高三英语一轮复习投稿类应用文写作讲义：How+would+use+your+smartphone

试题呈现：学校英文报正在开展以“Howwouldyouuseyoursmartphone?”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

46%75%18%30%玩游戏看视频联系他人学习1.调查结果的描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数

80

左右；

2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

Howwouldyouusethesmartphone?

慎审题，开好局审文体:应用文审话题：信息技术审格式:调查报告类审要点:使用图表中的调查结果写一篇投稿审人称:第一、二人称为主时态:以一般现在时主题语境：人与自我之健康生活2.巧谋篇，拟提纲根据提示，考生写作时可分三段进行第一段(导入段)描述调查结果第二段(主体段):简单的评论第三段(结尾段):对调查结果给出自己的建议提笔写，不留白组词成句:根据汉语提示，将括号中的英语短语组成对应的句子。从条形图中可以看出，高达75%的学生使用手机观看视频。(thebarchart,watchvideos）Fromthebarchart,upto75%ofthestudentsusetheirphonestowatchvideos.(2)46%的学生倾向于用手机玩网络游戏(tendto,onlinegames)46%ofthestudentstendtoplayonlinegamesontheirphones.(3)30%的学生可以积极使用手机里的学习软件学习。(positively,learningapps)30%ofthestudentscouldpositivelystudybyusingthelearningappsintheirphones.使用手机联系他人的比例仅占18%。(proportion,contact)Theproportionofusingphonesforcontactingothersisjust18%.这不仅浪费他们的时间，而且危害他们的健康。(notonly.......butalso,doharmto)Thisnotonlywastetheirtimebutalsocauseharmtotheirhealth.我认为手机只是为我们的生活和学习服务的工具。(inmyopinion,serve)Inmyopinion,phonesarejusttoolsthatserveourlifeandstudy.(9)我建议青少年应理性使用手机，如使用手机来提高学习成绩和开阔视野(recommend,reasonably,forexample/enhanceacademicperformancebroadenhorizons)Irecommendthatteenagersshouldusethephonereasonably,forinstance,usingittoenhanceacademicperformanceandbroadenhorizons.(10)家长应该控制学生的手机时间并多鼓励他们参加户外活动。这有助于防止他们沉迷于手机。(control，outdooractivitiesprevent......(from)doing,beaddictedto)Parentsshouldcontrolstudents'phonetimeandencouragethemtotakepartinoutdooractivities.Thiscanhelptopreventthemfrombecomingaddictedtosmartphones.合并句，巧升级句子改写:根据所给英语原句改写句子注意保持句意不变。用as和who引导定语从句和高级词汇percentage及ashighas升级句Aswecanseefromthebarchart,thepercentageofthestudentswhousetheirphonestowatchvideosisashighas75.用现在分词短语accountingfor,过去分词followed做状语升级并合并句(2)和句(3)Nearlyhalfofthestudentstendtoplayonlinegamesontheirphones,accountingfor46%.followedby30%%ofthestudentswhocouldpositivelystudybyusingthelearningappsintheirphones.3.用过去分词在定语和主语从句升级句(5)Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthechart,whatcanberevealedisthatthemajorityofstudentsusetheirphonesmoreforentertainmentthanforcommunicationoreducation.4.巧用高级词汇considerable.behookedon和非限制性定语从句升级合并句(6)和(7)Itcanbeinferredthataconsiderablenumberofstudentsoveruseorarehookedontheirphones,whichnotonlywastetheirtimebutalsodoharmtotheirhealth.巧用高级词汇participatein,forthesakeof升级句(10)Parentsshouldcontrolstudents'phonetimeandencouragethemtoparticipateinoutdooractivitiesforthesakeofpreventingthemfrombecomingaddictedtosmartphones.参考范文：Howdoyouuseasmartphone?Arecentsurveywasconductedonhowstudentsusesmartphones.Fromthebarchart,itcanbeseenthatasmanyas75%ofstudentsusetheirphonestowatchvideos.Nearlyhalfofthestudentstendtoplayonlinegamesontheirphones,accountingfor46%,followedby30%whoareabletoactivelylearnthroughtheuseoflearningappsontheirphones.Theproportionofusingmobilephonestocontactothersisonly18%.Thenumbersgiveninthechartrevealthatmoststudentsusetheirphonesmoreforentertainmentthanforcommunicationoreducation.Therefore,itcanbeinferredthataconsiderablenumberofstudentsexcessivelyuseorbecomeaddictedtomobilephones,whichnotonlywastestimeAnditisharmfultotheirhealth.Inmyopinion,mobilephonesareonlytoolsthatserveourlivesandstudies.Therefore,itisrecommendedthatteenagersshouldusemobilephonesrationally,suchasusingthemtoimproveacademicperformanceandbroadentheirhorizons.Inaddition,parentsshouldcontrolstudents'mobilephonetimetopreventthemfrombecomingtooaddictedtosmartphones.点评：本篇范文要点齐全，段落分明，符合调查报告的常