目的③____________遇到,碰到
④____________采取行动⑤____________处理
titlepurposemeetwithtakeactiondealwith⑥________________在我们的日常生活中⑦____________向某人学习
⑧________________关心他人⑨________________自私的村民
⑩______________________有意义和有用的inourdailylifelearnfromcareforothersselfishvillagersmeaningfulandhelpful2.Sentences①故事讲的是一个国王想要给村民们一个教训,他把金子藏在了大街上的石头下。(who,bydoing)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②这个故事的目的是告诉我们,当遇到问题时,我们不应该抱怨和期待别人来解决它们。(whendoing,todo...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itisaboutakingwhowantedtoteachvillagersalessonbyhidinggoldunderthestoneinthestreet.Thestory’spurposeistotellusthatwhenmeetingwithproblemsweshouldnotcomplainandexpectotherstosolvethem.③事实上,我们应该做的是立即采取行动来处理我们日常生活中的问题。(主语从句,todo...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________④更重要的是,我们应该学习故事中无私的女孩总是关心别人,而不是学习其他自私的村民。(doing,ratherthan)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Infact,whatweshoulddoistotakeactionatoncetodealwithourproblemsinourdailylife.Moreimportantly,weshouldlearnfromtheselflessgirlalwayscaringforothersinthestoryratherthanotherselfishvillagers.Step3
Draftthepassagebyusingthefollowingwords.infact,moreimportantly,ratherthan,and,rememberThefabletitled“Thestoneintheroad”isamoralstory.Itisaboutakingwhowantedtoteachvillagersalessonbyhidinggoldunderthestoneinthestreet.Thestory’spurposeistotellusthatwhenmeetingwithproblemsweshouldnotcomplainandexpectotherstosolvethem.Infact,whatweshoulddoistotakeactionatoncetodealwithourproblemsinourdailylife.Moreimportantly,weshouldlearnfromtheselflessgirlalwayscaringforothersinthestoryratherthanotherselfishvillagers.IlikethestoryverymuchandIthinkitisverymeaningfulandhelpfultous.Remember:onegoodturndeservesanother.IwillrecommendthisstorytoasmanypeopleasIcan.Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartnerandpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewritergiveashortdescriptionofthestory?□2.Doesthedescriptionincludethemostimportantdetailsofthestory?□3.Doesthewritergivehisopinionaboutthecharactersortheiractions?□4.Isthereviewwell-organised?□5.Doesthewriterusethe-ingformastheadverbialinthereview?□6.Arethereanygrammar,spelling,orpunctuationerrors?亮点表达1.Thefabletellsusthatonegoodturndeservesanother.
这则寓言告诉我们,善有善报。2.WheneverIhavetheabilitytohelpothers,Ishouldalwayslendahand.
每当我能帮助别人的时候,我应该总是伸出援助之手。3.Afterreadingit,Iunderstandthatweteenagersshouldfindandmakegooduseofouradvantages,stoppingcomplainingtheshortcomingsallthetime.
读了这个故事之后,我明白了我们青少年应该发现和利用我们的优势,不要总是抱怨自己的缺点。4.Soweshould
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