读后续写遇险类-水中救人+讲义 高三英语作文复习写作专项

【例文赏析：水中救人】

Lungsnearly

bursting,I

struggledtolift

myheadoutofthewater.

Inchbyinch,my

tired

bodyreachedfortheendofthepool.Theextentofmyswimmingcareerwaspurelyrecreational,whilethecompetitiveswimmersnearbythoughtnothingoftheseeminglysimpletaskofa500-meterswimtest.PushingmyselftofinishwhatIhadstarted,Icouldonlythink:

whynottaketheeasywayout?Earlierthatweek,Ihadturnedinmyfirstjobapplicationatalocalpool.

Overqualified,Iwashiredonthespot.However,thetaskswereboring:helpingconfusedvisitorsandmeasuringtheheightofchildrenbeforetheywentdowntheslide,thosesortsofthings.Iwascapableofmore.Soaswimtestwasrequired,establishingthemerefactthatIwasnotcompletelyhelplessinapool.Midwaythrough,themanageradministeringthetestremarked,“Thislooksreallyeasyforyou.Whyaren'tyouapplyingtobecomeaguard?"“Thethoughthadn'tcrossedmymind."“Well,lifeguardingdemandsmoreresponsibility,strengthandrespect.Thusthepositionpays$2moreperhour.Yourswimmingskillsarestrongenough.Allyouneedtodoiscompleteacertificationclass.”InsideIwasunsureofmyself,

buthiswordsinspiredme-Youneverknowwhatyouarecapableofuntilyouforceyourselftodoit.

SoonIpassedtheswimtest.Allleftwastopracticeandlearn

firstaid,CPR(心肺复苏），andproceduresfordifferentlandandwater-basedemergencies.Workstartedsoon.Awell-intentionedyetanxiousfeelinginmesoonpassed.

Days,weeks,andmonthswentbywithoutincident;emergencieswererare.TheskillsandtrainingIhadsocarefullystudiedandacquiredseemedunnecessary.Todayappearedtobeanotheruneventful

day.However,shortlyaftertheotherguardssignaledtothechildrentoexitthepool,Inoticedoneboywasstillinthemiddlewhiletheothershadclimbedup.Para1.“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.________________________________________Para2.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.________________________________________信息整理：Who-I(guard),boy,otherguards，when--workday，what---aboywasdrowningandIsavedhim，where--pond，why--outofresponsibility，how--myswimmingabilityandCPRskills；【MainIdea】Thisarticletakescharactersascluesandmainlytellsthestoryofanauthorwhoisgoodatswimming.Hefoundajobataswimmingpool,buteverydayheonlysolvessomeconfusionforothersormeasurestheheightofachild,whichhefindsveryboring.Thenhetookthequalificationexamandbecamealifeguard,buteverydayhewassafeandsound.解题思路：应聘为救生员--------通过急救考核-------Climax(男孩溺水，挣扎，失去意识;我紧张后平静开始下水施救)------我分秒必争实施心肺复苏-------男孩吐水，回复意识-------男孩被救，表示感谢------我获得职业成就感。Paragraphcontinuation:①Fromthefirstsentenceofthefirstparagraph,"Ithink,'Somethingmusthavehappenedtohim.'"Itcanbeseenthatthefirstparagraphdescribestheauthorgoingtoseewhathappenedspecifically.②Accordingtothefirstsentenceofthesecondparagraph,"Placetheboyonthefloor,putmyeartohismouth,andplacemyfingeronhisneck."Itcanbeseenthatthesecondparagraphdescribesthesituationaftertheauthorpullstheboyoutoftheswimmingpool.参考答案：Apossibleversion“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.Asexpected,uponcloserinspection,Ifoundtheboydesperatelywavinghishands.Iquicklyjumpedintothewaterandswamtowardstheboyatfullspeed.WhenIfoundhim,hehadalreadysunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfearandworry.Ipickeduptheboyandwalkedtowardsthepool,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Icanseethathedoesn'thaveaheartbeatorbreath.Everysecondcounts!Ididnothesitatetogivehimfirstaid,gavehimmouthtomouthbreathing,andperformedcardiopulmonaryresuscitationaccordingtothetraining.TheotherguardswatchedanxiouslyasIcontinuedon,sweatingprofusely.Suddenly,astreamofwatergushedoutofhismouth,causingtheboytocoughviolently.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,everyonearoundhimcheered.Exhausted,Ibreathedasighofrelief.IthinkifIacceptedthatrelaxedposition,Iwouldonlybeabystander.I'mgladIdidn'ttakeashortcut.下水文：“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.Asitturnedout,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishandsandstrugglinginthewaterdesperately.Withoutasecondthought,Idivedintothewater,swimmingtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadnearlysunktothebottomofthepool,hisfacepaleandhisheadhangingdown,whichthrewmeintogreatconcernandhugepanic.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolsidewithallmystrength,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Itcameasashocktomethathewasn’tbreathing.Tomakemattersworse,Icouldhardlyfeelhisheartbeat.Everysecondcounted!WithouttheslightesthesitationIdidfirstaidtohim,givinghimmouth-to-mouthbreathinganddoingCPRasIhadbeentrainedbefore.Afterwhatseemedacentury,Isuddenlyfelthisbodymoved,